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agree...main kitni achi sudhari bholi bhaali nayi nawelii bacchi thi...Originally posted by: anjali0111
Saare mineilians ek dusre ki sangati mein bigad rahe hain🤣
6month me kya bana diya yaar tumlogo ne🤣
agree...main kitni achi sudhari bholi bhaali nayi nawelii bacchi thi...Originally posted by: anjali0111
Saare mineilians ek dusre ki sangati mein bigad rahe hain🤣
6month me kya bana diya yaar tumlogo ne🤣
Originally posted by: Khushi1311
agree...main kitni achi sudhari bholi bhaali nayi nawelii bacchi thi...
6month me kya bana diya yaar tumlogo ne🤣
Dekho talent to aap mein pehle se hi tha bas humne to thoda push n pull kiya use bahar laane ke liye🤣
Originally posted by: Khushi1311
sangati me meri ....teri sangati mili to...mujhe ye sb idea aaye....mujhe ye sb aaye...🤣 vocabulary me tere words ki khusboo...tu jo paass aayi...tu jo paas aayi🤣🤣🤣🤣
Waah
Shayaro ki kami nahi hai yaha🤣
Originally posted by: anjali0111
haayee I cant believe it....you said this....you know what....When i wrote this story first time I named it that only..."Ye vaada raha"
Bhakkk...mazak niii...
Seriously??? I can't believe too...
Nd u won't believe...ye song mko second chapter se hi yaad aa rha tha not just once but with many a times...then i thought...story thora aage badhne dete h...fir when those destiny...promise part came...i failed to hold it anymore
Andhere m teer mara tha...sahi tukka lag gya🤣
I found the name perfect
Yeahhh!! Index p brief aur etne chapters padhkr mko bhi yhi lga...
but was skeptical if i kept the same name this time may be some former readers of this stories will find it and come back and beat me as I left it incomplete on their fav couple🤣🤣
Omg!! My devil mind an ideaa!!😈 should i inform them afterall they too deserve to know ending😆
first i thought to continue with the same story but now I have decided to make few changes to suit miniel
Jo bhi changes aur tumhara blackmagic ho tum jaano......but all your stories are like some drug. Feels addicted to them. U won't believe but EMBRACE was the first ever fanfic in my entire life that I completed reading otherwise main to kch chapters padh kar bore ho jaati thii.... then CURE ME WAS just❣...haaye Kya krdiya anjali tume...i really wonder sometimes that someday u will get me glasses to wear🤣😆🤣
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Arre majaak nahi hai maa kasam sachhi
Yahi naam rakha tha
Ya you got it right. The prologue the storyline...it is about mineil's promise to each other....thats why ye vaada raha
Sach batao tumne kaise socha ye....sach mein sorf co incidence hai kya.....ya jasusi ki hai tumne meri sush ke sath mil kar can you guys read my mind now
Aur bilkul bhi mat batana purane show ke fans ko....ek to ab story thodi si badlegi aur dusra abhi bhi kabhi kabhi bhule bisre msg aa jate hai mujhe to complete that years old story aur sabse important... fans are connected emotionally to their fav jodis...they wont like anyone else in their place....so to respect that sentiments i changed the name and story
And thanks for reading all my stories. You, sush and avni are most consistence readers....you have read almost all of my work. Even ruhani ishq and now this one....which have comparatively less readers as its not everyone's cup of tea
Originally posted by: anjali0111
Arre majaak nahi hai maa kasam sachhi
Yahi naam rakha tha
Psychic hogyi main tb to🤣🤣 still can't believe etna sahii tukka to aaj tk exams me nhi lga yaar🤣
Ya you got it right. The prologue the storyline...it is about mineil's promise to each other....thats why ye vaada raha
Hayeeeeee
Sach batao tumne kaise socha ye....sach mein sorf co incidence hai kya.....ya jasusi ki hai tumne meri sush ke sath mil kar
Main khud shocked hoon yaar😆
Sush aur mujjpr aysa allegations...🤣🤣🤣ye vichaar h tumhare hmare vishay me🤣🤣 dekho sushi😆 apunlg famous😎🤣 mind reading😳 telepathy chal rha h mineilians m lgta h😆
Aur bilkul bhi mat batana purane show ke fans ko....ek to ab story thodi si badlegi aur dusra abhi bhi kabhi kabhi bhule bisre msg aa jate hai mujhe to complete that years old story
Okay...okay😆 aaj tk messages etne saal baad bhi😆 wahaaa😆
And thanks for reading all my stories. You, sush and avni are most consistence readers....you have read almost all of my work. Even ruhani ishq and now this one....which have comparatively less readers as its not everyone's cup of tea
Magic of ur writing❤️
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Hii friends, sorry for the delays. Here is the next chapter. Hope you will like it.
Chapter 6 Destiny’s desire part 2
Neil and Mickey were sitting in a caffe and sipping coffee, discussing about their career. Neil smiled thinking about Mini, “You know Mickey, I met her again.”
“Who?Mini?” Mickey asked.
“Yeah, obviously Mini. You are my best friend. Have you seen me like this before? I mean day dreaming and smiling for no reason .It has to be Mini. You know every time I meet her I become surer that I love her.” Neil replied.
Listening to his words Mickey suddenly remembered about Isha in last night's party and he wondered whether he should talk with Neil about her or not. After a lot of struggle in his mind he concluded that he should not interfere in this as he was not very sure Isha likes Neil. May be his interference may lead to problems in Isha and Neil’s friendship and some matters better be left in the hands of destiny. Let Neil find out himself when the right time comes.
“Where are you lost?Have you also found someone? Neil asked seeing him so confused.
“Oh no'I was just was thinking about our band. Neil three days had already passed since we came, tell me have you planned anything yet. I mean how we'll be taking this whole band, our career further.” Mickey asked coming out of his thoughts.
“Yeah, I was thinking we should start working on new songs. But it is not enough. I mean we are talented only we know it but how to tell it to others? We had fans in our college but its not enough we need some popularity and fan base much larger than just college fans. I mean if we release our album who is going to buy it if no one knows us.” Neil stated the obvious problem.
“Yes you are right. We actually need a platform to showcase our talent. We should'……” Mickey couldn’t complete his sentence when suddenly a promo on tv set hung in the caffe caught his attention and he shouted in excitement. “Got it!!”
“What happened dude?” Neil asked shocked from his behavior.
“I have got our entry pass in music world. Look at there.” Mickey pointed towards the tv.
Neil looked at his direction and smile crept on his face slowly. The promo said-
“If you are dreaming to make your career in the music industry but don't know how to reach up there, then your wait is over. Channel Mtv presents in colaboration with Vh 1- biggest talent hunt music show ever on TV. All you have to do is give auditions with your band. If selected you will have an opportunity to participate in the international level competition judged by super talented and well known personalities of music world from around the world. Winner will get cash prize of Rs. 25 crores and contract of an album which will be released by us Mtv and Vh 1 all over the world.”
Both Neil and Mickey got super excited and hi fived each other.
“I cant believe it yaar. Few seconds ago we were discussing how we'll take our first step and suddenly destiny has showed us whole path.” Neil stated happily surprised on his luck now.
“Yes bro. I am sure we gonna win it. If not win then also at least we'll be famous 'it would be easier for us then to shape our career.” Mickey agreed.
“Then what are we waiting for? Call all other members of band. We have to do lots of preparations.” Neil shouted in excitement.
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Mini was sitting on her bed with a book in her hands which she was trying to read since half an hour but could not concentrate as her mind was filled with evening's lift encounter with Neil. Arya was passing by her room when she again noticed that her sister was daydreaming. She tip toed in her room and closed the door. With the sound of door Mini looked up to find Arya approaching her with mischievous smile.
“What are you doing here chhutanki at this hour. Its late and children like you should sleep early.” Mini tried to avoid her.
“Oh come on sis I am not a kid anymore. I am grown up enough to understand the reason behind the shy smile you have now a days.” Arya sat in front of Mini.
“What do you mean?” Mini pretended not to understand anything.
“ I mean ever since my sis has returned from that party after meeting that'...what was the name'….ya, Neil' right!!...so after meeting that Neil my sis is not in her senses.” Arya commented.
“ Arya you are thinking too much. You are not old enough for these type discussions.” Mini chided her.
“Oh sis, in which world you are living'. I am already 12 and would become sweet 16 in some 4 years' and don't forget I am a sucker of romantic movies and sharukh khan's die hard fan. So you see, I cannot only understand these issues but can also give advice to you. And besides this, apart from me we have only mom and dad in our house so I m sure you don't wanna discuss it with them atleast.” Arya laughed at her.
“Ok meri maa. I will tell you. Yes I met Neil in the party. He is Yash uncle's son. Then we again met today in the office' I mean he has come to meet me. He is showing interest in me 'as in you know….”Mini started blushing.
“Ya, ya I know'.so whats the problem??You don't like him?” Arya asked excitedly.
“No.. no'I didn't say that.” Mini replied immediately.
“Oh I see….aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai.” Arya laughed again.
“Shut up. You are so filmy.” Mini said in fake anger.
“Ok baba' I will not say anything now' tell me whats the problem?” Arya asked still giggling.
“Well I kinda like him but I am super confused. I mean how I can develop feelings for someone whom I just met twice.How can I trust him? I don't know anything about him.
“Sis…you never know'…kabhi kabhi bas ek mulaqaat hi kafi hoti hai pyaar mein padne ke liye aur kabhi kabhi saari umar bhi kam pad jaati hai.” Arya said thoughtfully.
“Ye dialogue tumne kaun si film se churaya hai?” Mini asked raising her eyebrow.
“Ok.. ok sorry'..I know ye dialogue chori ka hai but'.. its true. You are complaining that you don't know him'. So if you like him then you should try to know him more.” Arya shrugged as she suggested simple solution.
“But how?” Mini asked in confusion.
“Oh sis are you really from other world? Normal people call this process as " DATING". Kya yaar mere class ki bachhe bachhe ko ye pata hai aur tum ho ki.....You should ask him fora date.” Arya winked at her.
“You know Arya'...he has already asked me out for a date.” Mini replied while blushing.
“Oh he has already did it!!! Thank god!!At least he is intelligent enough to ask it. Aapke bharose rehta toh bechaara kunwara hi reh jaata.” Arya laughed at Mini.
“Shut up. Ok'..if he'll come again to meet me and ask me out I'll say yes.” Mini replied as she threw a pillow at Arya who was still laughing at her.
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“Mickey, have you got us registered for the auditions. What is the auditions date?” Neil asked from Mickey as they were sitting in Neil’s room in Oberoi mansion.
“yes, I have registered our band, auditions are after 20 days and I also informed all of our members' but' there is a problem.” Mickey informed.
“What problem?” Neil asked apprehensively.
“Actually Jazz cant come for some time as her mother is serious.” Mickey informed.
“So what? Its only about the auditions we can manage without Jazz. She will come once her mother will be ok.” Neil gave his opinion.
“Actually, the problem is that I have already registered the names of all the members when I told them that our one member cant make it to the auditions. They didn't agree. When I told them about problem' they, with difficulty, agreed for a substitute for temporary basis. So all we have to do is find a female singer to join our band for few rounds of auditions.” Mickey explained.
“What, how can they do that? Now how will we find a female singer here in Mumbai that too in such a short time? I also don't have many friends here…I don’t know people here.” Neil stated the obvious problem.
Meanwhile Isha entered in the room.
“Hii Neil, hi Mickey” She greeted them but none of the two replied her properly as they were thinking about their problem. “Any problem guys?” she asked.
“ Isha hi….so aaj meri yaad kaise aa gayi?” Neil asked coming out of thoughts.
“Actually, dad has come to meet Yash uncle so I thought I should also meet you so I came with him. You look worried…'is there any problem?” she asked again.
“Have you seen the promos of the music reality show by Mtv and Vh1? We are giving auditions for that and we need a female singer to perform at auditions as our band member can't come.” Neil told her the problem after thinking for a while he thought she can be trusted.
“What! you' and reality show'. You have formed music band? Yash uncle knows about it?” Isha asked totally shocked from this revelation.
“ Isha, I will explain everything later.First tell me do you any girl who can help us?” Neil asked getting irritated from her interrogation.
“Well…..yes, one of my friend learns music. She is not inthe town. But I know her music school may be you can find someone there.” Isha suggested.
“Oh, thank you so much Isha. You are a sweetheart.” Neil hugged her in excitement. He did it in a friendly gesture but Isha blushed thinking it had other meaning.
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Mini has come office earlier than usual. She remembered last night discussion with Arya. She was expecting Neil today also in the office and she has decided that this time she will say yes for their date. She has paid extra attention to her looks today. With her light blue formal shirt. She has matched grey jacket and trousers with matching sandals and has left her hair open. Usually she avoids make up but today she put on some make up too for added effect. But to her utter disappointment whole day just went like that but Neil didn't come. She left the office with a sad face and went to sargam music institute to pick up Arya.
Mini was waiting outside the institute when she noticed a car stopped near the gate and to her surprise the person whom she was waiting to meet the whole day came out of it. His friend Mickey was also with him. She was happy to see Neil and proceeded towards him but then stopped in the middle to see Isha also joining them. She felt a sharp pain as if someone has poke needle in her heart and rudely brought her out of her beautiful dream. She had got the same strong feeling which she got in the party on seeing him with this girl. But this time, she finally recognized this feeling as JEALOUSY….yes she was jealous of this girl, but why, she thought, is she really falling in love with Neil? But then her confusion was replaced by anger when she thought that this was the reason Neil didn't come to office. He was busy hanging out with his childhood friend. She followed them inside the institute.
As Neil entered inside he heard a melodious voice practicing a classical song. He looked at the girl. She was a young girl, probably, in her teens. She was singing with so much dedication and her voice was as sweet as wind chimes. Instantly Neil decided only this girl is going to be in their band. Mickey argued that she is singing Indian classical while there band will need versatile singer. But Neil said they have time to practice and by looking the dedication in the girl she will make it once she agrees. But Mickey still argued that she is just a kid. In reply Neil asked if there is any age limit for the show. When Mickey shook her head in ‘No’ Neil smiled with determination and said they should approach this girl only as he can see that passion in her for music.
Neil turned around feeling someone is staring him and was surprised to see Mini there. A sweet smile crept on his face and he moved towards her leaving Isha and Mickey behind to talk with one of the teacher and ask about the details of the girl they chose.
“Are you stalking me…sweet heart?” Neil winked at her.
“What? Its your job to stalk people.”Mini replied rudely.
“Uh oh! Someone is in a bad mood today. Are you upset that I didn't come office today.” Neil teased her.
“what!..I m not upset or anything.” Mini averted her eyes.
Neil got the hint that she was indeed upset because of him, “Did I say today you are looking beautiful, more than usual.” He said to flatter her.
Mini’s anger started melting, she started smiling shyly, “What are you doing here?” she asked.
“I am in a need of female singer as our band giving audition in a talent hunt show. All the day me and Mickey were busy finding one and Isha was helping us. Finally we have find one. Hope she agrees.”Neil explained and pointed towards a girl.
“So you are a singer? Hmmm… good dancer,singer…'I must say you are multi talented.” Mini praised him.
“You don't know my talents yet. 'Juts give me one chance.” Neil winked at her and Mini gasped unable to believe he really said something like that. “By the way, have you noticed how our paths crossed each time even when we don't intend to meet? So are you gonna accept it and come on a date with me or still want me to try a little harder?” Neil asked directly now.
Mini was going to say yes to him but suddenly remembers that she was angry, “Well, date with you….ok but where? Why don't you come to my home?” Mini said and then started laughing looking at his shocked expressions.
Neil realized that she was joking and decided to play along, “Oh really, I didn't know you are so desperate to marry me. Cutting all the craps you are inviting me at your home to meet your parents.” Now Neil joked and it was Mini’s turn to be in shock.
“Hahaha…'very funny'. You have to come to my home anyways'….cause that girl ..” Mini pointed towards the girl they wanted in their band. “…….is Arya. She is my younger sister and you have to convince my parents if you want her in your band.” Mini informed.
“Wow!.Now thats what I called destiny'. So miss Mini, 'goodbye for now. Don't worry we'll meet very soon kyunki ab toh aana jaana laga hi rahega ghar par.” Neil said and gave his most charming smile. He left with Isha and Mickey after that.
Mini also went home with Arya smiling all through out the way. She has accepted finally that she likes Neil and he must be given a chance. She has already told Arya about everything and she was excited more than Mini to meet his would be jiju and if her parents agree,to work with him in band.
To be continued…..
precap- first date
Chapter 7 The tunes of Love
It was another busy morning for Singhs as everyone was getting ready for their respective works. Hanuman and Mini for office, Arya for school and Babita was busy in giving instructions to the servants to arrange the breakfast on the table.
With the sound of doorbell all looked towards the door wondering who can be there at this early morning. Servant opened the door and found a handsome boy standing there. He wished to meet Mr. Singh and servant welcomed him in the house.
Hanuman went towards the living area and found Neil sitting on the sofa. He was surprised to see him and welcomed him and called Babita to introduce him to her. Mini and Arya also came there and they too were surprised to see Neil. They were expecting him but they didn't know he'll come this early in the morning. Arya gave Mini a meaningful glance and whispered in her ear, "Sis, hone wale jiju ko toh bahut jaldi hai lagta hai bas subah uthte hi seedhe yahan aa gaye." Arya started giggling. Mini scolded her "shut up Arya. Stop calling him hone wale jiju”
“So Neil 'itni subah yahan Yash ne kisi office ke kaam se bheja hai kya? Main toh bas office ke liye nikal ne hi waala tha'tumne bekaar mein hi takleef ki.” Hanuman said guessing the reason for his arrival.
“No uncle actually I have not come here for any office purpose. I want a little favour from you.” Neil replied nervously.
“Favour? Ok tell me.” Hanuman said.
“Uncle me and my band is giving auditions for new music reality show on tv but the problem is that our lead female singer can't come because her mother is ill so we have to find her substitute. We went to one music school for that and there I listened to your daughter, Arya. She is very good singer. So I was thinking if she could help us?” Neil explained his problem.
“Its great you are taking part in the show. I will be happy if I could help you by anyway but its about Arya so let her decide what she wants.” Hanuman said and looked at Arya.
“ I want to help him.” Arya replied immediately without wasting any time.
“But Neil'.Arya is already giving time to her music school and now a days she is very fragile health wise, catches fever very often. With all these things how she'll manage her studies?” Babita expressed her concerns.
“Dont worry aunty. This is only temporarily till our band member returns. We just have to give auditions at three levels. It won't take much time. And as regarding her health I assure you aunty I will take care of her there will not any pressure on her mind.” Neil promised.
“Come on mom I promise I will not neglect studies.” Arya urged making puppy face.
“Ok fine baba you can join their band.”Babita and Hanuman agreed.
Arya was very happy at this. She gave yet another meaningful glance to Mini and winked at her. Mini also couldn't help but smile.
“Bye everyone I am getting late for office.” Hanuman said and got up to leave.
“No dad wait for me just five minutes and you have to drop Arya to the school also as my scooty is gone for servicing and driver has not came so I am not gonna drive that other khatara car.” Mini stopped him.
“Oh Mini you always make me late. I am not gonna wait for you.” Hanuman replied irritated at the situation.
Meanwhile Neil interrupted and said to Mini'" well, if you don't mind let uncle go I am going the same way so I can drop you both." “ thank you very much Neil. Its so kind of you.” Hanuman replied before Mini could say anything. Neil proceeded towards his car with Mini and Arya. Arya quickly get into the back seat forcing Mini to sit on front sea twith Neil.
Neil smiled looking at Arya from rear view mirror, “So Arya are you happy and comfortable with all this thing na?”
“Oh yes I am cool with it in fact exciting.” Arya replied with a wide grin.
Neil and Arya started chatting. Meanwhile Mini was listening their conversation On one side she was happy to see that they are becoming friends fast but on the other side she was feeling left out and also a little bit jealous that her sister is getting all Neil's attention. Arya couldn't help but laugh sensing the reason behind this. Neil also laughed with her. Seeing them laughing Mini became embarrassed and looked outside the window to avoid meeting their eyes. Arya's school had come so she bid goodbye to them and ran towards the school gate.
Now only Mini and Neil were there in the car. Both were silent. “Oh why he is not asking me out for a date waise toh hamesha kehta rehta hai….that we should meet. Now what happened?” Mini wondered. While Neil was lost in his own thoughts, "hmm…should I ask her for a date? I have already asked her many times but she didn't reply. I don't wanna sound like pushy and crazy lover." Both of them didn’t say anything and realized that office has come so Mini get out of the car and was about to go when Neil stopped her.
Neil thought to ask random questions about Arya for starting conversation, “umm Mini...i wanna ask...”
“Yeah I will come with you on a date.”Mini replied hurriedly before even letting him complete.
“I just wanna ask you about Arya's school timing so that I can schedule our practice sessions.” Neil completed his sentence smiling mischievously at her.
“Woh…actually...I didn't mean...her school gets over at 3.00pm.” Mini was highly embarrassed now and started to walk tow ards the office without looking back at him.
“ Mini, I will pick you up at 8.00pm for the date…..be ready.” Neil finally said and winked at her leaving her smiling and blushing.
Mini ran inside the office saying ‘ok’.
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Neil came to Mickey’s house with Arya after her school . They have decided that they'll practice at his house as it was big enough and was in the secluded area, little far from main road so there will not be any disturbances for them and his parents were ok with this music and all so they happily allowed them. Other members Bobby and Preet have also arrived there. Neil introduced them to Arya. They welcomed her in their band.
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It was already7.30 pm in the clock and Mini was still confused what to wear on her special evening. She looked at watch and panicked,“oh god its 7.30 already. He'll come anytime' I am not ready yet. Arya was looking at her from last 1 hour and was laughing continuously at her condition. At last she took pity on her sister and helped her in selecting a dress n matching accessories with it. Mini wore knee length black color figure hugging dress. At sharp 8.00pm her phone ranged. She took the call and smiled seeing Neil’s call. Arya winked at her and said, “Go princess your prince charming has come.
Outside the Singh’s house Neil was waiting for Mini. He stood leaning on his car with his arms crossed across his chest. He was wearing semi formal dress. He has also gone through the confusion of what to wear. Tried many dinner jackets and formal suits but not feeling comfortable in them he finally with Mickey's suggestion decided to wear casual tshirt and jeans and stylish black jacket over it.
As Mini came outside she looked at him and she was blown away by his looks. First she kept looking at him for few moments but then realizing that she is staring him, she moved her gaze elsewhere. On the other hand Neil was mesmerized seeing Mini like this. He couldn't take off his eyes from her. The dress was not revealing, in fact it was very decent but she looked damn sexy in that outfit. Her hair which she left open were coming on face and she was struggling to put them aside. Neil moved towards her and put some of her hair behind her ears and leaned forward to whisper in her ear, "you are looking gorgeous". She smiled shyly at his compliment and complimented him in return, " you are looking handsome too". They both set in the car and Neil drove the car towards their destination.
He took Mini to a beautiful beachside restaurant. Mini was surprised to see that he has brought her to her favourite restaurant. They went inside and waiter took them to their table which he already booked. The ambience of the restaurant was classy, elegant , beautiful and comfortable. Their table was at the corner which offered a beautiful and mesmerizing view of the beach side. Neil ordered Mini's favourite Italian cousine.
“I must say...you know how to charm a girl. I am impressed. But how do you know about all my favourite things?” Mini asked.
“Well…you know when you really like someone there is no need to say anything, eyes communicate and heart understands it all.” Neil replied looking into her eyes.
“keep these cheesy lines of yours for some "easy to get girl". Tell me the truth.” Mini laughed.
“Ok miss " hard to get". I took a little help from Arya when we went to Mickey's place.” Neil replied and laughed.
“Oh..I should have known this….but… must say you are really smart.” Mini replied.
“Yes that I am. But I really like to hear from you about your likes n dislikes.” Neil said.
“Well, I am simple and quite boring girl.But you are very interesting, full of surprises, I wonder if you could tell me something about yourself.” Mini showed interest in knowing about him.
“What do you want to know?” Neil asked plainly.
Mini directly looked in his eyes with her curious eyes, “Everything...I mean everything about your likes n dislikes. For starting you can tell me how you get into this whole music thing?”
“Music is my passion. I always loved it.But it was only in the college I decided to make it my career. But dad wanted me to do MBA. I tried but...but failed.” Neil confessed.
“Failed….as in…like fail in the exams?” Mini asked in shock. Neil nodded while getting embarrassed but Mini laughed at him. Then suddenly she remembered that in party Yash Oberoi was so happy introducing him, “Wait...you ...you didn't tell your father anything…right?”Mini guessed.
Neil again nodded in yes. “Hey its not good to lie to your parents.” Mini said in concern. “You can say that as you are lucky to have parents who understand your preferences and fulfills your every wish but its not same with me.” Neil replied. Sadness could not be missed in his eyes.
Mini noticed that sadness in his eyes and strangely felt it in her heart too, she put her hand on his and pressed it a little in assurance. “Don't worry, they'll understand you one day. But its not good to hide things...tell them soon.”
“I will...hey we are not here to discuss my life's complexities.” Neil changed the topic but he noticed that his pain also affected her and he felt he could share his whole life with her. She will be his guiding light whenever he will get lost in the darkness.
They have finished their dinner. Mini was looking to the sea. Neil noticed it and held her hand, “Come lets have a walk."
They went to the beach. Mini saw the seashore and was delighted like a child. She removed her sandals and stood on the wet sand with eyes closed and smile playing on her lips.
“Hey, what are you doing?” Neil asked curiously.
Mini smiled and gestured him to come by her side, “Come on, remove your shoes, you should try it too. It feels amazing.”
Neil did as she asked and stood by her side feeling the wet sand under his feet with small waves kissing their feet giving them ticklish feeling.
“You really likes beaches..huh!” Neil asked seeing her so happy.
“Yes...I love beaches...its my fav. Place whenever I am tensed I come here. These waves take away your all tensions and gives you calmness. Besides this, I have many wonderful memories of my childhood when me and Arya used to play here. Don't you have any sibling?” Mini asked.
Neil’s smile dropped all of a sudden at her question but he tried to conceal his sadness, “No I don't have any sibling.”
Mini looked at him and didn’t miss the longing in his eyes, she couldn't understand why he become sad...it was a normal question, she felt like as if she has scratched an old wound. She was standing at some distance from him till now. She came closer and held his left hand with her right and entwined her fingers with his. She didn't say anything but her gesture was enough for Neil to come out of his thoughts. He smiled looking at her and they resumed their walk but now they were walking close to each other, hand in hand.
Suddenly it started raining. Mini ran under nearby teen shed but Neil stayed there enjoying the rain with his arms stretched as if welcoming the first rainfall of the season.
“ Neil, what are you doing?? Come inside,you'll get wet.” Mini called him.
“Oh come on, its not a heavy rainfall, just a drizzling. I love rainfall...its first rainfall of season..don't wanna miss it. He removed his jacket and throw it up in the air. Come you should also enjoy it. He stretched his hand to her gesturing her to come outside from the shade.
Mini took his hand and came outside. Cold water droplets fell on her giving her ticklish feeling and making her shiver with cold. She was enjoying it when Neil asked her-" hey can I have a dance with you"
“Now...here...but there is no music.” She replied.
“Music is everywhere...you just need to feel it. Close your eyes Mini and listen to the music of nature. No music is as sweet and melodious than this.” Neil whispered in her ears pulling her close to him.
Mini closed her eyes and tried to listen with concentration. She heard the melodious sound of rain drops on teen shade,sounds of sea waves, sounds of cool breeze, rustling of leaves, “Its so amazing Neil.” She said while eyes closed and beautiful smile crept on her face.
She was lost in nature's melody. She didn't know when Neil came near her and put his hand around her waist, and entwined their hands. They slowly started swaying on the non playing music of nature. Mini didn't realize when she put her head on his shoulder, hugging him. Neil started humming some lines in his sweet yet sexy voice.
oh ..o..its a beautiful night
and i feel i might
loose myself in your eyes
the moon is shining bright
pouring its silver light
and it makes me weak in knees
when you smile at me feeling shy
i don't wanna know whats wrong or right
just wanna be in your arms tonight
wanna hold you, kiss you, love you,
till the sun shines bright
Mini pulled apart when he stopped singing.
“Neil , why did you stop singing. It was very nice song. But I have never heard it before. From which album it is?” Mini asked.
“Well...you have not heard it because it has not released yet as its my own composition.” He replied scratching his head and smiling sheepishly.
“What? Your composition...wow..it was so... fantastic.” She complimented.
Neil finally smiled confidently knowing that she really liked it, “Thanks, but credit goes to you.”
“Why me?” Mini asked curiously.
Neil caressed her cheeks with back of his hands, “I was working on it since few days but there was something missing some missing links, words sometimes I was troubling with tune but tonight when I was holding you..it...it just came out perfect...direct from my heart.”
“So am I your muse now?” Mini blushed and looked down.
Neil cupped her face with his both hands and looked at her with love filled eyes, “Yes you are and I guess you always will be from now on wards.”
They kept standing there close to each other without saying anything but their eyes which were filled with love and admiration for each other communicating in their own language. Rain has been stopped few minutes ago but there were still few water droplets on Mini's face which attracted Neil’s attention. He leaned forward to suck them off by kissing them one by one from her forehead, eyes, nose and cheeks. As soon as his lips touched her skin Mini closed her eyes to feel it. He finally reached towards her rosy lips which were parted with anticipation. He slowly pressed his lips on her rose petals like lips sucking the tiny water droplets on them and tasting their sweet taste. As soon as their lips met Mini felt like she was melting in his arms. Cool atmosphere of the beach suddenly turned into a hot one. The kiss was slow and gentle yet passionate. Mini held him tight as she felt she would fell down the moment she leave him and she also responded to him pouring out all her feelings which she was hiding till now.
After sometime they parted. Mini felt too shy to look at him. Neil smiled at her reaction and just hugged her. Since it was getting late they decided to leave. Neil dropped her at her house. She came out of the car and started moving towards her house while Neil also came out and leaned against the car to watch her until she get inside. But she turned back from midway and came back to him, "thank you for the beautiful evening." She quickly gave him a peck on his cheeks and ran inside the house, giggling. Neil smiled at her innocence and left for his home singing and humming all the way as he was feeling very lucky to have Mini in his life.
to be continued.....
precap- yash to find out neil's result
Amazing🤗
Neil loving her innocence....thtvwas just brilliant..
Arya😆
Beautifully written anjali 👏
Loved it❤️
Update soon😆
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