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Your perspective was spot on.
Loved how well you wrote this
Thanks so much for your comments dear! Glad you enjoyed it π
Your perspective was spot on.
Loved how well you wrote this
Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani
It was superb dear
I m lack of words right nowNaina is definitely a very good debaterThank God mere Sameer ko akal aa gyiAnd that sorry gesture of Sameer was super cuteπ³
Originally posted by: moumita04
Hey May... I am late... but finally am here... π³
I loved this OS... completely different take... I was wondering how a legal contract is going to incorporate in a Samaina story... but you did a fab job...! πLoved how Naina was completely frustrated... and didn't hesitate to put forth her points... True, she was... if they had been married Sameer wouldn't have been able to avoid like that... She could have exercised more right...The pain of not knowing what has happened because of which your partner is not talking to you is too much and you brought that out beautifully... The way she snapped at Munna showed how her control was stretched thin, yet she was persevering... Doing everything she could to find out the reason behind Sameer's behaviour...And the ending was perfect... sometimes love is enough... and if the love is deep and pure from both sides, it is indeed enough... π³All in all loved reading it... Hope you keep writing more..! π
Originally posted by: Riyagong
Different and wonderful perspective! Beautiful oneβ€οΈ Thank You !
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