My Palki.. PalVeer TS

My Palki Part 1

My previous PalVeer story had Sana as Palki.So for a change here I am casting Adrija as Palki.And I also noticed that though there are many Baseer Adrija ffs there is no Paras Adrija ff.So mine would be the first Paras Adrija story.

Rajveer and Palki were on their dinner date.It was beautiful and romantic.

Palki:Rajveer...tell me whom do you love the most in this world.

Rajveer giggled.

Rajveer:How many times have you asked me this question before Palki?

Palki pouted:Ya...because I want to hear my name from your mouth. But you always say your brother's name Shaurya.

Rajveer:Palki...there is no comparison between you and Shaurya.Brotherly affection is different from romantic feeling.Right?The place I have for you in my heart is very special.

Palki smiled.

Rajveer:Shaurya is not my real brother.He is my cousin brother.My Sameer chachu and Shrishti Maasi's son.But still we are like real siblings.

Palki:But why are you calling your chachi as Maasi and your Mausa as Chachu?

Rajveer:Because Sameer chachu is my father's brother and Shrishti maasi is my mother's sister.

Palki:That's cool.

Rajveer:Palki...now we are on our date.What else do you wish for now?

Palki:I want to enjoy in rain with you.

Rajveer:Such a silly thing.It is so easy to fulfill this wish of yours.

Palki:How can it be easy?Now there is no rain.

Suddenly it started raining.They looked at the rain getting poured.

Palki was surprised and Rajveer smiled.

Rajveer:God heard your wish and asked rain to visit us.

They both giggled.

Rajveer and Palki danced romantically in the beautiful rain.

Chehre mein tere
Khud ko main dhoondhun
Aankhon ke darmiyaan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish puraani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani

Kabhi tujhme utrun
Toh saanson se guzrun
Toh aaye dil ko raahat

Main hoon bethikana
Panaah mujhko paana
Hai tujhme, de ijazat

Na koi darmiyaan
Hum dono hai yahan
Phir kyun hai tu bata
Faasley…

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe

Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish puraani

Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani

Na na...

Parindon ki tarah
yeh dil hai safar mein
Tu mila de zindagi se

Bas itni ilteja
Tu aake ik dafa
Jo dil ne na kahaa
Jaan le…

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe

Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish purani

Ho poori tujhi se

Meri yeh kahaani(Half girl friend).

Shrishti's birthday party...

Shrishti cut the cake and fed it to Sameer.Sameer fed her back.

Sameer embraced her and said:Happy birthday Lambu.

Shrishti:Thank you Shorty.

Sameer,Shrishti,Rajveer's parents Karan-Preeta and Shaurya were enjoying the party with the guests.

Shaurya:On my mom's birthday I want to disclose something about the girl I love.

Shrishti:That's like my son.

Sameer:He is my son also Shrishti...

Shrishti:Tell something which I don't know.

Rajveer:Shaurya,you had told me many times about the girl you love.But you have not disclosed her name yet.

Shaurya:Today I am disclosing her name.Her name is Palki.

Rajveer was shattered.

All were hugging Shaurya happily.

Rajveer thought:I can't believe that Shaurya also loves Palki.I introduced Palki to him as my friend.If I had told him that I love her he would not have loved Palki.If Shaurya confesses love to Palki,she will reject it and Shaurya will be broken.What will I do?

Preeta:Hey Shaurya...when will you introduce your Palki to us?

Shaurya:Tomorrow I will bring her here.

Rajveer said in his mind:Tomorrow there will be a blast here.I am really feeling nervous.

Rajveer tried calling Palki.But since she was in her hospital she could not attend the calls.

Rajveer got frustrated.

Rajveer:Pick up the call Palki.

Suddenly he remembered something.

Rajveer:Palki had told me that she is busy till tomorrow evening as she has back to back surgeries.That's why she is not able to attend my calls.But if I don't inform her about Shaurya now she will get a shock.What will I do now?

Rajveer was going crazy.

The next day....

All the Luthras were waiting for Shaurya to bring Palki.

Rajveer thought:Will Shaurya bring Palki here and propose to her infront of everyone?Or will he propose to her before bringing her here?If he proposes her before that Palki will refuse to come here with Shaurya.

Suddenly Shaurya reached there with Palki.Both were holding a cake together.

Shaurya:This is my Palki.

Palki blushed.Everyone smiled except Shaurya who was in shock.

Shrishti:Why are you both holding a cake?

Palki:Shaurya proposed to me with this cake and I accepted it.

Everyone smiled.

Preeta:Earlier boys used to propose their girls with rings,now with the cake.

Shaurya:Only I proposed with the cake.Because I am The Shaurya Luthra.I am unique.

Everyone laughed while Rajveer stood there frozen.He could not believe his eyes while watching Palki with Shaurya.

Beautiful start dear 😍

Just amazing 🤩

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

New Story I Love It Ready

But I Hate Shaurya With Palki

Want Rajveer With Her

Poor Rajveer...Lets see who gets Palki in the end

Adrija looks like an aunty, old Palki was nice. Shaurya is Sameer and Srishti's son, surprised, because in the serial Rajveer was Srishti's supposed son. By rain I remembered Raabta movie where Jim Sarbh said to Kriti Sanon "Bhagwan ko mat batana, baarish bhi maine ki thi". Rain dance was romantic. I wonder if you would have also written on Raabta, what would have been the story. Shaurya also loves Palki like the serial? Sad that Palki is busy and Rajveer is not able to tell her. How did Palki accept his proposal? Did she always love him? Waiting for next, perfect pics

Aunty part was funny.

I felt that Shaurya looks more like Shrishmeer's son rather than Preeran's. Rajveer and Sana(Palki)look better than Shaurya as Preeran's children.

You mean f i write on Raabta what changes i would make?why did you think like that?

Thank you very much.

Originally posted by: salley145

Adrija looks like an aunty, old Palki was nice. Shaurya is Sameer and Srishti's son, surprised, because in the serial Rajveer was Srishti's supposed son. By rain I remembered Raabta movie where Jim Sarbh said to Kriti Sanon "Bhagwan ko mat batana, baarish bhi maine ki thi". Rain dance was romantic. I wonder if you would have also written on Raabta, what would have been the story. Shaurya also loves Palki like the serial? Sad that Palki is busy and Rajveer is not able to tell her. How did Palki accept his proposal? Did she always love him? Waiting for next, perfect pics

Part 1

Great update... well written

thanks for the pm

Because u also write rebirth stories

Part 1

Fabulous Start

Sharuya and Palki makes such a good couple

My Palki Part 2

All the Luthras were waiting for Shaurya to bring Palki.

Rajveer thought:Will Shaurya bring Palki here and propose to her infront of everyone?Or will he propose to her before bringing her here?If he proposes her before that Palki will refuse to come here with Shaurya.

Suddenly Shaurya reached there with Palki.Both were holding a cake together.

Shaurya:This is my Palki.

Palki blushed.Everyone smiled except Rajveer who was in shock.

Shrishti:Why are you both holding a cake?

Palki:Shaurya proposed to me with this cake and I accepted it.

Everyone smiled.

Preeta:Earlier boys used to propose their girls with rings,now with the cake.

Shaurya said laughing:Only I proposed with the cake.Because I am The Shaurya Luthra.I am unique.

Everyone laughed while Rajveer stood there frozen.He could not believe his eyes while seeing Palki with Shaurya.

Posted by Jasmine Rahul at 1:31 AM

Rajveer could not believe his eyes because Shaurya's Palki was not his Palki.She was another Palki.

Rajveer smiled with relief.

Shaurya:Palki...this is my soulmate Rajveer.

Shaurya hugged Rajveer.

Palki smiled:Shaurya told me that however he loves me,his soulmate would be his brother Rajveer.

Rajveer smiled emotionally.

Palki:Shaurya told me one more thing.He told me that your girl friend's name is also Palki.

Rajveer and the Luthras were surprised.

Rajveer:How did you know that Shaurya?

Shaurya:Come on Rajveer...you are my brother.Though you introduced Palki to me as your friend from the way you both looked at each other itself I understood that you both love each other.

Rajveer smiled.

Karan:Both the brothers are alike in the matter of love also.

Sameer:Right.Both found a life partner named Palki.

Rajveer and Shaurya smiled.

Shrishti told Sameer:Finally our son is getting settled Sammy.

Sameer:But our romance never ends.

She blushed.

Rajveer told everything to Palki.Palki burst into laughter.

Palki:Rajveer...you are so funny.How did you think that Shaurya loves me?

Rajveer:You don't know how tensed I was.I almost had a heart attack.

Palki:This is not Ekta Kapoor's TV show Kundali bhagya for both the brothers to fall in love with the same girl.

They both laughed.

Palki:Rajveer,I am your Palki and I will belong only to you.

Rajveer:Yes,you are my Palki.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Rajveer-Palki and Shaurya-Palki exchanged rings in a grand engagement function.

Then they did a romantic dance together.

Palki & Rajveer Romentic Dance #kundalibhagya #palveer #palki #rajveer #bts #offscreen #shorts #btsv - YouTube

Phir se milne ki jahan pe
De gaye thhe tum qasam
Dekh lo aa kar wahin pe
Aaj bhi baithe huye hai hum

Tumhare thhe tumhare hain
Tumhare hi rahenge hum
Tumhare thhe tumhare hain
Tumhare hi rahenge hum

Muddatein bhi chand lamhon
Jaisi lagti hain sanam
Baat hi aisi tumhare
Ishq mein kuchh hai mere humdum

Tumhare thhe tumhare hain
Tumhare hi rahenge hum
Tumhare thhe tumhare hain
Tumhare hi rahenge hum

Vaada tha kab ka ab jaa ke aaye
Phir bhi ganeemat aaye toh hai
Vaada tha kab ka ab jaa ke aaye
Phir bhi ganeemat aaye toh hai

Aaiye aaiye shauq se aaiye
Aaiye aake iss baar na jaiye

Bichhad ke bhi humsafar se
Vafa jo kar paye hai
Iss aatish ke samandar se
Wahi toh guzar paaye hai

Nahi mili heer toh kya
Rahe usi ke wo phir bhi
Tabhi ranjhe wahi sach maayne mein
Kehlaaye hai, kehlaaye hai

Wahi sachhi mohabbat hai
Kabhi hoti nahi jo kam
Tumhare thhe tumhare haiñ
Tumhare hi rahenge hum

Vaada tha kab ka ab jaa ke aaye
Phir bhi ganeemat aaye toh hai
Vaada tha kab ka ab jaa ke aaye
Phir bhi ganeemat aaye toh hai

Aaiye aaiye shauq se aaiye
Aaiye aake iss baar na jaiye(Stree2).

Both the couples got married.

(The credit for the edit goes to my friend Sudha).

Rajveer-Palki had a son and they named him Palveer.

(Credit for the edit goes to the unknown real editor).

Shaurya and Palki had a daughter and they named her Shalki.

The end.

Thank you each and everyone for supporting this TS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.