Below average itna bhi underestimate mat karo khudko
Ye to excellent ki category me h
🤗thank you for writing such excellent story.
thanks🤗
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Below average itna bhi underestimate mat karo khudko
Ye to excellent ki category me h
🤗thank you for writing such excellent story.
thanks🤗
Word Count: 1
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Anjali yet again beautiful write up .I loved this whole jealous Neil .Very well written.I was giggling throughout and enjoying and also i loved at one point where Mini realised that this jealous thing is gone bit too far now and she needs to clear this with Neil .What I love is you keep the essence of the characters in each and every frame👏. That's something makes us connect with characters instantly👏and the last kiss which we can't miss 😳 was needed one .It just made the whole situation beautiful for me at the end .
thanks a lot
glad you liked it
i was worried whether the kiss was too soon but with the flow i couldnt stop myself from writing about it. it seemed right at that moment.
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Below average ? Seriously ? Now your are being very humble or looks like your have taken inspiration from MiNeil 😆whose I hate you means opposite so your average also means same i feel 😆 So if this is called average then i will say please continue this average work and go beyond this average work also. 👍🏼😆
aww what can I say. I am just speechless about the response i am getting for this story.
you guys are great. its your likes and comment which gives me inspiration.
by below average I meant..I am writing it after a long gap of 5-6 years. so sometimes I find it difficult to write some scenes. previously it was not the case.so I just wonder sometimes that it could have been better. I guess it will take time to become habituated to it. and I am updating this story daily so time constraint sometimes also affect the quality of write up. but i dont want to take any chance I want to throw it out on piece of paper when this story is fresh in my head. previously i took long gap between stories then i just couldnt connect to it anymore and left them incomplete😆😳 so here I dont want to take any chance.
Originally posted by: porankisrilata
Wow.... Superb one... OMG Neil ka outburst and mini confession is amazing...
thanks dear🤗
🤗ek dum sundar
Mano koi episode hi dekh rahi thi
👏 bahut hi badiya update .
Aur itni jaldi jaldi bhi
Thank you so much yaar🤗
story se jyada interesting mujhe tumhare comments lagte hain
just like you wait for the updateI wait for you comments
thanks🤗
Woh MiNeil maina mein hai
Issi liye aisa bol rahi hai
Aaj se sab mineil language mein baat karenge🤣
Average writing = super se upar
Hate it = love it
🤣
Hai na Anajli ? 🤣
jaisi aap logo ki marji....seedhe seedhe bolo ya code language mein par apne comments aur likes se is story par pyar barsate raho😳🤗
Micky ke liye jala hua paratha 🤣from Ander se jala bhuna hua Neil
Wow jealous Neil
Ungli katna hath jalna naymbe ne sahi bola
Jelaous Neil 🤣
Fir engagement vali wrong news by Dhoom thana arya
Next day Neil silent
Ab mini ka haal behaal unko samjha koi jyada ignore kare to kaisa lagta h
Baar baar checking kichen me usko bulana or uska kisi or ko bhejna 😆
Cabin scene ❤️
Neil ka outburst or
Mini ka confession ❤️
End me kiss
Everything beautiful ❤️
thanks a lot dear
keep liking and commenting
love ya🤗
Originally posted by: anjali0111
thanks a lot
glad you liked it
i was worried whether the kiss was too soon but with the flow i couldnt stop myself from writing about it. it seemed right at that moment.
Kiss was much needed.It went with the flow of your story .You and Neil beautifully and rightly placed it. 😳
Originally posted by: anjali0111
aww what can I say. I am just speechless about the response i am getting for this story.
you guys are great. its your likes and comment which gives me inspiration.
by below average I meant..I am writing it after a long gap of 5-6 years. so sometimes I find it difficult to write some scenes. previously it was not the case.so I just wonder sometimes that it could have been better. I guess it will take time to become habituated to it. and I am updating this story daily so time constraint sometimes also affect the quality of write up. but i dont want to take any chance I want to throw it out on piece of paper when this story is fresh in my head. previously i took long gap between stories then i just couldnt connect to it anymore and left them incomplete😆😳 so here I dont want to take any chance.
You are doing great dear and by reading your write up its difficult for me to believe that you had taken such long break .May be now you have come out has much better writer with age and experience .
Even i have the habit of writing down or scribble feelings or be it anything when it's fresh in my mind because best stuffs come out at that minute itself for me 😆
I agree when you say that you lose conection with story , characters when taken long time. I think it's same for readers also .Even i like to read stuffs at stretch or else even i feel disconnected bit and sometimes i have to read from page 1 again 😆
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Kiss was much needed.It went with the flow of your story .You and Neil beautifully and rightly placed it. 😳
😳😳😳
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