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Ateet Ke Kuch Raaz

It was 7 PM when Anjali was sitting on a sofa located in a lounge reading one of her favorite romantic novel and drinking tea. She was relaxing and having fun looking at the rain outside until she was rudely disturbed by the knock. Well that's what she was thinking that she was "rudely" interrupted.

She walked to the door and opened it slightly ajar to see who it is when she heard the voice of a kid.

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*knock knock*

"I am so dead today"

*knock knock*

"Nobody is even at home. Devi Mayya maa se bachana"

The person was busy talking when the door noise interrupted the talk and the lady peeped her head outside to look at the person

"I'm sorry aunty to disturbed you at this late hour but I have to call my mom and my cell phone battery died. Could you please let me use your phone so I could tell my mom that I am OK?

The lady saw the worried look on the person face and she couldn't say no to the person.

"Oh sure!! And you could stay over here until the weather is fine.I am stuck over here because of the weather too" the lady replied gleefully

"Thank you so much. Devi mayya thank you so much" the person replied and than thanking his devi mayya.

The lady did not listened what the person said as she walked in before the person could finish the 'thank you'

"Here you go!! The home phone is not working so you could use my cellphone"

The person took the phone and smiled at the lady. Lady saw the smile and it reminded her of someone but the lady let the thought pass as she did not considered the thought to be that important.

"Maa is going to kill me. I am so dead"

"What happened?" The lady asked

"Maa is not picking up the phone. I think I will try to call her later" the person said

"By the way what is your name aunty? I am at your home and did not even asked your name" the person said and smacked itself on the head.

"My name is Anjali" and she extended her hand forward and said "and your name?"

"Ayan" Ayan(the person said)

"Nice name. So how old are you? And what are you doing that late outside?"

"Actually Anjali aunty I was at my friend house and he was supposed to drop me but the weather got bad and there was no car available at his house so I told him I would walk home. He forced me to stay but I was getting late. He gave me his umbrella but the umbrella broke and I got all wet" Ayan said all of this in one breath.

Anjali giggled when she heard him say all this in one breath.

"How old are you?" Anjali asked in which Ayan replied back saying 12

"Come on I will give you some clothes of my son." Anjali told him and waved his hand in front of his to indicate him to follow her.

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Ayan and Anjali entered the room. Ayan was in awe when he saw the room. The room was all look like how Ayan imagined his room would be. "Hmmm aunty son's choice and my choice are so similar" he thought until his thought were interrupted when he heard Anjali talking

"This apartment is my and my son's. I just got here like half an hour ago and the weather got bad. Your mom must be calling you like crazy on your phone right now." Anjali said while looking for the clothes in a cupboard.

"Oh yes! I should call her" and Ayan again dialed the number but the try again went in vain. "She is not picking it up. Maa why do you this? Dammit sometimes maa makes me so angry. Why is she not picking up the phone? I ma sure she must be'" *tring tring* Anjali phone rang and Ayan saw the name flash through her mobile saying "Chottey" and he smiled thinking that it must be her son calling

"Pick up the phone!" Anjali said when she turned around with the set of clothes on her hand.

Ummm.. There is someone name "Chottey" calling you" Ayan said and he noticed that Anjali snatched the phone from him with a worried look on her and gave him the clothes and pointed towards the restroom indicating him to go and change.

At RM

After trying like the millionth time Arnav finally heard the bell ringing through his cellphone and as soon as Anjali picked up the phone he blasted on her "DI!! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU NOT PICKING YOUR PHONE? I HAVE BEEN TRYING YOUR PHONE FOREVER AND YOU ARE NOT EVEN PICKING IT UP. DAMMIT!! YOU AND YOUR SON ALWAYS DO THAT? WHEN HE IS HOME YOU ARE NOT WHEN HE IS NOT YOU ARE AND YOU BOTH MAKE ME TENSED THAN"

Arnav was yelling so loud on the phone that Ayan could hear him clearly as what he was going on about.

"Chottey! I am totally fine and in my studio right now. Don't worry and what is Prem doing" Anjali said

"What the!! Di really? I am worried over here and you are asking'" "They are too loose to me but I think they will work."Ayan said. Arnav wasn't even finished when he heard someone voice from his phone.

"Di! Who the hell is at your apartment? And I am coming picking you up" Arnav said as he was getting worried that person could hurt his Di.

"Chottey look at the weather. How would you drive? Let the rain stop and then I will come home OK"

"No I am coming and that is final" and he hanged up. Pick his car keys and walked straight outside from RM not even listening to his nani of what she was trying to say.

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"My stubborn brother is about be hear and you look cute in those clothes" Anjali said looking at Ayan.

Ayan just smiled at her and said "Your brother really cares about you. You must be lucky to have a brother like that"

"I am. He could be one of the best brothers in this world." Anjali said with a pride. "Forget this all we will talk about him when he gets hear. So tell me do you like ginger tea?"

"Ginger Tea!!! OMG I need it with cookies" Ayan said all excited and ready to drink tea.

"Sure" Anjali said as she walked out of the room to the kitchen Ayan following him.

After 10 minutes Ayan and Anjali heard the bang of the door which made Ayan scared but Anjali calmed him down by putting her hand on his shoulder and calming her down and indicating her that it's her stubborn and tempered brother.

"DI!! DI!! KAHAN HO APP" Arnav said looking around the lounge when he heard Anjali saying she is in the kitchen.

When Arnav walked in the kitchen he saw the kid and Anjali making a tea. Both engrossed in talking to each other. He smiled looked at his but his smile vanished when saw a kid, same age as Prem wearing Prem's clothes. "Ummm Di!!" Arnav said to get the attention of his sister and to look at the sight of the kid.

They both turned around and Arnav than noticed the kid and motioned his sister with his eyes that he want to talk alone to her. Anjali handed the tray to Ayan and told him to wait for them outside the lounge.

As soon as Ayan left the kitchen Arnav blasted at her with the questions "Why would you make a stranger stay at your house Di?"

"Chottey he is a kid and no arguments. Come with me" Anjali walked outside of the kitchen not even giving a chance to Arnav and Arnav had to shut up and walk outside.

They both entered the lounge to find it empty and three tea mugs sitting on a table with cookies.

"I am sure he must have stole something and ran out from this house" Arnav and in reply he earned a glare from Anjali which made him shut up and shooed Arnav with her hand to go and look for him. Arnav walked to Prem room to check if he was there and he found him over there looking for something in a cupboard.

"So I stand corrected" Ayan heard the noise which made him jumped but when he turn around he relaxed and replied back with the confidence "About what?"

"That you are thief"

"If you think that about a kid than you don't know how to judge a person"

"What did you just called me?" Arnav said. Slowly his anger rising when he saw a kid misbehaving with him and making fun of him.

"You heard me first time" Ayan said with pure confidence

"Hello!! Who ever you are and where ever you are from..." Arnav was not even finished when saw Ayan walking towards the room. Arnav anger reached it's peak when he saw Ayan acting like that and before Ayan could reach the door he walked faster than him and shut the door.

Saying Ayan was shocked would be an understatement. He could not believe that person first blamed him to be a thief and he had to reply back to him because he was accusing him for wrong reason.

"How dare you walk on me?"

"With my legs. Why? You can't walk with your legs?"

Arnav was shocked and he can't believe that this kid is so much rude and doesn't even know how to talk to people. Arnav was about to give him a piece of mind when his Di knocked on the door.


I will update the chapter 2 maybe Friday. It is my second FF. I will sure continue "Complicated Love" but I have to think about the story to make it move on. This story will sure continue as I know what I have to right next. Well no prologue, no character sketch is in their because I want you guys to figure out the characters.Have fun!!!

Add me as a buddy if you need the PM of the update.

Abdul😊

Chapter 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3302898/arhi-ss-ateet-ke-kuch-raaz

Chapter 2: Scroll down.

Chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70110911

Chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70648915



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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start love the kid can't wait to read more
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wow great start I thinks that arnav son cant wait to read more
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kya baat hai LG..stry badi interesting lag rahi hai..PM karna :D
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Originally posted by: Afsha29

kya baat hai LG..stry badi interesting lag rahi hai..PM karna :D


Zaroor Zaroor PM karoon ga
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting start with a tiff...Lets see for more...:)
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Surprise!!! Another update. I love you my readers so have fun reading it. Here it goes

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Ayan, Anjali, and Arnav were going to RM. They left Anjali's apartment 30 minutes ago and Arnav couldn't control his anger. He was pissed at his sister for interrupting him and he was more pissed at that kid because he had the verge to talk back at him. He would have strangle that kid to death if he wasn't interrupted by his sister. He was thinking that when he heard Ayan saying "Could you slow down a car little bit? I want to see my mom tomorrow ALIVE" Ayan said putting pressure on the word 'ALIVE'.

"What did you just said?" Arnav said trying his best to focus on driving and not kill that kid.

"I want to get home alive so please slow down" Ayan said in a matter of fact tone.

Arnav was about to say something rude to him when he heard Anjali saying "Chottey! He is right slow down a little" Arnav was now more pissed at his sister and he couldn't take it anymore. He pressed the break so hard that the tires made the screech sound on the the rainy day and Anjali and Ayan jumped with the sudden stop of the car.

"GET OUT!!" Arnav said yelling

"Did you just told your sister to GET OUT?" Anjali said in a Anjali Singh Raizada mood.

"NO DI!! I AM TELLING THIS KID TO GET OUT FROM THIS CAR. WHY IS HE EVEN GOING WITH US?" Arnav said yelling at Anjali making Anjali flinched a little bit but Anjali Singh Raizada grew inside her as she replied back with calm but stern tone "He is coming with us and you will not say anything until we get home. Do you get it?" Arnav calmed down a little when he sensed that his sister is getting angry and he groaned in frustration.

Ayan couldn't stop himself and giggle which made Arnav glare at the side view mirror. If side view mirror was a person it would have been burned with the fire showing from Arnav's eye but there was not effect on Ayan as he just smiled at Arnav. Arnav got more pissed at Ayan and he just drove in frustration.

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30 Minutes before
Ayan had to go with Anjali because Anjali had threatened him that she will tell everything to his mom if he doesn't go with them and Ayan had no option left. He called his mom and told him that he will be staying at his friend house in which his mom asked thousand questions from him and gave him thousand suggestions as what to do and what to not.
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At RM

Arnav entered RM in a spoiled mood and to top it off NK came out of no where and made him more annoyed which made him loose his temper and he blasted his anger all on NK

"WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT NK? WHY CAN'T YOU JUST LEAVE ME ALONE? WHY DON'T YOU JUST GO BACK TO AUSTRALIA? IT WOULD BE BETTER FOR EVERYONE" Arnav said all of this yelling on top of his lungs and walked towards his room. Nani, Mami, and HP were shocked to see Arnav that angry. The person who always used to cheer up people was now upset and he was about to leave from his room when he felt some kid tugging his jacket. He turned around and saw a kid.

"I think he is angry because of me. I am sorry" Ayan said with puppy dog eyes and NK gave him a confused look. Ayan and Anjali also witnessed this and Ayan felt bad that he blasted on this poor guy for no reason. Every person in RM was confused looking at the kid who they don't even know and when NK was about to ask him who he is, Anjali replied and told all the family members everything.

"So that is why Arnav is mad and that's how I met Ayan. You know I like this kid. He reminds me of Kh..." Anjali stopped herself before saying anything and Ayan just gave her a confused look.

"OK Never mind people. I know how to make Arnav say sorry to you" Ayan said with an evil smile on his face which enlightened the mood of NK. Ayan told him and all the family members his plan.

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"NK Bhaiyya!! Aap kyun ja rahe hain. Please stop!! You know Chottey na. He is always like this" Anjali was trying to stop NK. Arnav words really affected him.

Mami went to Arnav room to tell him what is NK doing and this made Arnav feel bad and he was cursing the kid who made him do that. Arnav walked down the stairs to find NK at the door hugging Di with a bag in his hand.

"NK you can't leave" Arnav said descending from the stairs.

"But you want to leave so I am leaving" NK said in a hurtful voice.

"I was frustrated about something so I blasted at you" Arnav said looking at Ayan and Ayan again just smiled at him which made him more frustrated.

"I am waiting" NK said looking at Arnav.

"Waiting for what"

"An apology?"

"WHAT!! WHY WOULD I APOLOGIES YOU?"

"Ummm because you yelled at me and told me to leave the house" NK said again sounding all hurt.

"NK...I did not mean to say it all this" Arnav said trying really hard not to get angry at NK again.

"I am still waiting"

"Fine!! I...I...am..." He was about to finish his sorry when Ayan interrupted him "You know it is just three words. How long do you take to say sorry?" Arnav was about to say something back to him but he stopped himself and promising himself that he will get that kid back.

"I am sorry NK" after saying sorry he just walked from there in more spoiled mood. When Arnav was out from everyone sights everybody start laughing and NK came and hugged Ayan.

"You are the best Ayan." NK said hugging him tight.

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After Ayan successful plan Anjali made him settled in a guest room. Although Ayan was scared to sleep alone but he decided to be brave as his mom always taught him to be strong.

Anjali and Ayan were talking to each other when Prem start calling his mom.

"Mom!! Mom!! Where are you?"

"I am in the guest room beta" Anjali said a little louder than Ayan expected her to say.

Prem came home from his friend party just an hour ago and he was looking for his mom when he found his mom in a guest room with another kid whose back was facing Prem.

"Mom who is he?" Prem said confused.

Ayan turned around to look at Prem and Anjali had to close her ears with her hands to stop the loud sound of the kids.

"TUM!!!!" Both Ayan and Prem said together.

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So how was it guys!! I hope you guys liked it. Hmmm now I wonder how does Ayan and Prem know each other. Well you guys have to wait till the next update.

Abdul😊
Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 13 years ago
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wow what a small world prem & ayan is friend and arnav is ayan father please continue soon and I think anjali was about to mentioned khushi name but stop.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...That was very fast!
Anyways Good Update...:)
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good storyline pls continue,, i think ayan is khushi and arnav son... will be fun pls pls pm me

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