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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Angelic_mishty

heyy frndz..πŸ˜›.πŸ˜›.πŸ˜›..

thnq very much for appreciating my work.... as m new to india forum...... can u guys just help me out wid it.... as in..how to add in pm..its uses.... n other required precedures..... thnqπŸ₯±πŸ˜†

i will help u
tell me wat help do u want ?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it very interesting plz continue it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good going.......keep it up.....πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me..

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...

Mishty_PMlist - /user/719496




Part 2

LOCATION CAR
...
geet in car...
all wet...
trying to dry her hairs...wid hands...
rajji - didi...apna sach me...kahin b shuru ho jate ho.πŸ˜ƒ.πŸ˜ƒ..
geet - aye lo...esme me kya galati hai...aisi barish me to kisi ka b man karega..πŸ˜›..khelne ka.πŸ˜›..
rajji - haan..jab mumma puchhengi ke sinus kyu ho raha hai... to b yahi batana.πŸ˜‰.πŸ˜‰.
geet - oyye teri...mumma.😭.😭..mumma to mujhe mar hi dalengi...

geet making baby face at rajji.😊.😊.
rajji - bilkul nahi.πŸ˜•..me isme koi madat nahi kar sakti...
geet - plz rajji.😭..
rajji - didi..πŸ˜›.me mumma ko nahi bataungi ke aap barish me..πŸ˜‰..
geet makes a face.πŸ˜•..
rajji - road par.πŸ˜‰..
geet rolls her eyes....
rajji - football khel rahi thi..πŸ˜›.πŸ˜‰.par...
geet - par kya😲...
rajji - sham ko to mumma ne pata chal jana hai.πŸ˜‰.πŸ˜‰..jab aap chheekon se pura ghar sir pe utha loge...
geet - heyy babaji.😭.😭..bachha lena plz...
rajji rolls her eyes...
...
dey reach to a mall...
rajji - didi pehli meri shopping plz..😊.
geet - achha chalo.πŸ˜›.bolo kya lena hai...
dey move further...
...

LOCATION OFFICE
...
he reached office...
ALL HE COULD SEE WAS HER ...
entered his cabin...
he felt as if it was raining in his cabin...she is playing football all alone...
he moved further towrds her...
she got disappeared...
sat on his chair...
he saw her sitting infront of him on d desk...an its raining on her..she is enjoying it
...

keeping eyes closed...
he tried to touch her...
she disappeared...
he snapped out of his thouts...
n opened a file...
he read her name...smiled...
reality stuckd him...
he again tried to read...
he was not able to read it...
his mind could think of her n only her...
he never believed in relationships wid emotions...
he alwz been d 1 who was strong enough to handle himself...
but he was lost it...for a name...
he couldn't believe himself dat he can get driven towrds any1 at 1 sight...
was it love at 1st sight...
but how can dat b in case of maan singh khurana..he wondered...
or it was just a attraction...
he was not able to make out...
he threw d file on desk n opened another...
he tried his level best to make himself busy n not think of her...
his world strted revolving around a single word geet...
he hated himself for being so helpless...
he closed his eyes...
her face..her moves...her expressions flashing in front of him...
his anger melted in a sec...
a soft smile teases his lips slowly...
...
her pink lips...
pink cheecks...

pink white combi face...
curly hairs...
he was flashing her as if she is standing in front of him...
closing his eyes...he would hav made her picture...
...
suddenly reality stuck him...
he opened his eyes angrily...
he couldn't believe himself behaving so indifferent...so dependent...
his eyes were bursting fire...
...
he pickd up d phone...
called secretary..
neeva - yes sir...
maan - prepond evening's meeting...
neeva - sir but..
maan - in nxt 15 min...
n cuts d call..
sumhow he wanted to get away from moment dat changed his life in a fraction of sec...
...
he is about to open another file...
gets a call...
maan - hello..
anwesha - hello bhai...
maan - hmm bolo...
anwesha - bhai..aap abhi yahan par aao...
maan - kahan annie..aur meri meeting hai abhi...
anwesha - aao matlab aao...aur wo b abhi..it's emergency...
anwesha gives him d adress of d mall...
maan helplessly calls neeva not to change d time of meeting...
...
he gets in car...
he saw her sitting in car beside him...all wet...as if she just had played in rain..
maan - tum...
she disappeared...
he closed his eyes..being frustated...
a thout stucked his mind...
he wanted to see her...
he was feeling like his heart vil sink if he vil not see her...
once..atleast once...he can do anthing for it...

he closed his eyes even more tightly...
saw her agin in his mind...
felt litle relief...
he told d driver to get from d same road...
driver - par sir..ye road to ulta ho jayega...
maan gives him a stirn look..
driver - sorry sir..
driver gets d car from dat road...
...
unfortunately...
dere was no traffic...
still he told d driver to stop d car...
d rain was lowered now...
he looked at d ground...
she was playing on d ground...
jumping in d air...
his heart feared if she get hurt if she fall...
b4 he could take out a word..
she disappeared...
he knew..dat he just being stupid looking her for dere...
how can she b dere again...
still he tried his level best...
to see for her everywhere at dat place...
in his single glance...
she was nowhere...
he started getting restless...
nothing seemed to sense him...
he was not in a state to understand wat was happening to him...y is he being so indifferent...

all he could understand was her...
d smile of her face...
her expressions...
pal me gussa..
pal me khush..
pal me udas...
pal me zhum uthna..
...
fighting wid his own thouts..
he sumhow reached d mall...
n got in.

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nxt pt - part 3
IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

love
MishTy
Edited by Angelic_mishty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

i m in love with your story....... love all the chercters............ their picks...... (arjun) rajiv

archna.. rati)........... all
would like to read more. so could you pm me too once when u update............. thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
omg loved it.............loved maan's restlessness.................amazingly explained his plight...............will they b meeting in next part..............hope he doesnt get very much obsessed with her.......thanks for the pm..............pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
continue it please PM me toooooooooooo
thats nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
super brilliant update...
completely enjoyed it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
beautiful introduction of geet even i can imagine her and was seeing from maan eyes awesome. plz if you can pm me . waiting for next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awsum work angelic.....:) :) :)
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