Our daughter's Nanny TS Subhan Mannat Raunaq Muskaan/Ibadat

Our daughter's Nanny Part 1

Thank you very much Salley for the cover page.

A newly married couple is seen.The bride looked sad.

Subhan:Mannat,we just got married.But you look sad.

Mannat:I am sad because my dad didn't accept us.He did not even attend our wedding.I feel alone.

Subhan wiped her tears and cupped her face in his hands.

Subhan:You are not alone Mannat.I am with you.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

After 3 years....

Subhan reached home.Mannat ran towards him happily.

Mannat:Subhan,did you collect my report from the hospital?I am pregnant.Right?

Subhan was silent.

Mannat embraced him.

Mannat:I am so happy Subhan.Finally our dream to be parents is going to happen.

Subhan was still quiet.

Mannat:Subhan,why are you not saying anything?

She noticed his gloomy face.

Mannat:Why are you upset?Am I not pregnant?

Subhan:Mannat....the report is negative.You are not pregnant.

Mannat was broken completely.

She embraced Subhan from behind crying.

Mannat:All my hopes are shattered.We underwent treatment.Still I am not pregnant.

Subhan:Please don't be upset Mannat.We still can be parents. We can adopt a child.

Mannat looked at him in disbelief.

Mannat:Subhan!But your mother....

Subhan:I don't care what she says.We are going to adopt a child.That's all.

They embraced each other emotionally.

Subhan's mother Kaynaat created a big mess.

Kaynaat:I will not accept any illegitimate child as my grandchild.

Subhan:It's pathetic that you are talking like this about an innocent child.If you agree or not,I will adopt a child.

Kaynaat:If you want a child,you marry again and have a child with her.

Subhan was shocked while Mannat was shattered.

Subhan:Are you not ashamed to ask me to Marr again to have a child?What if I don't get a child from my 2nd marriage also?I love Mannat and I cannot think of marrying anyone else.You understand that Ammi.

Mannat smiled emotionally while Kaynaat was burning with anger.

Subhan and Mannat adopted a little girl.They named her Ayesha.They started leading a happy life.

In another house...

A young girl was shouting at her father.

She was Ibadat.

Ibadat:Dad,how could you throw my daughter in an orphanage like a garbage?

Her dad Nihaal said:Because it is an illegitimate child who will harm your reputation.

Ibadat:For a mother,her child is not illegitimate dad.My daughter is more important than my reputation.I am going to the orphanage to get my daughter back.She is my gift from my lover.

Nihaal:But your lover is in coma after the accident.He is like a living dead.

Ibadat:But one day he will return to life.I have faith in God.

Nihaal became dull.

Ibadat was disappointed to know that her daughter has been adopted by a couple.She enquired about the couple who adopted her daughter and reached Subhan's home.

Ibadat became emotional seeing the baby in Mannat's hands.

Mannat:I am sorry,I am not able to recognize you.

Suddenly Ibadat took the baby from Mannat and started kissing it.Subhan and Mannat felt weird.

Mannat:What are you doing?

Ibadat:She is my daughter.I gave birth to her.I came here to get her back.

Subhan and Mannat were shocked.

Subhan:What are you saying?

Ibadat:I am saying the truth.

Ibadat explained everything.

Suddenly Mannat took the baby from her and said:Give my baby back.She is my daughter.How can we believe you?

Subhan:Exactly.We can't just believe a random lady.

Ibadat said with attitude:So you can't believe me?Then I will do any medical test to prove that this is my daughter.

They became dull.

The DNA result proved that the baby belongs to Ibadat.But Mannat and Subhan refused to return the baby.

Mannat:No,she is mine.I will not give you my daughter.

Ibadat:She is my daughter.I gave birth to her.

Subhan:You have no rights on her after we adopted her legally.Now she is our daughter.

Ibadat became upset.

Ibadat started weeping:Please don't separate me from my daughter.She is my blood...my child.

Mannat and Subhan felt pity towards her.

Mannat:If you want to stay with her,you can stay here as her part time Nanny.When I go to work,you can look after her.

Subhan and Ibadat were shocked:Mannat!

Mannat:I am not a mahan to give my daughter to someone else.But I am not cruel enough to separate a mother from her daughter.The decision is yours Ibadat.

Sad that Mannat's dad didn't attend the wedding. Thank God the child won't be their own, if you know you know. We had a conversation over this haha. I seriously hate Kaynaat, she should not say like that about an innocent child. How dare she ask him to remarry. Why is the daughter's name Ayesha and not some other name? Why not a combo name? Ibadat and Nihaal's conversation reminded me of Sonakshi and her dad's conversation in kdb, is this ff inspired from there? At least Ibadat won't be like Sonakshi. Woah, just like in the serial kdb the kissing scene is there. Just the difference is that Pihu was grown up, here Ayesha is just a baby. Mannat is so nice. She is asking Ibadat that she can be there at least for part time. Waiting for next, perfect pics. Firstly I didn't like the idea of Mannat Subhan and Pihu ff, but now it's nice, feeling good by reading this ff.

Ha ha.Because Swarna does't resemble Mannat.Right?

I did'nt get any idea regarding the name.Suddenly Ayesha came into my mind and chose it.I did'nt choose combination name as she has 2 parents in this story.

No.This is not inspired from KDB.I don't remember KDB scenes now.

I am happy that u liked Subhan Mannat Swarna combination here though their scenes have not started yet.

Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: salley145

Sad that Mannat's dad didn't attend the wedding. Thank God the child won't be their own, if you know you know. We had a conversation over this haha. I seriously hate Kaynaat, she should not say like that about an innocent child. How dare she ask him to remarry. Why is the daughter's name Ayesha and not some other name? Why not a combo name? Ibadat and Nihaal's conversation reminded me of Sonakshi and her dad's conversation in kdb, is this ff inspired from there? At least Ibadat won't be like Sonakshi. Woah, just like in the serial kdb the kissing scene is there. Just the difference is that Pihu was grown up, here Ayesha is just a baby. Mannat is so nice. She is asking Ibadat that she can be there at least for part time. Waiting for next, perfect pics. Firstly I didn't like the idea of Mannat Subhan and Pihu ff, but now it's nice, feeling good by reading this ff.

Feeling sad for both Mannat and Ibadat...I think they will turn out to be sisters

Interesting start dear 😍

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Part 1

Amazing update... majestically written

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Our daughter's Nanny Part 2

Thank you very much Salley for the lovely edits.

The DNA result proved that the baby belongs to Ibadat.But Mannat and Subhan refused to return the baby.

Mannat:No,she is mine.I will not give you my daughter.

Ibadat:She is my daughter.I gave birth to her.

Subhan:You have no rights on her after we adopted her legally.Now she is our daughter.

Ibadat became upset.

Ibadat started weeping:Please don't separate me from my daughter.She is my blood...my child.

Mannat and Subhan felt pity towards her.

Mannat:If you want to stay with her,you can stay here as her part time Nanny.When I go to work,you can look after her.

Subhan and Ibadat were shocked:Mannat!

Mannat:I am not a mahan to give my daughter to someone else.But I am not cruel enough to separate a mother from her daughter.The decision is yours Ibadat.

Ibadat:I am ready to become the Nanny to be with my daughter.

Mannat:But you should never try to tell her that you are her real mother.

Ibadat:Agreed.I will not tell her the truth.

Subhan and Mannat smiled slightly.

Ibadat started staying there as Ayesha's Nanny.

5 years passed by....

Subhan and Mannat had gone for an important meeting.So Ayesha was alone with Ibadat.Kaynaat did not even mind her as Ayesha was not her real grand daughter.

Ayesha was sitting on Ibadat's lap.

Ayesha:Ibadat aunty..if you were not there,it would have been so boring.

Ibadat:I will never let you be bored.I will be always with you.I will play games with you,I will bath you,I will cook food for you,I will dress you up.

Ayesha:You are so sweet aunty.You are my best friend apart from Kairav.

Ibadat thought:I wish you had said that I am the best mother.

Suddenly Subhan and Mannat reached back home.

Seeing them,Ayesha became very happy.

Ayesha:Mom and dad have come.

Subhan and Mannat extended their hands towards Ayesha.

Ayesha:Hey..dad..mom!

Ayesha ran towards them.

Ibadat felt bad as Ayesha left her and ran to Subhan and Mannat.

Mannat:How was the day Ayesha beta?

Ayesha:It was fine as Ibadat aunty took care of me.

Mannat looked at Subhan and said:No one can make our Ayesha happier than Ibadat.

Subhan:You are right.

Mannat looked at Ibadat and said:Thank you Ibadat for looking after Ayesha so well.I trust you the most regarding Ayesha.

Ibadat smiled.

Ayesha was lying down between Subhan and Mannat.

Subhan was telling a story to Ayesha.

Ayesha:How many times you told me this story dad?

Mannat giggled:Your dad never gets tired of telling this story.

Ayesha:But I love this story dad.

Subhan:I know that.That's why I repeat telling this story to you.

They laughed.

Ayesha came running from the school.

Ayesha:Dad...mom...I got a star from the teacher.

Subhan:Really?Why?

Ayesha:Because I got good marks for the class test.

Subhan:Wow!

Mannat:After all our Ayesha is the best.

Subhan:Yes,Ayesha is the best.

They smiled.

Subhan:Ayesha good marks.So we will buy cute toys for you.

Ayesha was surprised:Really?

Mannat:Yes Ayesha.Promise!

Ayesha jumped with joy.

Subhan and Mannat arranged toys for Ayesha.

Mannat:Ayesha...see what we have bought for you.

Ayesha got excited seeing the toys.

Ayesha:All are my favourite toys.Thank you Dad..mom...

Ayesha and Mannat started playing with the toys.

Ayesha told Subhan:Dad..you also play with me.I will be alone if nobody plays with me.

Subhan:Ok..I will play with you.I will bring your best friend Kairav here.So that you can play with him.

Ayesha:Thank you dad.

Subhan joined Mannat and Ayesha in playing with the toys.

Ibadat combed Ayesha's hair.

Ibadat:Now you look pretty Ayesha.

Ayesha:Thank you Ibadat aunty.

Subhan arrived there with a little boy.

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Seeing him,Ayesha got excited.

Ayesha:Kairav!

Kairav:Hi Ayesha!

Subhan:I have brought your best friend Kairav.You can play with him and enjoy.

Ayesha and Kairav smiled.

Ayesha:Thank you dad.

Ayesha hugged Subhan.Then she went to play with Kairav.Ibadat smiled.

Seeing Ayesha enjoying with Subhan and Mannat,Ibadat became dull.

Ibadat thought:I wish Raunak and I were with Ayesha instead of Subhan and Mannat.

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Kaynaat noticed Ibadat.

Kaynaat went near Ibadat.

Kaynaat:You feel bad seeing your daughter with someone else?I can understand your feelings.I cannot tolerate that barren woman Mannat.I need a daughter in law like you who can produce my own grandchild.So you separate them and marry Subhan.You can live happily with your daughter as her own mother instead of living as her nanny.I will be the happiest if a healthy woman like you becomes my daughter in law.

Ibadat was shocked.

Ibadat:How can you be so cruel to your son and daughter in law?I want to be with my daughter.But I don't want to separate Mannat from Subhan and marry him.

Kaynaat got irritated.

Kaynaat:Then live as your daughter's Nanny forever.

Ibadat became sad.

Nihaal rang up Ibadat:How are you beta?

Ibadat:I am fine dad.

Nihaal:There is a happy news.God heard your prayer.Raunak is out of coma.He is coming back from America after treatment.

Ibadat was surprised and happy.

Ibadat:I am so happy dad.I want to meet Raunak.

Nihaal:I talked to Raunak.He could not contact you as he does'nt have your new number.Raunak is going to his cousin's house.After that he will visit you.So come home soon.

Ibadat:Yes dad.I want to see Raunak.So I will come home.

Ibadat was excited.

Subhan told Mannat:You know how much worried I was for Raunak when he slipped into coma.Right?

Mannat:Yes Subhan.He is your dearest cousin.Your life turned upside down when Raunak's condition became critical.

Subhan smiled emotionally:But now I am so happy Mannat.After many years Raunak has become alright and he is coming back to India.Raunak is like my real brother.

Mannat smiled.

Ibadat was going towards the exit to leave for her home.Suddenly Subhan's cousin Raunak reached there.

Ibadat and Raunak were surprised to see each other.

Kaynaat is so evil here

Part 2

Wonderful update.... greatly written

update soon

Good that Ibadat agreed to be a nanny and also not tell the truth. Ibadat wishing that Ayesha says she is the best mother was realistic. Like Ibadat feels, it's very realistic to feel that way. Subhan telling the same story to Ayesha daily was funny. Toy scene was lovely. Is Kairav from yrkkh? Poor Ibadat. I knew Kaynaat will do something like this. Finally Raunak is out of coma. Surprising that Raunak is connected to Subhan and Mannat too. Wonder what will be Raunak's reaction after knowing about Ayesha. Perfect pics, waiting for next