Originally posted by: Ssanjinika
Am all caught up...finally!! And what a stomach-aching laughter kind of trip it's been so far. I don't think I would ever be able to sit on a dentist's chair hereafter (and am due for a visit real soon) without seeming like an absolute lunatic who smiles and chuckles for no apparent reason. I loved imagining baby Khushi and little Arnav's antics but more than that, I dug Payal's wicked sense of humor. She's turning out to be the dark, dark humorous horse in this story. Now that Akash's making an entry, I wonder what hilarious things you have planned for them-Payal and Akash I mean.
I did enjoy the Rabba-ve and dhak-dhak scene. It was nicely done. But knowing KKG and ASR the way we do, I am sure these two are going to deny and run away from each other kicking and screaming (btw, I am imagining writerji having a rope on each hand, pulling hard on them while the characters are running like crazy 🤣) .
(Oops!! Just saw that the pic had a price listed below it. Deleted it hence.)
P.S.1. Am not sure if the image is subject to copyright or what the rules are here in IF. If there is a problem, I can edit the post and remove it. Pls someone let me know.
P.S.2. You have another ongoing story?! Two stories at the same time?!! Wow!!!
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