MiNeil SS 'The Perfectionist' updated last part on 17.10.20 at pg 40 - Page 28

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow!!! Suspense suspense suspense...

Dhak dhak wale mod pr le aayi story...

Kya mini hogi nxt victim...

Kyaa mineil m aayegii daraar

Ya Minni ko aayega Neil k job k dangerous samjh...

Kya arya ko milega supposed to be best birthday k best gift..

Kya hoga aage..

Manmeet bechara🤣

Jaane k liye...stay tuned😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Manmeet will try to kill Arya / Mini right ? It wil take time for Neil to get this and he might reach on time😉? Update next part soon. Looks like you wil end this story in one or two chapters.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sub_94

Manmeet will try to kill Arya / Mini right ? It wil take time for Neil to get this and he might reach on time😉? Update next part soon. Looks like you wil end this story in one or two chapters.

and by that incident....seeing Neil risking his life for their rescue and Manmeet's arrest ...mini will eventually realise why he always prioritize his work first as it not only concerns his passion but safety of entire town and constituently the nation...how important it actually is.... she will finally make peace with his job and even Neil will realize the importance of family....the fear of losing them forever ...tht agony....etc...

Can't wait dude...

Update soon...

Edited by Khushi1311 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

and by that incident....seeing Neil risking his life for their rescue and Manmeet's arrest ...mini will eventually realise why he always prioritize his work first as it not only concerns his passion but safety of entire town and constituently the nation...how important it actually is.... she will finally make peace with his job and even Neil will realize the importance of family....the fear of losing them forever ...tht agony....etc...

Can't wait dude...

Update soon...


Ya.😳both MiNeil coming to realisation , understanding will be perfect end to this perfectionist story .

Edited by sub_94 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sub_94


Ya.😳both MiNeil coming to realisation , understanding will be perfect end to this perfectionist story .

yeahhh....hmlg to yha khud hi pulao paka liye ....hope anjali koi tragedy pln nh ki ho...😆
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

yeahhh....hmlg to yha khud hi pulao paka liye ....hope anjali koi tragedy pln nh ki ho...😆

Even she hates sad ending for MiNeil😆 and she knows MiNeilans well 🤣 we all will not leave her then🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sub_94


Ya.😳both MiNeil coming to realisation , understanding will be perfect end to this perfectionist story .

Perfectionist ending by Anjali😎

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: zalima

Neil IPS officer ☺️

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☺️ haye ..sona sona sonu babu ☺️

Chalo yahan toh sapna sach hua ☺️


MiNeil couple hai yahan

Waah..Anjali ghapaghap sabh kuch ho gaya

☺️🤣baccha bhi 🤣

My Chand family


Ye wala kahani doosre FFs se different lag rahi hai..

Simple sa hai lekin iss mein tum jo MiNeil tadka de rahi ho na ..woh story ko yummy bana raha hai


Yaar .. SouNoor iss type ke scenes mein mast lagte hai


Finally😆 wish fulfilled here Zalima. Agent/police Neil 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Well balanced story. Love , duty , suspense.😳MiNeil as always are adorable and their baby Arya very nicely written Anjali.

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