ArHi SS: Ateet Ke Kuch Raaz - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@AbdulloveIPKKND: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: morning_star

Woow...missed so much drama...good confrontation..why are you ending it??? I am liking this genre..:-) Dont end it.There is so much to be revealed now.


You know I am totally confused to where to take this story but I will think and see what I could come up with.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏thanks...brilliant.great work...please update sooon and pm me whne you do update👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys!! So I am updating on Friday and I will sure update tomorrow too. Actually I was suppose to go to my cousin graduation tomorrow and my uncle was suppose to pick me up from my house to take me over there but I think he forgot so I thought why not write the update so here it goes:
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Arnav was lost in his thoughts. He was angry at himself and he wanted to end himself. He was tired of himself. He wanted to just get rid of all the sadness around him. He was heart broken. His own son hated him. Arnav couldn't think of anything. The Arnav Singh Raizada who had all the money and was the top business man of India didn't had happiness at all. The rude, arrogant ASR who never gave up was giving up today. He always thought of his family happiness and he did the same for his small family too but he lost. ASR was broken. He felt completely lost. He didn't know where he was sitting. Tears were not even stopping from his eyes. He was just wishing to die.

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Khushi came to Anjali room to talk to her about something when she saw Arnav sitting over there. She was confused but her confusion turned into panic when she heard the sniff sound.

"Arnavji kya hua?" Khushi asked all worried

"Khushi I lost today. I lost today"

Khushi was breaking from inside. She never saw Arnav that broken. She still remembered how heart broken he was when Anjali baby was killed but this was much more worst.

"I tried to protect you and Ayan but everything turned against me. I lost my mother first and now I lost my kid. Why does this happen to me?"

"Arnavji nothing happened. Please don't cry. I will talk to Ayan. I will tell him the whole truth. He should know what happened. You told me not to tell him everything but now it is his right to know what he is doing is wrong"

"I lost Khushi, I lost." Arnav kept repeating that word. He laid his head on Khushi lapped and cried for hours. Crying made him tired and soothing sounds of Khushi voice made him sleep.

Khushi was in deep thought. She was remembering the day when Khushi decided to plan the plan and make their life easy. She still remembered that Anrav and her had a big fight between them about this plan.

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"Khushi I said no. I won't be able to do this. No! This is not right" Arnav said

"Please Arnavji. This will give us time to protect him. You know how hard it is to protect him in RM."

"I said No Khushi"

"Please Arnav ji"

"I SAID NO!!!" Arnav yelled which made Khushi flinch.

--------End of Flashback--------

Khushi came out of her past when she saw Anrav looking at her. She gave Arnav a small smile in which Arnav made his eye brows rise up to ask him what is she thinking.

"Just the day when we decided to protect him" Khushi said

"I think it was the right thing to do but I never knew that it will brake us apart." Arnav said getting all sad.

"If you blamed yourself one more time Arnavji I won't talk to you" Khuhsi said getting annoyed with Arnav.

Arnav got up from his lap and cam close to his face. Their nose were touching together. They both were just staring at each other and they were letting the eyes do the talking.

"Laal ho gai hai" Arnav said

"Kya?" Khushi asked all confused.

"Tumhari Naak" Arnav said and kissed her on the cheek and Khushi responded him by shocking him and kissing him back on his cheek. Arnav was shocked but than he smirked and said "Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada knows how to respond back now"

"Of course I do. After all I am Mrs. Raizada" Khushi said getting all proud.

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Small update? It is I think. Well I will think and write more tomorrow. Hope you enjoy the update and I think I will make this SS go a little longer although the story is going to be turn out opposite but we will sure see some Arnav and Ayan scene in next update and some ArHi scence for sure

Abdul😃

Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@AbdulloveIPKKND: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Your cousin's loss is our gain!:)

Anyway Fantastic Update.
Thank God...You have decided to make this a longer Story.

I am liking the bonding between Arnav & Khushi...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update can't wait to read more, I want to find out their plan that cause the separation.

I hope Arnav and Ayan get along soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Waiting To Know About Their Past 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am so happy today. I am proud of my cousin. Yes my uncle came and pick me up at midnight. I get to go in his graduation and it was 4 hour boring graduation except when we yelled like maniac when my cousin got a degree and the ending was awesome. I am proud to say that my cousin got a degree in two majors. Congrats to him and now here is the update:

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It has been a week since Ayan and Arnav had saw each other. Arnav would wake up before Ayan would wake up for his school and he would leave early so Ayan won't see him. This was noticed by Khushi too and she decided a plan to make them meet up.

Same as usual Ayan was going to school when Khushi entered in his room.


"Ayan I want you do me a favor" Khushi said.

"What is it?" Ayan said a little annoyed.

"Oh so we are still on small sentence and one word basis. OK Than. I want you to go to your dad office and give him this letter" Khuhsi said and she put the letter in his bag pack.

"I don't know where dad office is" Ayan said

"Driver will take you over there" and with saying that Khushi left the room to avoid more questions.

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After school Ayan was outside the AR in the car when driver got the call. Driver handed him the phone and said that it's his mom.

"Ayan you will be coming with your dad. We need the car. It is urgent." Khushi said

"And how will Prem will go home" Ayan said getting all suspicious.

"He left early from school today. We are taking him somewhere. OK now I have to go bye" and with that Khushi again left Ayan confused.

After heaving a big sigh Ayan left the car and entered the office but security stopped him.

"Where are you going?" Security asked.

"Inside" Ayan said

"You can't go in there" Security said.

"You know my dad is the owner of this company so if you won't let me go in than I could call my dad."

"Hahaha you and Arnav Singh Raizada son" Security guard said. Getting annoyed with that Ayan dialled Khushi number because he did not wanted to talk to Arnav at all.

"Yeah mom could you tell the guards to let me in" Ayan said on the phone and handed the phone to the guard.

"Yes mam" "Sorry mam" "Thank you mam" "Have a good day mam"

"Now can I go in?" Ayan asked smirking at him.

"Yes!!" Security said a little bit scared.

"Don't worry I am not cruel like my dad. I won't tell him I promise" Ayan said giving a 100 watt smile in which guard returned him a sweet smile and let him go in.

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"WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE?"
"WHY IS EVERYONE MESSING UP EVERYTHING?"
"I NEED EVERYONE TO WORK ON THIS PERFECTLY AND IF ANYONE MESS IT UP WILL HAVE TO DO THE SAME THING AGAIN 10 TIMES. GOT IT" Arnav said angry at his staff and angry that he hasn't seen his son for a week and he was missing his Khushi.

"Do you always yell?" Arnav turned around to yell the person who dard to talk to him but stopped when he saw Ayan standing over there. The whole staff was shocked to see a kid talking back to ASR and to top it all ASR did not said anything.

"Ayan not now. Don't make me do anything that I will regret it later. Go to my office right now and sit over there" Arnav said trying his best to calm but today his anger was uncontrollable.

"Are you trying to order me?" Ayan said gettign annoyed with him.

"Yes I am because I am your dad and I have a right to do anything." Arnav said to Ayan.

There was gasps heard around the office in which Arnav moved his head all around his staff showing them his angry look and everyone knew that they should get back to the work and that's what they did.

"I don't consider you my dad" Ayan said replying back to him.

"If you did not go up in three seconds than I will make sure to throw you out of the office right now" Arnav said and he showed his devilish smirk. "Two could play at this game" Arnav thought. He was sure angry right now but to make his stubborn son work he need to act like a devil.

"You can't do that. I am your son." Ayan said.

"Look who is talking. The son who doesn't even consider me as a father" Arnav said looking at his son whose face expression turned from shocked to annoying and than anger.

"1" Arnav said.

"Fine. Fine I am going." Ayan was walking towards his office but turned around again. "Umm dad"

"What?" Arnav asked a little bit rudely.

"I don't know where your office is" Ayan said.

Arnav got annoyed with him and he just took hold of his hand and took him upstairs.

"Now why did you came over here?" Arnav said making Ayan sit on the sofa.

Ayan took out a letter from his bag pack and gave to Arnav "Mom gave me this letter to give it to you" Ayan said. Arnav was confuse. Why would Khushi give him a letter. She could have just called him. Arnav turned the envelope to open it with one hand and was dialing Khushi number when he read on the envelope

"don't call me. Just open the letter and read it."

After reading this Arnav opened the letter and there was small smile on his lips. The letter said:

I know for you this is so stupid but I think it is cute. Writing letters is not your thing but it is mine so I am writing you this. I send Ayan to your office because first it's his birthday and second I want you to do some father son bonding today. Don't tell him it's his birthday. We are planning a surprise birthday party. He would be so happy. Please take him somewhere and buy the clothes for him so he could wear in a birthday party and don't forget to wear your tuxedo today. I think you look hot in black. I miss you. I hope you don't get angry at Ayan.

Love,
Khushi

"Why are you smiling?" Ayan asked all confused.

"You are coming with me right now." Arnav said and picked up his bag pack and left from there office. There was no option for Ayan so he just followed Arnav.

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So I know not a good update and nothing about the past. I am trying to make a bonding of Arnav and Ayan over here. I know the letter sucked LOL. There is not birthday of Ayan. Arnav will find that out from Ayan. Don't worry I think next update will be some bonding going on and somethings from the past.

Abdul😃




Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏thanks...brilliant...fabulous...please update sooon👏👏

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