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Posted: 13 years ago
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When is Khushi's entry going to happen???
I am loving this...:)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for the late post!! Was busy in school stuff and I got time today so I am writing it.

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Anjal woke up to check on Ayan if he needs something and when she opened the door Ayan wasn't there and in panic she sreamed. "AAAHHH"
Mami, NK, Nani, Prem all came out of their room to see Anjali panicing and standing outside guest room.
"What happened bitya?" Nani asked walking towards Anjali.
"Nani Ayan is not in her room"Anjali said
"Great! That trash must be stealing some stuff right now" Prem said and rolled his eyes
"If I hear one word from your mouth you will be grounded for a month" Anjali said in stern voice and it made Prem shut up.
"Kya hua Di?" Arnav said in a worried voice.
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Arnav did heard the scream of Anjali and he was about to go and check on her but Ayan stopped him saying he is scared of dark and therefore Arnav had to calm him down and he kept his room light on and left the door open so Ayan could relax a little. After Ayan understood he will not do anything wrong Arnav went outside from his room and he saw his whole family standing outside guest room. He saw Anjali and got a little worried as Anjali was in anger and worried.
"Kya hua Di?" Arnav asked.
"Chottey!" Anjali said walking towards her brother "Ayan is not in his room"
"Di relax!! Ayan is with me. He got a hurt by the piece of glass so I took him to my room to treat his wound."
"Kya?!! Ayan got hurt? Where is he?" Anjali said getting all panicked again.
Arnav hold his sisters shoulder and said "Relax!! He is in my room." Anjali relaxed after hearing this. "By the way Di why did you let Ayan sleep alone if he is scared of dark and he is not used to sleeping alone?"
"What? He didn't told me anything. Chottey this kid is totally like you with the attitude. You should hear him talk. His confidence is totally like you" Anjali said remembering old things which bought tears in her eyes.
"Di please and that poor guy is so scared of dark that he wasn't letting me go" Arnav said feeling bad for Ayan and a little bit annoyed with his sister.
"OK Ayan could sleep in my room with me" Anjali said walking towards the room. But she stopped when she heard a "NO!!!" Arnav said. Everybody looked at Arnav shocked but Arnav just shrruged his shoulder and said "Don't worry he could sleep with me. I don't want you to get disturb Di." Arnav said looking at Di but Anjali had a teasing smile on her face. She was thinking too many things right now.
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After the whole Anjali panicking incident everybody went back to their room and Arnav back to his room and when he came inside he saw Ayan watching 'Tom and Jerry' and laughing.
"What the-!!" Anrav said all shocked. Ayan looked at him and just smiled like a cute 12 year old kid and this sure reminded Arnav of Khushi. His Khushi. He still so wished that she was here with him. He should have never made that mistake in his life. He wished that he should have never left her becasue... "Hello!!!" His thoughts were interrupted by Ayan.
"Hello!!! What happened uncle?" Ayan said
"Nothing and you were suppose to be sleeping" Arnav said in a fake anger voice.
"I wanted to watch cartoon so I am watching that right now."
"And what happened to your foot"
"Oh that hurts but now its OK. You know I thought you will be that mean, nasty guy who doesn't care about people but you are nice."
"Excuse Me" Arnav said shocked
"Yeah!!! The first day when you call me thief I was like what kind of person are you and you were about to yell at me too that day but I ignored that fast" Ayan said busy in cartoon
"What? What do you think of me?" Arnav said getting angry
"I think that you were a mean person but now I think you are nice" Ayan aid looking at him and smiling
"You think I am mean and than I will show you how mean I am" And Arnav walked to him and carried him and took him to guest room and throwed him on the bed.
"Now stay alone and don't bother coming over here" Arnav said in angry tone and left the room.
Ayan was just smiling at how this person changes. Ayan liked Arnav oops Arnav uncle. He like Arnav uncle and he was nice and with the Arnav thought he felt like he would be save and he went to sleep.
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Here comes the thinking of Khushi. I know that Khushi should be revealed and she will be in next part. I will update some of the past of Khushi.
Abdul😃
Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
that was awesome as usual!! XD update soon!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Wonder what Arnav did to Khushi
when is Khushi coming
please update again soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice please update soon I will check everyday .

Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Wow its an awesome Ff Yar :-)
i just love it :-) great :-)
its totally different from other sub :)
I like ayan a lot :) nicely characterized :-).
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow a nice story when the soap is done...living in imagination and lively...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaur94

Wonder what Arnav did to Khushi
when is Khushi coming
please update again soon


Khushi will be there in the next update that I will update in some 2 hours or maybe early
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi!!!! So ready to meet Khushi. I am sure you guys are and well the past between them is a little different. I will write a OS on them. It is totally of to the show. I don't know why I thought about it. orry for going to fast but I just wanted to move on with the suspense.So here it is the update

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Ayan was on his way to his house. He had a smile on his face. He loved this family. It made him feel like that he met his dad family. He always asked from his mom that who is dad his but his mom always end up yelling at him. Ayan always wondered what his dad did to his mom that she always cried when he always talked about him. Ayan thought about this. His smile turning into a frown and he decided that although he is a kid but he would never forgive his dad that easily. He saw his mom going through a lot of hardships and he has to pay for it.

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"Maa I am home" Ayan said as he entered the room

"Thank god you are home. You know how much worried I was and what happened to your cell phone?" Khushi asked coming out from the room.

Ayan looked at his mom. Who would say that she was a 32 year old women. She still looked like she was in her twenties. Ayan adores her mom and pity his dad that he left her. Ayan admired his mom. She was the only one for him in this world who helped her a alot.

"I am sorry ma but my battery died and I borrowed the phone from Anjali aunty and than she forced me to stay with her and than..." Ayan was interrupted when he saw his mom face turning pale and next thing he knew he was in his mom's embrace and he was shocked when he saw Khushi crying.

"Maa Maa what happened. Why are you crying?" Ayan said all panicked.

"What was the full name of that aunty? Khushi said breaking the hug.

"Anjali Singh Raizada" Ayan said all confused.

"It's time I'll tell you something" Khushi said taking Ayan to his room and told him the whole story. Ayan was crying. He couldn't believe that his dad would be that cruel and the biggest shock he got was that his dad was Arnav Singh Raizada. He knew that his mom always missed his dad and always wanted to meet dad so he decided to ask from mom.

"Mom do you want to meet him" Ayan said and as soon as Khushi looked at him he got his answer.

"OK Than I have a plan. I know what to do" Ayan said all confident which sure made Khushi remind of Arnav and she smiled and said "Ayan shut up you are just a kid. So stop acting like an adult."

"Ma I said I will do it and you can't stop me. That's it! But you have to promise me that you won't tell dad anything about me being his son. He needs some wooing to do for his son first and than for his wife" Ayan said all confident and Khushi just smiled and had happy tears in her eyes. She decided that she would be forgive Arnav easily but it would be hard for Arnav to woo Ayan.

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Ayan was only a 12 year old kid but when it came to justice Ayan brain worked like an evil. He knew how to make people backed down easily. He didn't cared how much his father try to woo him but he won't forgive him easily. He knows what he has to do but this path was not easy. He has to get him in the team to make dad feel guilty for everything.
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Prem was shocked to see Ayan coming towards him. Prem was smirking like a devil because Ayan was coming towards his own grave.

"Oh wait there. You can't come and make the popular people trash" Prem said yelling because he stopped Ayan a little far from the table.

"Why? You are the cousin of that trash" Ayan said in which Prem face was in a perfect 'O' and he was just confused. Ayan had a smirk on his face and he just gave Prem a look which clearly said that he needs to talk to him. Prem just walked from there to the corner. Students around them were shocked and they had their mouth was in a shape of a perfect O too.

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"WHAT!!!" Prem was hell shocked when he heard that Ayan is his cousin. "I don't believe you" Prem said and try to walk away from there but Ayan blocked he way with his hand and said "I knew you won't but you will believe you mom right?"

"You told my mom"Prem was shocked that his mom know this either.

"Yes he did" Anjali said and they both saw Anjali walking towards this, no more like running towards them and next thing they knew was Ayan was struggling to breath as Anjali has hugged him so tight was crying so badly.

"I am sorry I am so sorry. I couldn't do anything. I am sorry. Where is Khushi? I want to meet her" Anjali said crying and hugging Ayan more tighter.

"I...can't... breath" Ayan said trying his best to breath. Anjali left him and said sorry. "We sure will meet mom but..." Ayan was cut when they heard Prem.
"Would someone tell me what is going on?" Prem asked sounding all confused and Anjali told him everything. Prem was feeling really bad for his mamu but he felt more bad for Ayan. Ayan was shocked to see Prem crying and he got more shocked when he Prem hugged him. "I am so sorry Ayan. For everything I did. I never you went through so much. I am sorry and I am sorry from my mamu side too." Prem said hugging him.
Ayan patted his back and told him "Oh he will be sorry. I still can't believe mom forgive him that easily" Ayan said all shocked

"Your mom is always like that" Anjali said cutting the sweet moment between brothers. "Can we go and meet Khushi" and all three left to meet Khushi.

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Anjali and Khushi cried forever. Ayan forced them to stop crying in reply Anjali just said that he is totally like chottey in which Ayan got pissed and left for his room. Prem was the one to go and pacify him. Prem felt like he has a responsibility and he needs to take care of Ayan now. A little later Ayan decided that he can't forgive his dad that easily. Ayan wanted his plan to work but Khushi didn't wanted anything at all. This just made Ayan hate Arnav more. Anjali forcefully took them to RM and told them that they will live over there forever although Khushi did not wanted to go but Anjali gave Khushi her kasam to go and she couldn't deny it.
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As soon as they entered the RM everybody was shocked to see Khushi and everybody had happy tears in his eyes. Arnav was in his room when he heard so much noise downstairs.

"Itna shor kyun ho raha hai?" He said descending from stairs and when he saw Khushi he just stood there shocked and numb. Both Khushi and Arnav were numb looking at each other. Both were staring at each other eyes. Arnav asking for forgiveness from his eyes and Khuhsi showing the pain he caused her. Arnav walked towards her and just hugged Khushi tightly. He was crying and whispering sorry. Arnav wasn't letting Khushi go.
"Arnavji it's OK" Khushi said while trying her best to make him release him.
"I am sorry Khushi *hiccup* I am sorry" After crying for an hour and whispering 100 sorry Arnav let go of Khushi.
"Kesi ho Khushi?" Arnav asked wiping the tears from Khushi's eyes and caressing her face with his hands.

"Aap ke bina bilkul bho achi nai thi" Khushi said tears coming in her eyes again.

"I am sorry" Arnav said again feeling guilty.

"Agar aap ne phir se sorry bola tu hum chale jaein ge" Khushi said threatening him. Arnav just smiled in response. They did not even cared that if all the family members were over there and watching them. All were smiling at them and shocking was Ayan was happy for his dad and mom.

"I would like to meet you someone" Khushi said breaking the hug and called Ayan.
"Humara beta" Khushi said making Anrav shock again and making him feel guilty. He can't believe that he missed his most important part of his life. He can't believed that he missed his son's birth. The tears came again in Arnav's eyes and Khushi just hold his hand. Arnav looked at Khushi and just nod his head in negative. Arnav went towards Ayan and kneedled in front of him.

"Hi!! I am sorry that I said all those things and I am sorry that I wasn't there when you needed me the most. I am seriously sorry. Could there any chance you could forgive me?" Arnav said moving his hand forward.

"No" Ayan said.

Everyone was shocked except Anjali, Prem, and Khushi. Arnav tried to say something but Ayan interrupted him "I don't think I could forgive you that easily. I am not sure if I should call you dad. You weren't there when mom needed you the most. What kind of dad does that?" Arnav was about to say something but he was again interrupted by Ayan "I am not going to accept any apology from you because I don't even consider you dad" *SLAP* everyone was shocked. Everybody was shocked and the most shock person was Arnav. He couldn't believe it.

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I did not know what I did. I still am confused as to why I made Khushi forgive Arnav so easily. There is one thing that Khushi didn't told Ayan and it is the story behind why she left Arnav. That will found it later and I am sorry. I made the whole FF upside down. Isn't it great he got slapped. Well I think he deserved it. Now I will try my best to update it this week. If I can't then weekend for sure.

Abdul😃
Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That's an nice part :)
i like the slap with arnav got from ayan:-) surly he deserved it .
i too have the same feel y kushi forgive arnav that early:) isn't she suffer with out her husband :-) any ways expecting more :)

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