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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue soon I am off from work and need to keep busy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey my awesome readers! How is everybody doing? I am not doing fine at all😭. I was about to update tomorrow but I went against it and thought to update it today😃. So here it goes:

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"TUM!!" Ayan and Prem said together.

Prem was Anjali's 14 year old kid. Prem and Ayan go to the same school. Prem belonging to a rich family goes to a rich school and Ayan being a middle class goes to same school as Prem. Ayan was kind of a outsider. He had no friends because people didn't talked to him as he was a middle class and Prem was the popular boy in school and being the popular he used to bully only one person who is an outsider and that was Ayan.

"Maa what is he doing over here" Prem asked all angry that some middle class kid in his house.

"You know each other?" Anjali asked all confused

"Oh please!! I don't know him. He is just some middle class kid who goes to our school. He is trash in the the school. An outsider who should not even go to our school." Prem said all angry at Ayan that he had the urge to step in his house.

After hearing this Ayan had tears in his eyes but he was about to say something when he heard Anjali aunty saying "Chottey!! Chottey!!!"

Arnav came running to the guest room as he heard his Di angry and he got worried as to what happened. "Kya Hua Di?" Arnav asked entering the guest room and he saw Prem over there standing and looking pissed and he saw Ayan had tears in his eyes.

"Prem is grounded for two weeks and tell him I am not talking to him at all" Anjali said not even looking at Prem. Arnav was shocked as to what happened between mom and son.

"But why Di?"

"Because Prem Singh Raizada thinks that being a middle class is a most cheapest thing in the world"

"Prem did you said that?" Arnav said looking at Prem in which Prem gave him 'please save me' look.

"Di!! Ghalti..."

"No Chottey you will not defend him and now both of you out of the room. I was talking to my guest right now" Anjali said shooing them with her hand

Arnav and Prem both were shocked to see that Anjali was giving more importance to an unknown kid than to her son or her brother.

Arnav just groaned in frustration and took Prem outside of guest room and told him to go and sleep but Prem had something else in his mind.

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It was midnight when Ayan felt thirsty and tried to find water but the water jug was empty. Ayan thought to go and get some water.

"Per I don't know where the kitchen is"

"Lekin I could ask Anjali aunty to get me some water"

"But I don't even know her room"

"Ugh and I don't want to go roam in the house like that"

"Ayan himat kar! You could do it. Just go and find the room. Davi Mayya is with you"

And with that thought Ayan left the room to go and find Anjali's room.


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"What the!! Who is awake at this time" Arnav was working on his laptop finishing the last bit of work left for tomorrows presentation when he heard the noises outside the door.

He got up and went to open the door when he saw Ayan knocking the door of Prem's room.

"What are you doing?" Arnav said in an angry tone which made Ayan jump and he dropped the water glass he had in his hand making the shattering noise. Luckily nobody woke up with the sound.

Arnav walked to Ayan who was standing outside Prem's room a little bit scared.

"I said what are you doing?" Arnav asked again this time sounding serious and angry.

"I..I...I need some water so I was looking for Anjali aunty room" Ayan said a little bit scared from Arnav.

"And why are you outside Prem's room than?" Arnav asked suspecting something wrong from this kid.

Ayan was confused as how could this man who seems to be smart could not get that he is new in the house and doesn't know the room of Anjali anuty.

"For your kind information I am new over here so..." Ayan said

"Whatever just come with me I will get you a water" Arnav said walking past Ayan and walking down the stairs.

Ayan forgot that there were glass pieces on the floor and he stepped on one of them.

"AAAHHH" Ayan said holding one foot. Tears were coming out of his eyes and his foot was bleeding.

When Arnav heard Ayan painful scream he ran up the stairs to see what happened to him and when he saw Ayan crying holding his foot he felt his heart hitting with needles. He didn't know why he felt this way about the unknown kid but he let that thought go and picked Ayan and took him towards his room.

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Arnav was pissed at this kid because this kid was first of all had no manners to talk to people and second he was careless.

"Were you our of your mind? You knew there were glass pieces over there than why didn't you walked carefully" Arnav said sounding angry at the kid but Ayan didn't replied back and with listening to Arnav get angry at him made him more cry.

Arnav was shocked to see Ayan crying and he calmed himself and said "OK OK. I am sorry."

"Dukh*sniff*...raha *sniff* ...hai" Ayan said in a painful voice

"Acha tum yehi betho mai aata hoon." Arnav got up but was stopped by Ayan holding his hand.

"I don't want to stay over here alone. I am scared to stay alone." Ayan said with puppy dog filled eyes.

"OK" and he again carried Ayan like Ayan was his son.

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Anjali opened the door and screamed "AAAHHH"
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Cliffhanger!!! Ummm Should I keep the suspense more or should I disclose the suspense. I still have to bring Khushi in their. I don't even know how to bring Khuhsi. I have to think about that until than Au Revoir.

Abdul😉
Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Loved it..
Do PM me when u continue too :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Great update glad to see anjali stand up for ayan Aww Arnav felt pain seeing ayan hurt don't really like prem
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
WOw
read it in one go
Its very interesting

Ayan is Arnav son 😉
Where is kushi ????????????????????????? pls make her entry soon
continue soon
Cantwait to read more
Pls pm me😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update, thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
OMFG!!!!!! that was so awesome!!!!! its so goooddd!!!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
nice ff
continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please don't keep us in suspense where is khushi and what happen between arnav and khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
bit late this time but yeah so where was I

awww he does have a heart

and why did she scream

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