Kalank (Blemish) Subhan-Ibadat,Atharv Cheeni(Mannat)SS - Page 5

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There's a mistake, Ghazal wasn't obsessed with Atharv but Haider. Ibadat accepting Haider Dua as parents was lovely. Loved the dance and song. Everyone heard them. Finally Ibadat confessed. Perfect pics, waiting for next

part 3 and 4

I wonder what will happen with Mannat now? Will Subhan still marry her?

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Part 7

Staggering update.... finely written

Part 8

Warm and so Fantastic Update

Finally the family became one

Thanks a lot. Did you miss chapter7?

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 8

Warm and so Fantastic Update

Finally the family became one

Kalank(Blemish) Part 9

Subhan:Ibadat,God himself brought you near me,because he knows that I can't live without seeing you.

But your negligence is killing me.

Ibadat:Subhan,why don't you understand that it's a sin?You belong to Mannat bhabhi.

Subhan was hit by the reality.

Subhan:I know that.But can't we be atleast friends?Why are you breaking it?

Ibadat:Okay.We will remain as friends.Happy?

Subhan:Yes.But for one last time tell me the truth Ibadat.Don't you feel for me?Don't your heart beat for me?

Ibadat's heart pained.

Subhan:Why are you silent Ibadat?Say the truth.

Tears dwelled up in her eyes.

Ibadat:Yes,I also love you Subhan.But it's kalank.I can't break my brother and sister in law by loving you.

Subhan's eyes became wet:This is not Kalank,it's pure love.

They looked at each other tearfully.

To their shock Atharv,Mannat,Kaynaat,Haider and Dua were watching them.

Atharv:What are we seeing?Subhan..you are supposed to marry Mannat.

Subhan:Mannat is your wife Atharv.I have no right on her.When you both are husband and wife,I am single.

Atharv:Subhan!

Mannat:He is saying the truth Atharv.I have not given him any right and I will never give him.

Atharv was stunned.

Atharv:But he can't trouble my sister like this.He was forcing her and that's why she said that she loves him.Right?

Ibadat:He has not troubled me bhai.You are misunderstanding him.

Haider:Whatever,you say the truth Subhan.I don't want any complications in relationships.

Dua:Yes,we need to know the truth.

Kaynaat was nervous.

Kaynaat:Subhan...Ibadat...what is this?

Subhan:Unknowingly I fell in love with Ibadat.

All were shocked.

Dua:And you Ibadat?Tell the truth to your mother beta.

Ibadat replied painfully:I have no such feelings towards him.

Subhan got hurt.

Dua:Are you sure?

Subhan:She is lying.She is hiding her love because of the restrictions.Since I am engaged to Mannat,she is suppressing her feelings.She thinks that our love is wrong.

Everyone became upset.

Haider:Is it true Ibadat?Don't lie to your father.

Ibadat was silent.She was not able to look at his face.

Atharv asked Ibadat painfully:Ibadat...are you hiding your feelings and lying thinking that my heart will break?Whatever it is..you say Ibadat.

Ibadat could not reply.

Mannat:Her silence proves it Atharv.Ibadat...you maybe guilty about snatching my fiance from me.So you think that your feelings for Subhaan is Kalank.But actually my relationship with Subhan is a Kalank as I am a married lady and your love for Subhan is pure.And I am not at all sad about you loving Subhan.Because I have never loved him nor I will ever love him.I belong only to Atharv.

Ibadat looked at Mannat in disbelief.

Mannat looked at Atharv:Yes Atharv.This is the right thing.

Atharv became upset.

Dua:Atharv beta...forcefully getting your wife married to Subhan is the wrong thing.If Subhan and Ibadat love each other it's natural and right.

Atharv's eyes got filled up with tears.

Atharv:My decision made many people upset.I did'nt know it.I did'nt want it.I just wanted others to be happy after I go.

Mannat:I will not let you go anywhere.That's why I am giving you the best medical treatment.You have to live for me Atharv.

Atharv looked at her emotionally.

Kaynaat thought:What is happening in my son's life?I can't understand anything.

Subhan told Ibadat:Ibadat...atleast now you tell me what you feel for me.

Haider:Yes Ibadat.He is longing for your answer.Yes or no..whatever the answer is..you tell him.Otherwise he will be always restless.

Dua:Yes Ibadat.We support you.

Atharv:I want you to be happy Ibadat.I don't want to separate lovers as I am a person who fears about getting separated from my wife.

Ibadat was relieved that she got approval from everyone to love Subhan.

Ibadat looked at Subhan.

Ibadat:Yes Subhan...I love you.

Subhan smiled happily.

Subhan held her hand and asked her:Will you marry me Ibadat?

Ibadat smiled:Yes Subhan.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

All were very happy.

Kaynaat also became happy.

She thought:Even if Subhan marries Ibadat our present life style won't change as Ibadat is the daughter of rich parents.

Ibadat visited Ghazal and told her everything.

Ghazal:I am so happy for you Ibadat.I am happy that you won't lead a single life like me.You won your love.I am just waiting for your wedding now.

Ibadat:But I will be happy only if you get married to Darshji.

Ghazal was stunned:Ibadat!

Ibadat:Why not Ammi?

Ghazal:I don't deserve him.He is too good for me.I have done so many mistakes in my life.I hurt Haider and Dua very much for my selfishness.

Ibadat:I don't know about that.But he wants only you.Once you hurt Abbu.Now you are hurting Darshji.Is this right Ammi?

Ghazal became sad.

Ibadat:Don't drive away the right person Ammi.

Ghazal became emotional.

Darsh visited Ghazal surprising her.

Ghazal:Darsh!You will drink Coffee?

Darsh:No.I just came here to inform you that I am leaving this place.

Ghazal was shocked.

Ghazal:Why are you leaving this place?

Darsh:Because I have no one here.I realized it late.

She smiled slightly.

Ghazal:Okay.You go.But won't you take me with you?

Darsh looked at Ghazal unbelievably:What?

Ghazal:I cannot stay here without seeing you.So will you take me with you?

Darsh smiled emotionally and nodded.

He cupped her face softly in his palms and they shared a romantic eye lock.

Darsh-Ghazal got married.

Ibadat was very happy.

Her eyes were full of tears which did not go unnoticed by Subhan.

Subhan:Why are you crying Ibadat?

Ibadat:These are tears of happiness.I was sad about Ammi's lonely life.I am happy that finally she found her soulmate.

Subhan wiped her tears and said:Whether the tears are formed by happiness or pain,tears do not suit you.

She smiled.

Subhan and Ibadat got married.

Mannat asked Atharv:Atharv,will you marry me again?

Atharv was stunned:Mannat!

Mannat:Mannat cannot be anybody else's.She belongs only to Atharv.In between I got engaged to someone and I felt disgusting.Now I want to remove that disgust from my mind by marrying you again.Marry me Atharv.Don't think of getting me married to someone else.

Atharv became emotional.

Atharv:Yes Mannat,I will marry you.

She smiled emotionally.

Atharv-Mannat got married and embraced each other emotionally.

Haider-Dua,Darsh-Ghazal,Atharv-Mannat enjoyed Subhan-Ibadat's wedding party by dancing along with the newly wed couple Subhan and Ibadat.

Billori nigaahon se kare hai sau ishaare
Khidki ke neeche naaspeeta seeti maare

Billori nigaahon se kare hai sau ishaare
Khidki ke neeche naaspeeta seeti maare

Ishq mein hua hai thoda andha thoda behra
Saiyan mera aira gaira nathukhaira

Phool sa chehra Irani
Aur leheza Hindustani
Jheel si teri aankhon mein
Ek halchal hai toofaani

Dekh mehfil mein aaye hain
Jaan ki dene kurbaani
Ek mehbooba ki khaatir
Aag do do dilbar jaani

Jinke dil ke engine tere
'Tation pe hai thehra
Ho.. jinke dil ke engine tere
'Tation pe hai thehra
Samjhe kaahe aira gaira natthu khaira

Saiyan mera aira gaira nathukhaira

Billori nigaahon se kare hai sau ishaare

Khidki ke neeche naaspeeta seeti maare
Ishq mein hua hai andha thoda behra
Saiyan mera.. saiyan mera..
Saiyan mera aira gaira natthu khaira

Samjhe kaahe, aira gaira natthu khaira (Kalank).

After some days,Mannat declared something which surprised everyone.

Mannat:The doctor assured that Atharv will be cured completely if I take him to the American hospital suggested by him.So Atharv and I are going to America.

Atharv:I am sad to leave this place.But I want to live for Mannat who loves only me.So I agreed to go to America.

All were happy and hopeful about Atharv's good health.

Dua said emotionally:Go and come back soon with a happy news that you are completely cured Atharv.

Atharv:Yes,I promise that I will come back with a bang.

Everyone smiled.

Atharv and Mannat left for America.

After some years....

Atharv and Mannat are living happily with their daughter Karishma.Atharv is cancer free and healthy now.

Subhan and Ibadat are living happily with their daughter Kajal.

(Thank u so much for the lovely edit Salley).

Darsh and Ghazal adopted a little girl and named her Vini.They are leading a happy life with Vini.

The end

Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

Good that Ibadat finally confessed, it's funny how Kaynaat is happy just because Ibadat is daughter of rich people. Ibadat advising Ghazal was nice. Happy that Darsh and Ghazal got married. Subhan Ibadat also got married. Happy that Atharv and Mannat will also get married that too again. Dance edit of Haider and Dua is so cute and natural. Finally Atharv will be cured. Mannat and Atharv daughter is so cute. Now Ibadat has a sister too haha. Perfect pics. Favorite couple is Atharv and Cheeni. Favorite character is Mannat as she didn't give up on Atharv. Favorite scene is Dua wanting Ibadat in their family. How do you write ffs so fast?

Thank you very much.

I am surprised that you wrote Cheeni as in this ss her name is Mannat.Why did you write Cheeni?I am also surprised that your favourite pair in this ss is Atharv Mannat though you are more familiar with rabb se couples..Could you please tell me the reason?

I don't write ffs fast.But whenever i get time I write.So I have many extra chapters to post.So when I get enough comments I post the next chapter.

Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: salley145

Good that Ibadat finally confessed, it's funny how Kaynaat is happy just because Ibadat is daughter of rich people. Ibadat advising Ghazal was nice. Happy that Darsh and Ghazal got married. Subhan Ibadat also got married. Happy that Atharv and Mannat will also get married that too again. Dance edit of Haider and Dua is so cute and natural. Finally Atharv will be cured. Mannat and Atharv daughter is so cute. Now Ibadat has a sister too haha. Perfect pics. Favorite couple is Atharv and Cheeni. Favorite character is Mannat as she didn't give up on Atharv. Favorite scene is Dua wanting Ibadat in their family. How do you write ffs so fast?

You have also written Atharv Cheeni in the ff name and Mannat is in brackets. Reason for Mannat Atharv being my favorite pair is that both can do anything for each other's happiness, Mannat even got engaged to Subhan for his happiness, she convinced Ibadat also to join their family,