MiNeil SS 'The Perfectionist' updated last part on 17.10.20 at pg 40 - Page 21

Originally posted by: sub_94

🤣 You can call us so 🤣 but blame MiNeil and you for it . MiNeil chemistry is just 🔥 and your writing makes it double mazaa for us and after fight their making out session is triple mazaa ☺️🤣

Sahi 🤣

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Originally posted by: anjali0111

Part 7

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“That was…..” Hanuman Singh tried to answer but failed as he was also surprised…though happily that the distance between her daughter and son in law was reducing. “….that was ….fast.” Hanuman Singh completed his sentence somehow for the lack of better words and Naeem bi couldn’t stop but laugh. “I think agar hum kuch aur din tak nahi aate toh shayad wapas aakar hume seedhe good news milti ki main phir se nanu banne wala hoon.” Hanuman Singh also laughed with Naeem bi.

Hanuman papa ko pata nahi beti kitni tez hai 🤣 ek number ki talented or skilful🤣

Neil guru ji ne acche se training jo diya hai ☺️🤣

Aur ye dono toh sirf kuch minute mein hi kya kya gul khila sakte hai hume pata hai ☺️🤣

Yahan toh pura ek raat mila hai ☺️🤣

Sixer hi sixer 🤣

mini khiladi legendary khiladi ke saath team up woh toh ☺️🤣

Gulshan hi Gulshan khilega haveli mein 🤣

I love you cheese cake.” He whispered before engaging her in a deep kiss. “I love you too.”

🤣🤣

cheese cake ko melt kar kar ke kha raha hai 🤣☺️🤣

Ek number ka 🤣

“What?” he asked irritated from the interruption. “I have took my decision.” Mini replied. Neil suddenly came out of the passionate haze as the meaning of her words sunk in. She had finally decided whether she will be coming back to him or not. But why she is saying this now? Does it mean her answer is yes and she wants to celebrate like this or her answer is no and this is just a final goodbye sex. He sat up straight on the bed and waited for the judgment of his fate.

🤣 ye mera favt 🤣

Typical MiNeil wale ☺️🤣

Imagine kar li ☺️🤣

goodbye sex ki kyun .. goodmorning sex aur bhi zyada 🔥 hota hai aur mila bhi hai hume 😉cure me mein☺️

“Neil, I have thought a lot about it and….” Mini started saying and Neil looked at her. She looked nervous. “Hell! He was almost sure now that she is gonna say no to him.” He thought and his heart broke just at the thought of it. “Neil…I want you back in my life. Both me and Arya will come with you. We will be a family once again.” Mini said in one breath. Neil looked up at her unable to believe what she said. “Are you sure? You and Arya…we will live together again?” Neil asked holding her hands as he wanted to hear it one more time for confirmation. “Yes…yes.” Mini smiled at him.

🤣 bach gaya Neil 🤣🤣

Madam ne license renewal kar di 🤣☺️

Typical MiNeil phir se ☺️

Yaar iss type ka situation mein ye dono kitne cute ,hot lagte hai ☺️🤣

Neil kissed her pouring down all his love. “Thank you so much for giving me another chance." Neil said between the kisses. He resumed what he left and his fingers started working on her core and Mini struggled to say something more but couldnt, only moans came out of her mouth. Just before he was about to enter her she held him by the shoulders and said, "I have placed my trust in you. Dont do anything to make me regret this decision." "I wont disappoint you I promise.” Neil said and Mini hugged him tightly in response. The instant their bare bodies touched the fire ignited in their hearts and it consumed both of them in its heat. They spent the night celebrating their reunion and love feasting on each others body and lying buried inside each other.

🤣🤣 ye pucca abh accident karega 🤣

Khub class legi madam🤣

Phir se license cancel karegi 🤣

to be continued....

🤣 Anjali 🤣

Tume khub pata hai MiNeil ko kaise handle karni hai🤣

Aur ye beech beech mein IPS

Sahi hai

Aur MiNeil hanuman wala moment accha tha🤣

Sirf mini se hi dono darr sakte hai🤣

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Loved it Rani Sa

Tumne toh pardo ki shop khol di hai lagta hai .... Har story mein parda🤣I know bekaar joke tha

😂

Continue soon

Achha idea hai

Mineil parda shop- raaz par pada rahe saalo saal chale🤣

Originally posted by: zalima

🤣 Anjali 🤣

Tume khub pata hai MiNeil ko kaise handle karni hai🤣

Aur ye beech beech mein IPS

Sahi hai

Aur MiNeil hanuman wala moment accha tha🤣

Sirf mini se hi dono darr sakte hai🤣

Thanks

Mineil apne aap handle ho jate hain🤣

IPS wale moments mere fav hain.....cant stop drooling jab bhi neil ko uniform meim imagine karo☺️

Mini dono ko control mein rakhti hai🤣

Bobby bhatia

Dekha dekha saa lag raha h

Neil ko hmm😆

Mini ne faisa le liya

But neil gadbad jarur karega🤣

MiNeil ka Celebration ho gaya☺️

Beautiful update 🤗

“I think agar hum kuch aur din tak nahi aate toh shayad wapas aakar hume seedhe good news milti ki main phir se nanu banne wala hoon.” Hanuman Singh also laughed

🤣

Hame bhi yakin h MiNeil par

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Bobby bhatia

Dekha dekha saa lag raha h

Neil ko hmm😆

Mini ne faisa le liya

But neil gadbad jarur karega🤣

MiNeil ka Celebration ho gaya☺️

Beautiful update 🤗

Thanks

Jasusi dimag on rakho

Baki mineil ka to chalta rehta hai🤣

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

“I think agar hum kuch aur din tak nahi aate toh shayad wapas aakar hume seedhe good news milti ki main phir se nanu banne wala hoon.” Hanuman Singh also laughed

🤣

Hame bhi yakin h MiNeil par

Sab unki harkate jaante hain🤣

Part 8

Mini turned towards the bed side table and searched the table clock with one hand while her eyes were still closed. She tried a lot but couldn’t find the clock and finally she opened her eyes irritated by the sound of its alarm. “F**k! Its 7.30am already.” Mini got up at once and sat straight on bed. She was about to jump out of the bed to start her day when Neil pulled her again on the bed.

“Neil, leave me. I am already late.” Mini said as he tried to free herself from his hold. “I don’t care. I want to hold you for some more time.” Neil replied sleepily and snuggled more into her naked body. “Neil, I have to wake up Arya also leave me na.” Mini reasoned while trying to slip from his arms but Neil kept pulling her more towards him. As their naked bodies rubbed against each other Neil felt very awake suddenly.

"Just yesterday I got you back now I am not letting you go." Neil whispered against her hair as he kissed them. "I am not running away anywhere now. So leave me." Mini smiled at him. Mini could see desires clouding his eyes again and she was tempted to lose herself once again in them but she knew she have to get out of bed this instant or else it will be too late. With heavy heart she pushed Neil and sat up straight on the bed. She grabbed her clothes and started wearing them when Neil also sat up and hugged her from behind putting his arms around her waist and resting his head on her shoulders. “You don’t want to stay for some morning fun?” Neil asked placing a kiss on her shoulders suggestively.

“No, I already had lots of night fun now I don’t have anytime for it.” Mini giggled in reply. “Are you sure?” Neil asked again as his arms traveled upwards from her waist feeling up her body. Mini took a labored breath but controlled herself with difficulty. “Yes, I am sure…let me go…” Mini tried to wear her bra when Neil covered her breast with his hands, fondling them, teasing them in between. “Wont even stay for a quickie?” Neil asked huskily as he bit her earlobe knowing well that this was her undoing. Her earlobes…her sensitive body part to trigger her sexual drive like crazy. “Neil….” Mini moaned his name just like he predicted. He smiled feeling proud of his knowledge about her. These 3 years may have brought distances between them but couldn’t make them forget each other. He still knew her inside out like she was a part of him and she knew his likes and dislikes, his habits like she was never separated from him.

Mini arched her back shoving her assets more into his skillful hands. She always loved what his hands do to her soft mounds. The feelings of those rough hands on her soft sensitive chest gave her immense pleasure. Neil kept caressing her breast with his left hand while his right hand traveled south on her body till it founded itself engulfed in her wetness. He caressed her there for good few minutes while placing open mouth kisses on her neck and shoulders. The warmth of his kisses, the magic of touch on her breast and sensual massage of her core by his fingers...Mini couldnt take triple torture and started squirming in his arms. When he was convinced that she was fully ready for him he stood from the bed taking her along. He then turned her around and pushed her one leg with his knee forcing her to knelt down on bed with one knee. Now she has both her hands and one knee on bed while one leg stretched straight backward on the floor. Neil stood between her legs and claimed her finally. She almost screamed at the sudden thrust she felt. Her expressions mix of a surprise and shock.

Neil looked at her face in the mirror fitted on the almirah in front of him. The sight blew off his mind. She was down on her knees and he was taking her, standing behind her. Her long hair scattered on her shoulders, her breast bouncing with the rhythm of their movements, those small droplets of sweat on her forehead. The sight in itself was a huge turn on. He couldn’t hold himself back for more time as he increased his speed and took both of them towards mind shattering climax.

"Its too late today Mini hasnt woken up. I had to wake up Arya today. Mini is nowhere to be seen. I should go and look for her." Naeem bi said as she placed the tray of morning tea down. She was about to go when Hanuman stopped her, "I'll advise you to dont bother and hence save yourself from embarrassment." Hanuman said while sipping his tea. Naeem bi kept looking at him confused for some seconds then finally when she understood her cheeks turned red at her own stupidity. "Thank for advice." She muttered and went from there.

Meanwhile Mini and Neil were just catching their breath after their sexy encounter when Arya banged their door. “Mumma, papa are you inside?” Arya asked as she kept banging the door repeatedly. Mini panicked as she looked at herself. She was a complete mess right now. “Arya, bachha stay there I am coming outside.” Mini managed to say wile gathering her clothes. “No, mumma open the door. I want to come in.” Arya replied from outside. “No..Arya…” Mini stammered Neil put his hand on her mouth.

“Relax! Don’t act as if you are sleeping with your boy friend and someone caught you.” Neil laughed at her earning a glare from her. “Ok fine! Go and change I’ll handle her.” Neil said as he opened the bathroom door for her. He wore his clothes quickly and finally opened the door for Arya.

“Papa, good morning.” Arya jumped in his arms and placed a kiss on his cheeks. “Very good morning princess.” Neil replied. “Haww, papa, what happened to you? You got hurt?” Arya asked pointing towards a red mark on Neil’s skin which was visible from the few open buttons of his shirt. Mini had also came out of the bathroom till then. Neil checked out in the mirror to find a lovebite and some scratch marks. Neil looked at Mini and winked, “Princess last night there was a very wild cat in my room. She scratched me everywhere.

“What! Then you should have called me na….I love cats I would have also seen her.” Arya said innocently. “Sorry princess, I’ll call you next time to come and save me from this wild cat.” Neil laughed and Mini gasped at his answer. “Mumma, why you were not in your room? Did you guys sleep here? Together? And left me alone?” Arya was sad that her parents forgot about her. “You both must have had lots of fun without me.” Arya concluded and pouted. “Oh, that’s for sure. We had a lot of fun.” Neil replied as he looked at Mini with a broad grin. “Shut up!” Mini whispered angrily and gestured towards Arya. Neil saw that she has become upset so he lied to cheer her up. “Princess, I was just joking to tease you….mumma just came here in the morning to wake me up.” “Really?” Arya asked for confirmation. “Of course my baby. How can we forget you?” Mini replied as she kissed her on the cheeks. Arya finally smiled forgetting everything. “Come lets go now. We are like super late for the school….all thanks to your papa.” Mini said as she took Arya in her arms and went out of the room giving one last angry glare to Neil while he just laughed it off.

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“Any progress on Bobby Bhatia?” Neil asked from his team. “No sir, he is not in police records. In fact, not anywhere in adhaar data, municipal data etc…its like he is some ghost.” Mickey replied. “Keep searching…he is important for this case.” Neil instructed.

“Any report from the patrolling party around the dumping area?” Neil asked further. “No, not yet. They haven’t seen any suspicious activity or person till now.” Hanuman replied this time. “Samajh mein nahi aa raha…ye case toh sulajhta hi nahi…leads to milte hain lekin sab aadhe adhure.” Hanuman shared his views.

“Hey! Don’t lose hope like that. We’ll catch that b*****d soon. I think…rather I feel…there is strong gut feeling that we are very close…there is something right before our eyes and we are not seeing it.” Neil said. “Sir, lets revise everything may be we will get to that thing.” Mickey suggested and everyone nodded in agreement.

Neil started writing on a board with a marker-

“Five victims. All were perfect people. They all visited same psychiatrist, Dr. Isha Mehra.”

“Killer has something against these kind of perfect people who have some mental issues also.”

“As far as now we doubt that Bobby Bhatia is the killer as he has visited the psychiatrist same days that of victims and they died after one day. The given address in the database was fake. Some Mr. Malhotra, the botanist lives there but the photo of Bobby Bhatia we found has been identified by the receptionist of Dr. Isha. But again….we didn’t found any information about him anywhere…he is almost a ghost.”

“Killer must be of normal build, he might have used garden scissors to cut bodies into pieces and then he dumps them in dumping ground on the outskirts of city.”

“We still don’t know how he actually murdered all the persons.”

Neil completed jotting down the points and underlined the last line. “You know the thing that we don’t know the actual cause of death is affecting our investigation. Once we know this it will be very helpful.” Neil said to no one in particular.

“Sir, even the post mortem reports couldn’t found the exact cause of death. It said that victims heart stopped working suddenly. All the victims were healthy they couldn’t have heart attack all of a sudden.” Mickey replied. “Yes, but some external particles or agents may induce heart failure.”Neil shared his views. “But then nothing of that sort was found in any victims body.” Hanuman replied. “Ya…it seems like whatever it is…it just vanished in the air.” Mickey said feeling helpless that they couldn’t do anything about it.

Mickey’s sentence caught Neil’s attention. “What did you say? Come again.” He asked. “I said..it vanished ….” Neil interrupted him. “Yes exactly…vanished….something used to induce heart attack and then it vanished from the body.”

“How is that possible?” Hanuman asked. “It is possible…I have heard about it..there are some toxins or chemical which can induce heart attacks or paralysis leaving only few micro traces in the body. They are almost undetectable by normal postmortem procedure. They need detail toxicology study and autopsy analysis to find them out.” Neil answered.

“But Sir, how is it possible now? The bodies were mutilated and we don’t even have those pieces now as we have already handed them over to the victim’s family.” Hanuman stated the obvious. “Wrong officer, we still have their vital organs left…in cases where cause of death is unknown doctors preserve their viscera (the vital organs) for further study in case the condition arises….its a standard protocol. Contact the doctors team who did the post mortem and asked them about it. Arrange for sending it to the advanced analysis. I am sure this will help us.” Neil explained.

“But this will take time.” Hanuman said. “But we have no other option….I’ll talk to the incharge officer there and request them to send us the reports as soon as possible.” Neil replied. “Meanwhile, aap log is case se jude jitney bhi log hain unpar nazar rakhiye.” Neil instructed further.

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Mini was having free period in the school when she went to clerical staff section. Manmeet saw her and followed her. “I just wanted to confirm what is the duration of notice period before leaving the job.” Mini asked from the HR clerk. “Ma’am its three months from the date of your resignation.” Clerk replied. “Ok thanks,…and yes I wanted to ask there is a branch of this school in Amritsar right?” Mini asked one more doubt. “Yes ma’am we have branch in Amritsar. In fact we have the facility that any kid here can get transferred to any other branch and he/she will get preference in admission. In fact if there is a vacancy and you want to apply there then you’ll also get recommendation letter from here.” Clerk replied. “Wow…just perfect. Thanks for the info.” Mini replied feeling ecstatic. “Don’t mind me asking…are you planning to move to Amritsar?” clerk asked. “Oh yes, my husband is posted there and after sometime me and my daughter will join him there.” Mini replied and turned to go when she bumped into Manmeet who was listening to their conversation.

“Mini, you are leaving this school?” Manmeet asked shocked from the news. “Not now Manmeet but yes…after this academic year….we are shifting to Amritsar with Neil.” Mini replied and tried to walk away but Manmeet blocked her way. “Can we talk?” he asked. “Now? And about what?” Mini asked in confusion. “About you…about me….its very very important please.” Manmeet requested. Mini wanted to say no but then she noticed some staff people were looking at them as Manmeet has spoke loudly. She didn’t want to create any scene so she agreed and they went to the parking area of the school.

“What do you want to talk Manmeet?” Mini asked without wasting any time. He was about to say something when his phone buzzed. It was again his dad’s call. But he cut it instantly. “Mini, you said you and your husband were separated from a long time then how come all of a sudden you took this decision?” Manmeet asked. The hurt in his voice could not be missed. “Its none of your business Manmeet. Who are you to ask such questions from me?” Mini objected. “Oh, I have every right…every right to ask this question as this is gonna affect my life too. All this while…I was…trying to impress you…I liked you…following you like some love sick puppy…you said there is nothing left between you and your husband now suddenly after all these years he walks back into your life and you decide to go with him. Why?” Manmeet asked. Frustration was clearly visible on his face.

“Manmeet, what are you saying? You liked me….when did this happen…I thought you were just doing that as a good friend….I always treated you like that….not more than that….and yes I had said that I am separated from my husband but that didn’t mean that I was looking for another relationship .Neil came back here…then Arya…she brought us together again…we decided to settle our differences for her…..and did I ever give you any false hope? Then how come you are raising finger on me?” Mini asked getting angry now. Manmeet was about to reply when again his dad called. He looked at the phone and was frustrated and angry as hell now. Just when he was discussing the very important matter of his life, his dad had to disturb him again and again. He cut the call but it rang again. He again cut it. “For God sake! Take the call. It might be something important.” Mini advised.

“Shut up! Just shut up. Don’t you dare open your mouth you b****h! I would have know better…but I was foolishly in love with you…I thought you were different from other people…you like me…you trust me but No….you were just enjoying all my attention for your time pass. You didn’t care about my feelings. Why did you do that huh? Tell me? Why did you do that?” Manmeet asked as he shook her by her shoulders. Mini was too shocked to see him like this that she just froze and couldn’t reply anything. Never in her wildest dream she could have imagine Manmeet this way.

“Your husband…I..I searched about him…Neil Oberoi…Handsome, intelligent..a f**king IPS. Sent on special mission to catch the serial killer..impressive…very impressive who would not want to go to such a man? I am sure, he must have made his way back again in your bed…right? In fact that’s the reason you acted so desperate….all these years…away from him. After all your body has needs too….par itni hi aag lagi thi toh mujhe keh diya hota…”Manmeet couldn’t complete his sentence when he got a tight slap from Mini.

“How dare you to say such things about me you? Mini asked holding his collar after slapping him second time. “Get this thing very clear in your thick head Mr. Manmeet Malhotra. I love Neil. I have always loved him. There were some differences between us but now our daughter has helped us to sort them out and now I have decided to go back to him and its none of your business to question my decision. I never considered you more than a friend and now you are not even that.” Mini said and pushed him hard. She wiped her angry tears and left the place.

Manmeet’s phone rang again. This time he took the call, “What is your f***king problem dad? Why you don’t leave me alone? Just go and pamper your other children whom you consider better than me….main toh hamesha se aapka nalayak beta than a….phir mera peechha kyu nahi chhod dete….just go to hell.” He screamed in phone and threw it away on the ground breaking it into pieces.

to be continued......

Omg☺️🔥 sexy. It was hot 🔥 This Manmeet🤬psycho . He and his dad look fishy. Playing well with parada Anjali😉