MiNeil SS "My Child Bride" last part pg 70 updt 20/02/2021

Hii,

I brought another MiNeil short story to you, My Child Bride.

Important Note-

NO, its not inspired from south korean rom com movie titled my little bride rather its an adaptation of great author Rabindra Nath Tagore ji's work "Samapti". Till now numerous bengali, hindi and other language films and tv shows have shown this story. So this time I am trying to present it in my own way. The main theme, plot is taken from "Samapti" but it will be presented with MiNeil tadka. Original story was set in pre independence era but I will present it in current scenario. I know I am trying a very difficult thing as it is almost a sin to take inspiration from such a great writer's work and not live upto the expectation but I am only an amateur writer so please keep this fact in mind and forgive my mistakes. Just read the story with open heart and shower your love as always.

SS My Child Bride

Links for the updates-

part 1 pg 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=2#154970690

part 2 pg 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=3#155038378

part 3 pg 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=5#155096670

part 4 pg 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=10#155160034

part 5 pg 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/patiala-babes/5192678/mineil-ss-my-child-bride-last-part-pg-70-updt-20-02-2021?pn=14

part 6 pg 23

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=23#155355707

part 7 pg 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=25#155430324

part 8 pg 35

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=35#155524216

part 9 pg 39

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=39#155557911

part 10 pg 44

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/patiala-babes/5192678/mineil-ss-my-child-bride-last-part-pg-70-updt-20-02-2021?pn=44

part 11 pg 53

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=53#155699282

part 12 pg 61

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=61#155839751

part 13 (last part) pg 70

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5192678?pn=70#155919694

Waah ..kya story select kiya hai

Best hai . Tum par pura vishwas hai wo transition acche se likho gaye

SouNoor par suit hoga ye

Neil kitten tadka hoga ☺️

Mera ek favt film hai ye

Beautiful story it is. For Ash tailor made from teen to complete woman later but don't keep it painful specially separation part 💔

Originally posted by: zalima

Waah ..kya story select kiya hai

Best hai . Tum par pura vishwas hai wo transition acche se likho gaye

SouNoor par suit hoga ye

Neil kitten tadka hoga ☺️

Mera ek favt film hai ye

Yeah ☺️ authoritative first later realisation from his side but here kitten will not melt easily 😉😆

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Yeah ☺️ authoritative first later realisation from his side but here kitten will not melt easily 😉😆

Haan🤣

Lekin MiNeil style mein hoga yahan☺️

Anjali ko ek ek flavors pata hai MiNeil ka

Aur SS hai na toh FF style mein nahi hoga

Originally posted by: zalima

Waah ..kya story select kiya hai

Best hai . Tum par pura vishwas hai wo transition acche se likho gaye

SouNoor par suit hoga ye

Neil kitten tadka hoga ☺️

Mera ek favt film hai ye

Glad to know many of us here already know the story. Its such a beautiful story. journey from a girl to woman.

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Beautiful story it is. For Ash tailor made from teen to complete woman later but don't keep it painful specially separation part 💔

yes actually custom made for Mini😆 actually saw this movie uphaar which was inspired by it and jaya bachhan played the lead role. Tab se dimag mein ghum rahi hai aur bar bar Mini ka chehra hi samne aata hai...so decided to write it😆

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Yeah ☺️ authoritative first later realisation from his side but here kitten will not melt easily 😉😆

that realisation is my fav part in the story.❤️ and later MIni's transition❤️

Originally posted by: zalima

Haan🤣

Lekin MiNeil style mein hoga yahan☺️

Anjali ko ek ek flavors pata hai MiNeil ka

Aur SS hai na toh FF style mein nahi hoga

haan original story already short story hi hai...FF yaha suit anhi hota...infact pehle socha tha OS likhun but wanted to add some more to it to settled on SS

Originally posted by: anjali0111

yes actually custom made for Mini😆 actually saw this movie uphaar which was inspired by it and jaya bachhan played the lead role. Tab se dimag mein ghum rahi hai aur bar bar Mini ka chehra hi samne aata hai...so decided to write it😆

It's a beautiful story. I like original actress who played it . They showed the scenes beautifully. In Uphaar jaya was annoying in few scenes. Even now she is in real. 😆