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Posted: 3 years ago
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Restless Neil 🤣and trying to move on Mini 🤣 loving this . Neil going to Mini's wedding !! Now this is biggest scene . Their faceoff


they will face each other and start their banter as usual🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Bechara Neil smiley37 mujhe ye turbulent bacha pasand hai smiley43

Isse situation mein kamina out of control ho jata haismiley37

Kahani abh flashback mein hoga

Mujhe isse perfectly imperfect mard pasand hai


Kya end mein MiNeil ki shaadi hogi Goa mein ?

Goa aur MiNeil ka realtionship toh pehle se hai

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Part 2


“Mini, your friends are here beta, come soon.” Babita shouted to let her daughter know about the arrival of her friends.


Mini came down almost running on the stairs of resort, half excited, half nervous. As hotel staff welcomed the guest of bride to be, with coconut water and orchids garlands, Mini came and stood by the side of her mother quietly.


One by one Bobby, Jasmeet, Preet and Mickey came and greeted her, Mini managed to hide the nervousness and put up a smile hugging them back.


“Thanks a lot for coming guys. You are true friends. Please make yourselves comfortable and we will be meeting shortly for the lunch.” Mini told them as her father instructed hotel staff to give keys of rooms booked for them.


“All have come right? Is anyone missing?” Ashok, Mini’s father asked from her when he saw hotel staff carrying one extra key but all of Mini’s friend had been already shown their rooms.


“Yes, No, I mean not someone of any importance...its ok, must be busy in something, its not necessary everyone will find time to attend my marriage.” Mini said, the sadness was not missed by her father.


“Then why my daughter is sad over the absence of this “not so important person”” Ashok asked as he hugged his daughter from side.


“Nothing....like that...its just...” Mini trailed off not knowing what to say. She herself didn’t know what she was feeling right now. Ideally she should have felt relieved that the folly she done by inviting him was now corrected as he didn’t come but she had no idea why she was sad all of a sudden and more than sad, she was angry now...she wanted to do something....to punch someone face...but WHY?


“Hey! What happened to my princess?” Ashok asked as she looked at Mini’s face. It looked like she will cry any moment now. He knew her daughter very well to ignore this as just another moments of anxiety of ‘bride to be’. His baby girl made this face when something terrible had happened. He was worried now. He turned her around to ask her the reason when Bobby called out the last remaining member of their group.


“Neil! Kaha reh gaya tha? Itni der kyu ho gayi?”


“Arre wo ek important call tha office se.” Neil replied.


Mini turned towards the gate when she heard the name and his voice. Her upset face brought up most bright smile when she spotted him. This didn’t go unnoticed by Ashok. He looked at the cause of this bright smile and found a familiar face at the gate. He knew this boy...what was his name? He was the same one his daughter would gush about excitedly when she used to come back home on her leaves from work. That boy...some..Nitin...no Neil...yes Neil Oberoi. The same boy...her social media account was full of their pics together, she even changed her status to ‘committed’, the same boy with whom Babita feared that Mini was in a live in relationship.


Ashok chuckled when he remembered how Babita had given him ideas of paying a surprise visit to Mini’s place to check whether she lives alone as she claims or she has shifted with that boy. Then dont know what happened after sometime, Mini had just stopped talking about Neil. He had even tried finding out the reason but Mini said she doesn’t want to talk about him. He had not missed the expressions on her baby girl’s face, she looked like she had lost something so precious, though he wanted to probe further but as a loving father he had always stood by her daughter’s decision so he didnt pester her. Neil came towards Ashok bringing him out of his thoughts.


“Hello uncle, many congratulations to you, you must be very happy as your daughter is settling down in life and I am happy for you Mini. You found your Mr. Perfect, that was your dream always....” Neil stopped in between awkwardly as he didn’t know what to say further.


“Thank you Neil and please make yourself comfortable here.” Ashok replied affectionately.


“Welcome Neil, achha laga tum aaye. I was not expecting you but...its nice to see you here.” Mini lied about not expecting him here part.


Neil didn’t know what to make out of Mini’s formal reply and what does she even meant she was not expecting him, “Why did you invite me if you were not expecting me? Was it because of courtesy as you invited all our common friends, if thats the case then I can go back by next flight, its ok.” Neil replied a little too harshly then needed. He just lost the control momentarily as seeing Mini after so long time in such awkward situation where she was behaving like she is not affected by his presence, it all become too much for him.


“I didn’t mean that. I mean, you dont have the compassion to do something for others’ happiness...thats it. So I thought you wont come here to see me finally getting my dream style marriage with my Mr.Perfect.” Mini gave equally caustic reply.


“So you invited me here for a show off. That so like you Mini, you haven’t changed.” Neil snapped back.


“Oh please! You are last person I will think about while I am about to have my dream fulfilled. You are not that important you know.” Mini defended.


“Then why you invited me?” Neil questioned back.


“You know what...you should actually catch the next flight from here.” Mini answered back.


“Did you just ask me to get out?” Neil asked offended.


“And did you just say all those mean things to me on my wedding?” Mini asked equally offended.


“Its not your wedding today.” Neil reminded.


“Yes its tomorrow but the functions have started so yes, my wedding rituals already begun.” Mini clarified.


All the while Ashok and Bobby were just looking at both of them totally shocked. Bobby didn’t expect them to break into a banter like this like they used to do every other day during their courtship.


Ashok was confused as to what is happening to his daughter all of a sudden. First she was sad then she smiled when she saw this Neil and now they are fighting like some crazy angry lovers...o’ oh! Crazy lovers! Is he thinking in right direction? Is it really what it seems to be? But Mini is going to get married tomorrow....hell! Ashok looked at Bobby and he thought he needed to know the whole truth.


“I think you should just...” Neil started again but stopped by Bobby.


“Abe kya kar raha hai tu? Neil, chup bhi kar. Mini ki shadi ho rahi hai yaar aur hum yaha wo attned karne aaye hain.” Bobby whispered angrily.


“Exactly! What is happening here? Ye tum dono kis behas mein pad gaye...chhodo bhi. Mini, you go with your mom, Neil tum bhi jakar aaram karo aur Bobby, beta zara idhar aana to...” Ashok pulled Bobby with him.

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“I heard what happened down there. Told you, you should not have invited him.” Neha scolded Mini.


“I didn’t know he is still that thick head. Bloody moron!” Mini cursed.


“Why you even care that he has not changed? Its good na, you should be happy that you made right decision by breaking up with him.You deserve a lot better than him. He is just a bag full of flaws and Sid is beyond perfect.” Neha reminded her.


“Ya, you are right. Its because of his this kind of toxic nature that I was fed up from him.” Mini agreed.


“Ya, right. Now please babe, focus on your wedding. Dont think too much, it can give you wrinkles.” Neha warned and both the friends got busy in their makeup.

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“I am asking you patiently Bobby puttar ji, please tell me all you know about Neil and Mini.” Ashok plastered a fake smile on his face to hide his frustration as he asked from Bobby for the fifth time. Seems like Bobby had taped his mouth, refusing to reveal anything.


“Uncle ji main sach keh raha hoon, mujhe kuch nahi pata.” Bobby replied as he wiped the sweat from his forehead.


“Bobby puttar ji, you know I am ex army man. If you dont want me to show my army skills on you then spill the beans, its about my daughter’s life.” Ashok threatened him finally and Bobby started talking.

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“I got to know what happen downstairs Neil, please dont create any scene here. Its her wedding.” Mickey suggested.


“Dream wedding...I know but for you kind information, I didn’t start it.” Neil clarified.


“But you could have ended it. Come on yaar, she was your past, you two have moved on. Then why suddenly behaving like some stupid jealous ex. Be mature.” Mickey advised.


“I am not some stupid jealous ex. I am mature thats why I have come here or else I could have avoided it altogether. Its just that she hasn’t changed a bit, still that cranky, nagging girl” Neil defended.


“Thats right, you should remember that and be happy that she is getting married to someone else and you are having a blast in your life.” Mickey gave yet another piece of advice.


“Yes, I should be happy I didn’t end up with her.”Neil agreed.

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Ashok was listening to Bobby since half an hour. He finally got to know what was between Neil and Mini. He had controlled his laughter with difficulty when he got to know that Mini was actually in live in relationship with Neil, something her mother always doubted. He could imagine Babita’s scandalised expression right now if she ever got to know.


“But what went wrong between them?” Ashok asked further.


“Same old story uncle. We all worked in the same company. They met, fell in love and moved in together. Yaha tak to has story mein sab kuch achha hi hota hai...all pink and roses. Asli problems to iske baad hi start hoti hai na.” Bobby replied.


“Matlab kya hai tera?” Ashok questioned.


“Oh ji uncle ji, aapke zamane mein pyar alag type ka hota tha. Pyar hone ke baad shadi hoti thi uske baad hi ladka ladki ek saath reh paate the. Phir agar aapas mein jhagde ho bhi gaye to parivar ke bade bujurg dono ko samjha kar wapas bhej dete the aur jhagde khatam karwa dete the. Aaj kal ji sab ulta hota hai, ab ladka ladki live in mein shadi se pehle hi ek couple ki tarah rehte hain ji. Dono independent hain, confident hain, unke rishte mein kisi ka dakhal nahi hai, apne faisle khud lete hain. Aise mein koi bhi thoda sa bhi adjustment karne ko ready nahi hota." Bobby paused to see Ashok who nodded his head signaling him to continue.


"Jab ek dusre ki chhoti chhoti kamiyan, chhoti chhoti galtiya, pasand na aane wali aadatein samne aati hai na ji to koi bhi adjust nahi karna chahta. Shadi to hui nahi hoti ki todne se pehle sochna samajhna pade. bas live in hai, jab chaha apna samaan bandha aur nikal liye alag alag raaste par. Bas Mini aur Neil ke sath bhi yahi hua. Jab pyar naya naya tha to ek dusre ki galtiyo par bhi pyar aata tha par jab sath mein rehna shuru kiya to wahi galtiyan aankhon mein chubhne lagi, chhoti chhoti behas kab bade jhagdo mein badal gayi pata hi nahi chala phir dono ne break up karne ka faisla kar liya.” Bobby explained.


“But exactly what ground of these small fights?” Ashok put forward his doubt as he still get what led them to break up.


Bobby sighed as he repeated it again, “Arre wahi same old-


Tumne geela towel bed par kyu chhoda

Tum taiyar hone mein kitna waqt lagati ho

Tum mere friends ke sath outing plan karne se bahana kyu banate ho.

Tumhare friends boring hai. I dont get along with them.

Hamesha main hi kyu tumhare plan ke according leave loon.

Tum family gathering mujhse puchh kar kyu nahi decide karti.

Involve me in financial decisions, I am earning too.

Dont involve me in your shopping schedules.

Lets plan our wedding.

Thoda aur intezar karte hain, ek promotion mil jaye.

You dont compliment me now a days. Dont bring me surprise gifts.

You started acting like a nagging wife.

Lets do something to spice up things baby, its getting so monotonous.

Arre hamesha thode hi na romantic Hollywood movie jaisa sex ho sakta hai, give me a break. Etc etc etc.”


“OK... Okay! Bahut jyada details ki zarurat nahi hai...main samajh gaya.” Ashok stopped him getting un comfortable as Bobby started sharing too much of it.


“But these kind of problems are faced by almost all the couples, you friends never tried to make them understand?” Ashok asked further.


“We tried, we really wanted them to be together. They really loved each other very much, we always used to say they are made for each other. But when these small fights blow out of proportion and ego starts taking the place of love in the hearts then its really difficult to make someone understand.” Bobby sighed remembering their failed attempts.


“After that what happened? I mean, Mini was sad for sometime, she even changed her job. I had thought she was just stressed out because of new job and responsibilities. Gradually she was normal again also then she started seeing Sidhharta and when he proposed her, she said yes to him. What about Neil?” Ashok inquired.


“Neil was also sad initially but then he declared that he is done with the mourning. He also started dating again. All was going fine until...” Bobby took a pause.


“Until, Mini sent an invitation card to him.” Ashok completed his sentence.


“Yes, we all thought that he is being mature enough, accepting his past gracefully, coming here to wish his ex for bright future but....” Bobby again took a pause.


“But now after witnessing their argument you are not sure of anything.” Ashok again completed his sentence and he himself started thinking how he is going to tackle this situation.

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to be continued....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: zalima

Bechara Neil smiley37 mujhe ye turbulent bacha pasand hai smiley43

Isse situation mein kamina out of control ho jata haismiley37

Kahani abh flashback mein hoga

Mujhe isse perfectly imperfect mard pasand hai


Kya end mein MiNeil ki shaadi hogi Goa mein ?

Goa aur MiNeil ka realtionship toh pehle se hai


tumhe kaunsa neil pasand nahi hai🤣

nasheela kamina mard, chalu chant kamina aur turbulent neil...har neil tumhara fav hai....bilkul meri tarah☺️🤣

kar liya dusra update padh lo😆

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they will meet and fire works will start as always🤣

Love this tensions emitting from their body lang☺️🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ashok army man and looks like he is going to support MiNeil loved this dad daughter bond here .

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Bobby details🤣ashok was right🤣 thank god bubbly was not there or else she would have fainted 🤣

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Lo chalu ho gaye🤣

Ye b nahi dekha aas pass kaun hai 🤣

Ye hai MiNeil

Ye Bobby toh ek dum open hai🤣


Ye ashok mujhe dil hai ke manta nahin film ka Anupam kher wala daddy lag raha hai iconic scene jo end mein beti Mini ko bhag ne mein help karega 🤣 jaa Mini ..tu perfectly imperfect Neil se pyar karti hai aur woh tum se


Bhag Mini bhag 🤣

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Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul


tumhe kaunsa neil pasand nahi hai🤣

nasheela kamina mard, chalu chant kamina aur turbulent neil...har neil tumhara fav hai....bilkul meri tarah☺️🤣

kar liya dusra update padh lo😆

Haan🤣

Neil toh har variety mein maal hi maal hai top to bottom☺️

Upar se tera nasheela writing skills jo Neil ko aur b zyada yummy banata hai

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Originally posted by: zalima



Ye ashok mujhe dil hai ke manta nahin film ka Anupam kher wala daddy lag raha hai iconic scene jo end mein beti Mini ko bhag ne mein help karega 🤣 jaa Mini ..tu perfectly imperfect Neil se pyar karti hai aur woh tum se


Bhag Mini bhag 🤣

Love this postive ashok and Daddy cool ashok he is here we should have a scene .where ashok says MiNeil to run 🤣 bhag mini bhag 🤣 and bubbly she will divorce ashoksmiley37smiley37


in Dil hai ki film that's my favt scene I so wanted daddy like him during childhood🤣🤣



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