Dil ke taal(The rhythm of the heart)PalVeer TS

Dil ke taal(The rhythm of the heart) Part 1

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A girl who was walking on the road saw a man injured lying on the road.

She:A man is about to die.But nobody is bothered to take him to the hospital.

She ran towards him and sat near him holding him in her hands.

She:Help!Help!Please help me to take him to the hospital.

She rang up her friends and told them:Shaurya...Shanaya...I am near the centre square mall.A man had met with an accident.Please come here soon with the car to take him to the hospital.Because no one is bothered to take him to the hospital.

Shanaya:Ok sure.We are coming there Palki.

Shaurya and Shanaya reached there.

They were shocked to see the sight.

Palki:See his condition.We have to take him to the hospital soon.

Shaurya and Shanaya looked at each other in shock and helped her to carry the man to the car.

Palki and gang reached the hospital with the injured person.

Preeta who was the senior doctor there as well as Shaurya's mother came.

Palki:There is an accident case.

Preeta:Accident case?It's really serious.

Shaurya:Yes mom.

Palki showed the injured person and said:He is the patient.

Preeta looked at the patient and asked her:Palki,what is this?

Suddenly Shaurya said:Mom...please do the operation soon to save his life.

Preeta looked at him in disbelief.

Preeta:What are you saying Shaurya?

Shaurya:Mom,if you don't save his life,you know what will be the consequences. Right?

Preeta nodded emotionally.

Preeta:Okay.I will do the operation and save his life.

Palki smiled with relief.

Later Preeta came and told Palki that the operation is successful and he has been saved.

Palki was very happy.

After some time,Palki went to meet the man who was on the hospital bed.He looked at her with gratitude.

He:You are the one who saved my life.Right?Dr Preeta told me.Thank you very much.

Palki:I just brought you to the hospital with my best friends Shaurya and Shanaya.It's Dr.Preeta who saved your life.

He just smiled.

Rajveer:But after the accident if you had not taken me to the hospital I would not have survived.God sent you to me as an angel.

Palki smiled.

Palki:What's your name?

He:Rajveer.

Rajveer:Your name is Palki.Right?Dr.Preeta had told me.

Palki smiled.

Preeta and Shaurya entered.

Preeta:How do you feel now Rajveer?

Rajveer:Feeling much better.

Shaurya:Do you need something?

Rajveer:If I get a glass of water...

Palki:I will give you water.

Palki filled the glass with water and told him:It will be difficult for you to drink water by yourself in this condition.So I will help you.

Palki fed him water.

Rajveer:Thank you.

She smiled.

Palki was there in the hospital when Rajveer got discharged.Rajveer slipped while trying to get down from the bed as he was weak and has less balance.Suddenly Palki held him and helped him to walk.They shared a sweet eye lock.

That was the beginning of Rajveer and Palki's friendship. They kept meeting each other.

Palki came wearing a navy blue gown.

Rajveer was bowled over by her beauty.

Rajveer:Palki,you look gorgeous.

Palki blushed.

Palki:Thank you Rajveer.Shanaya dressed me up as I wanted to look good.Because I need to match up to your looks.You are so handsome.

Rajveer smiled:You don't need to put make up to look beautiful Palki.You are already pretty in my eyes.

Palki blushed.

Palki:Rajveer...I want to tell you in simple words that you made me understand what love is.You made me feel the beauty of love.I am in love.I love you Rajveer.

Rajveer smiled happily.

Rajveer:I love you too Palki.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Shaurya and Shanaya reached there.

Palki told them happily:Shaurya....Shanaya...we proposed to each other.We are officially a couple now.

Shaurya and Shanaya looked at each other in shock.

Shaurya:Shanaya!Did you hear it?

Palki:Why are you both so serious?

Rajveer:Are you both not happy for us?

Suddenly they smiled.

Shaurya:Wow!What a happy news Palki!

Shanaya:Congrats to both of you.

Rajveer and Palki smiled.

Rajveer and Palki went for a car drive.

Rajveer:Palki...have you ever tasted street food?

Palki:No.

Rajveer:It's yummy.You should try it once.

Palki:I would like to.

Rajveer smiled.

He stopped the car near a street shop.

They both went there and had food together exchanging romantic glances with each other.

They fed food to each other and enjoyed.

(Kundali bhagya)

Rajveer:Palki,shall we have a private wedding?Because I am an orphan and I don't have anyone to be invited to the wedding.

Palki:Okay Rajveer.We will have a private wedding.

He smiled.

Shanaya,Preeta and Palki's mother Imlie dressed up Palki as a bride.

Imlie ran out and cried.Preeta went behind her.

Preeta:Imlie....

Imlie:How will I tolerate this Preeta?You are my only friend and you know Palki's condition.She thinks that she is going to get married to Rajveer today when the truth is that today her wedding will not take place.

Why What Happened To Palki?

Why Won't She Marry Rajveer?

reserving this one too!

Very interesting start dear 😍

Just loved it 🤗

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You're welcome. Wonder why the duo are shocked. Feeling bad for Rajveer'S condition. Thank God unlike movies and serials, here the patient is being treated before police arrival. Palki making Rajveer drink water was lovely. Palki helping Rajveer walk was sweet. Good to see them fall in love. What's the problem with Shanaya and Shaurya? Street food feeding scene was cute. Why won't Palki get married? Perfect pics, waiting for next. I wonder if Palki is hallucinating Rajveer.

Part 1

Outstanding update.... finely written

Dil ke taal(The rhythm of the heart) Part 2

The credit for the edits goes to the unknown editors.

Shanaya,Preeta and Palki's mother Imlie dressed up Palki as a bride.

Imlie ran out and cried.Preeta went behind her.

Preeta:Imlie....

Imlie:How will I tolerate this Preeta?You are my only friend and you know Palki's condition.She thinks that she is going to get married to Rajveer today when the truth is that today her wedding will not take place.

Because Rajveer is in coma.

Preeta nodded tearfully.

Preeta:The truth is that Rajveer is my son and Shaurya's brother.Palki and Rajveer used to love each other.Palki was going to be my daughter in law.But an accident happened and Rajveer went into coma.

Imlie:After that Palki lost her mental balance.

Preeta:Yes.Palki's heart's rhythm lost it's balance.So now she is imagining that she met Rajveer as a stranger and saved his life when he met with a accident.Actually the rhythm of her heart is her love for Rajveer.So her heart is searching for Rajveer everywhere.

Flash back....

Shaurya and Shanaya were shocked at the accident spot as Palki was sitting on the road all alone imagining that she was holding an injured man.

In the hospital when Palki asked Preeta to save Rajveer's life Preeta asked her "What is this?"because there was no man with her.

Shaurya asked Preeta to conduct the operation as he didn't want Palki's mind to be disturbed if her imagination breaks.

All the moments Palki spent with Rajveer were her imagination.

Present....

Suddenly Preeta and Imlie saw Palki standing there and hearing it.They were shocked.Tears rolled down her cheeks.

Imlie:Palki!

Palki began to faint.

Preeta,Imlie and Shanaya held her.

Imlie and Shanaya took Palki to the room.

Suddenly Preeta's husband Karan and Shaurya reached there.

Karan:Preeta!

Shaurya:Mom!Rajveer....

Preeta got tensed:What happened to Rajveer?

After a year....

A baby's naming ceremony was happening.

It was Rajveer and Palki's baby girl's naming ceremony.

Rajveer:She is our Palveera.

Palki looked at the baby and called her:Palveera beta...

Everyone smiled.

Flash back...

Shaurya:Mom!Rajveer....

Preeta got tensed:What happened to Rajveer?

Shaurya:Rajveer is out of coma mom.Our Rajveer is fine.

Preeta smiled emotionally:Rajveer...my son is fine.

Karan:Yes Preeta.Our son is alright now.

The trio hugged each other in happiness.

Palki gained consciousness and cried loudly:Rajveeeeer!

Imlie and her husband Atharv tried to console her.

Imlie:Bacha.. nothing has happened to Rajveer.

Palki:You are lying Maa.I remember everything.

Atharv:We are saying the truth Palki beta.Your Rajveer is alright now.He is not in coma anymore.If you don't trust us,come with us to the hospital.

Palki was still tensed about Rajveer.

Atharv and Imlie took Palki to Rajveer.

Rajveer and Palki got emotional to see each other.

Rajveer:Palki!

Palki:Rajveer!Are you alright?

Rajveer:Yes Palki.I was waiting to see you.

Palki:Me too Rajveer.

They hugged each other emotionally.

Rajveer and Palki got married.

Shaurya welcomed them:Welcome home Rajveer and Palki.Palki,till now you were my best friend,now my best sister in law also.

Palki:Thank you Shaurya.

They smiled.

The shy Palki lay on the decorated bed.Rajveer sat close to her looking at her romantically.

Rajveer:Palki!

Palki turned back and embraced him.He embraced her back romantically.

Palki got pregnant.

Palki told Rajveer happily:Rajveer,the baby kicked me.

Rajveer:Really?

Palki:Yes Rajveer.

Rajveer caressed her belly softly.

Rajveer:Yes,I can also feel the kick.

Palki smiled.

Palki gave birth to a baby girl.

Rajveer and Palki became emotional while holding the baby.

Palki:Our baby Rajveer!

Rajveer:May God bless her with all the happiness.

Present....

Now Palveera is 6 years old.

Rajveer:Palveera...you are a Daddy's girl or Mummy's girl?

Palki:Palveera...you are Mummy's girl.Right?

Rajveer:No.She is Daddy's girl as she got my eye balls.

Palki:You are saying as if she stole your eye balls.

Rajveer:I didn't mean it.

Palki:Palveera got cat eyes like you.But she is my daughter.She looks like me also.

Rajveer:She looks like you?What a joke!

Palveera:Stop this nonsense.Why both of you are fighting like nursery students?Be mature like me.I am Daddy's and Mummy's girls.That's the truth.

Rajveer and Palki smiled.They kissed her cheeks making her smile.

The end

Thank you everyone for supporting this TS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

As I predicted, she was hallucinating. Preeta's dialogue "the rhythm of her heart is her love for Rajveer.So her heart is searching for Rajveer everywhere" is so emotional. Feeling sad for Palki. So Rajveer is fine. At least here it's Karan and not Raghav. Loved the pregnancy moments. Haye the grown up Palveera is so cute. Perfect pics, favorite scene is Rajveer coming back from coma. Favorite character is Preeta and Imlie as both are really nice mother and mother in law.

Thanks a lot.

Here it is Karan as it's not a complex character.

Originally posted by: salley145

As I predicted, she was hallucinating. Preeta's dialogue "the rhythm of her heart is her love for Rajveer.So her heart is searching for Rajveer everywhere" is so emotional. Feeling sad for Palki. So Rajveer is fine. At least here it's Karan and not Raghav. Loved the pregnancy moments. Haye the grown up Palveera is so cute. Perfect pics, favorite scene is Rajveer coming back from coma. Favorite character is Preeta and Imlie as both are really nice mother and mother in law.

Beautiful end to a wonderful journey ❤️

Just amazing 🤩

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️