Ties That Bind, Ties That Break SS ShaLki PalVeer PreeRan - Page 2

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Posted: 8 days ago
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Shaurya Got Arrested By The Police Again

Oh No

Good To Shanaya's Getting Married To Sunny

Not Shaurya Here

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Posted: 7 days ago
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Part 2

Riveting update.... nicely written


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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break Part 3

Shaurya went to a hotel room.A girl was standing there.

Shaurya:Why did you call me here Shanaya?

Shanaya:Shaurya,I left my home.I can't stay there anymore.Dad won't allow me to marry Sunny.I love Sunny.I have called Sunny too.We are planning to get married.

Shaurya:Okay...relax.I will conduct your wedding.After all you and Sunny are my good friends.

Shanaya smiled.

Suddenly Anuj landed up there with police constables.

Anuj:We are raiding this hotel.Shaurya...you are arrested along with this girl for immoral traffic.

Shaurya and Shanaya were shocked.

Shanaya started crying:You are misunderstanding us Sir.We are not like you think.We belong to a decent family.

Anuj smirked:I can understand how decent you are.

Shanaya:Please believe us Sir.

Shaurya:I know that you trapped us purposefully as revenge.But please leave this girl.She is innocent.She is just my friend who loves someone else.Arrest only me.

Anuj:Sorry my boy.It's not possible as you both are found together.

The cops handcuffed them.

Sunny who reached there saw this and became really upset.




Raghav,Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya were shocked to know about Shaurya's arrest.

Preeta:Raghav,please save Shaurya from the prison.

Raghav:No Preeta.The one who is immoral deserves to rot in the jail.

Preeta:How can you be so cruel to your son Raghav?Don't you trust my upbringing?I brought him up.My Shaurya won't be immoral.So even if you can't,I will release him from the jail.

Raghav was irritated:You know Preeta?A few days back also Shaurya was arrested.Kavya suffered because of him.That time Rajveer only got him out of the jail.

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:What?

Preeta looked at Rajveer and Kavya.

Preeta:What happened actually?Why did Shaurya get arrested before?

Rajveer:Maa,actually Shaurya was trapped.He hit a guy for misbehaving with girls.But Inspector Anuj arrested Shaurya using Kavya.

Rajveer explained everything.

Preeta was shocked.

Kavya:Yes Maa.Shaurya has not done anything wrong.

Raghav:Stop defending Shaurya.Again and again our family is compelled to go to the jail because of Shaurya.I can never forgive him.

Preeta was in tears.




Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya visited Shaurya in the police station.

Shaurya was ashamed to face Preeta.

Shaurya:Maa!Trust me.I did'nt do anything wrong.

Preeta held his hand and said:I know that Shaurya.I know my son.My son can't be bad.

Shaurya became emotional.

Rajveer:Don't worry Shaurya.We will take you out from here.

Kavya:Yes..trust us.

Shaurya:Where is dad?He may have refused to come here because I brought him shame.Right?

They all became dull.

Shaurya:If he feels ashamed I don't mind staying in this jail forever.

Preeta became sad.

Preeta:But he is your father Shaurya.

Shaurya:But has he ever behaved like a father?

They all became upset.

Shaurya:Maa,I am only worried about Shanaya.Because of me only she is in this condition.She loves Sunny.Their relationship should not suffer because of me.

Rajveer:You don't worry about Shanaya and Sunny.Sunny and Shanaya's father released her from the jail.Guess her father accepted Sunny seeing his trust in Shanaya even after the arrest.

Shaurya was relieved.


Preeta and Rajveer bribed Anuj and got Shaurya released from the jail.


Raghav was very angry seeing Shaurya.

Raghav:I don't want an immoral son here.You are a shame to this family.How could you be so cheap Shaurya?

Raghav took his belt and started beating him with it.Preeta started crying.

Preeta:Raghav,please stop it.Please don't beat him.He is innocent.That's why he is out of the jail now.

Raghav:I know that you bribed the inspector to release him from the jail.You are too innocent to believe that Shaurya is innocent.

Preeta was silent.

Raghav stared at Shaurya and said:You know what?I had decided not to give any property to you.You proved again that my decision is correct.

Raghav tried to beat Shaurya again with the belt.Shaurya remembered Raghav beating him with the cane in childhood.

Suddenly Preeta held Raghav's hand.

Preeta:I won't let you beat my son again.If you want to beat him,first beat me Raghav.

Raghav became upset and walked away.

Preeta caressed Shaurya and asked him:Are you alright beta?

Shaurya:Ya.

Preeta:Don't worry.He has stopped beating you.

Shaurya:Whatever it is, monster dad loves you madly.That's why when you told him that he has to beat you first to beat me,he just stopped beating me.

Preeta remained silent.

Preeta took the first aid box and applied ointment on the area where Raghav beat him.



Pallavi told Rajveer:Rajveer,you have succeeded in saving Shaurya from the jail.Then why are you worried?You should be happy now.

Rajveer:I don't know Pallavi.I feel that the Inspector Anuj is targetting Shaurya unnecessarily.

Pallavi:Nothing like that Rajveer.What will he gain out of it?

Rajveer:Maybe I am wrong.But dad is also misunderstanding Shaurya.If his own father misunderstands him,how public will judge Shaurya?

Pallavi held his hand and said:Don't worry Rajveer.Everything will be alright.Time will heal everything as truth will always win.

Rajveer nodded.



Shaurya started drinking thinking how he got arrested along with Shanaya for immoral traffic and how he got beaten by Raghav.

Suddenly Preeta reached there and took the glass from him in frustration.

Preeta:Shaurya,what is this?I know that you drink outside.But now you started drinking at home also?This is what I taught you?

Shaurya:I am sorry Maa.I got arrested for what I have not done...I am losing my control.I can't tolerate.I am a good for nothing goon.But I am not immoral Maa.

Shaurya started crying.Preeta's eyes got filled up with tears.

She hugged him and said:I know the truth.Your family knows the truth.So you don't worry about what society thinks.You have to be strong.

Shaurya:But dad...he does'nt believe that I am innocent na?Because of this incident,he thinks that I am really dirty.

Preeta became upset.

Preeta:You wait patiently beta.One day your dad will understand you.

Shaurya:Dad will never understand me.He hates me since childhood.

Preeta was very upset.

Shaurya:Dad told me that he won't give any property to me.But I am not upset at all Maa.All I want is his love,not his property.

Preeta hugged him painfully.



Sandy was very angry with Anuj.

Sandy:Anuj should not be spared.We should leak his photographs and ruin his image like he spoiled your image in the society.He took advantage of your good heart and insulted you in public.

Shaurya:I don't want to take any revenge now.Because Anuj will be more revengeful and he will trouble us more.And I can't stoop so low to leak such photographs.

Sandy:Anuj knew that whatever he does,you won't defame him.That's why he got the guts to torture you.

Shaurya:I will not leave him simply.I will give him punishment when the right time comes.



Shaurya met Sunny and Shanaya.

Shaurya:Sunny...I was scared whether you will misunderstand me and Shanaya.

Sunny:What are you saying Shaurya?We know each other since childhood.How can I misunderstand you both?

Shaurya became emotional.

Shanaya:Shaurya,stay away from that wicked sub inspector Anuj.He can do anything to torture you.

Shaurya was silent.



Raghav slapped Shaurya.

Raghav:Mohit's family is not interested in their alliance with Kavya.Because her brother is immoral.So they can't trust Kavya.It's all because of you Shaurya.

Shaurya was in tears.

Shaurya:I have not done anything wrong.I swear.I will talk to Mohit and his family.

Kavya:No need Shaurya.I know that you have not done anything wrong.So you don't need to beg anyone to marry me.

Shaurya:But KD...

Suddenly Mohit came there.

They were stunned.

Kavya:You cancelled our wedding.Then why did you come here Mohit?



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Posted: 5 days ago
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Sad that Shaurya and Shanaya both got arrested. Like I predicted, Raghav didn't keep his mouth shut. He deserves a slap from Preeta. When Raghav is like this, so cruel and annoying, why does he expects Shaurya to be as straight as an arrow? If other of his children are like Preeta, at least one of the children will be like him also na? All are PreeGhav's blood only. First I read my son can't be dad means Raghav haha. Good that Shanaya got free. Seriously? He beated Shaurya with a belt? Even Raghav himself wasn't so cruel in Sb2 like u made him cruel here. Even in childhood he beat him up? Eww. I remembered Balraj of yhc seeing these scenes, even Balraj used to differentiate between Rajeev and Rudra since childhood and used to beat them but they had a kind mother Sharda like here they have Preeta. Raghav deserves to be hit himself as well, now I remembered the scene where Siya hit Raghav with the belt on his face. Palveer is so lovely. Poor Shaurya. Why is Anuj after Shaurya always? Sad that Kavya's marriage got canceled. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Posted: 5 days ago
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Yes,Raghav has not beaten Siya with the belt.But I felt that hurting her with the glass pieces was worse than this.

Raghav thinks that he is perfect and only Shaurya is imperfect.

Anuj is just egoistic as Shaurya refused to go with him to the police station in part1 and blackmailed him with his private photographs.

I just loved ur views on Raghav and I was waiting to read it.Ur views on Raghav made me laugh.Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Sad that Shaurya and Shanaya both got arrested. Like I predicted, Raghav didn't keep his mouth shut. He deserves a slap from Preeta. When Raghav is like this, so cruel and annoying, why does he expects Shaurya to be as straight as an arrow? If other of his children are like Preeta, at least one of the children will be like him also na? All are PreeGhav's blood only. First I read my son can't be dad means Raghav haha. Good that Shanaya got free. Seriously? He beated Shaurya with a belt? Even Raghav himself wasn't so cruel in Sb2 like u made him cruel here. Even in childhood he beat him up? Eww. I remembered Balraj of yhc seeing these scenes, even Balraj used to differentiate between Rajeev and Rudra since childhood and used to beat them but they had a kind mother Sharda like here they have Preeta. Raghav deserves to be hit himself as well, now I remembered the scene where Siya hit Raghav with the belt on his face. Palveer is so lovely. Poor Shaurya. Why is Anuj after Shaurya always? Sad that Kavya's marriage got canceled. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Posted: 5 days ago
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Raghav Is Really The Monster Father Shaurya Thinks He Is

Because His Actions Against Shaurya Makes It So

Nice Chapter Update Soon

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Posted: 5 days ago
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Loved it dear 😍

Too emotional 😭

Waiting for more

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Keep writing ✍️

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Part 3

Dynamic update.... awesomely written

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Very interesting update dear

Just loved it 🤗

It made me emotional

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break Part 4

Raghav slapped Shaurya.

Raghav:Mohit's family is not interested in their alliance with Kavya.Because her brother is immoral.So they can't trust Kavya.It's all because of you Shaurya.

Shaurya was in tears.

Shaurya:I have not done anything wrong.I swear.I will talk to Mohit and his family.

Kavya:No need Shaurya.I know that you have not done anything wrong.So you don't need to beg anyone to marry me.

Shaurya:But KD...

Suddenly Mohit came there.

They were stunned.

Kavya:You cancelled our wedding.Then why did you come here Mohit?

Mohit:I am sorry Kavya.Now only I came to know that my parents informed you about cancelling this marriage.

Kavya:I have no problem.I don't want to have any relationship with the person who doesn't trust my brother and me.

Rajveer:Kavya is right.If there is no trust,it's better not to get married.

Mohit looked at Kavya:Who told you that I don't trust Shaurya?I am sure that your brother cannot be immoral.And I trust you more than myself.

Kavya and others were surprised.

Mohit:I came here to tell you that I will marry only you.

Mohit-Kavya shared an emotional eye lock.

Raghav:But your parents....

Mohit:I have convinced them also.I made them understand that Shaurya is out of the jail because his innocence is proved.

Preeta:Yes,my son is innocent.

Raghav stared at Preeta.

Shaurya:We are really grateful to you Mohit.Thank you for your trust in us and loving my sister so dearly.

Mohit:No need of thanking me.Because I love Kavya.

They all smiled.




Preeta brought chocolate for Raghav.

Preeta:Raghav,taste this. It's a yummy chocolate.

Raghav:What happened?Today my wife is in a very romantic mood.

Preeta smiled.

She encircled her arms around his neck.

Preeta:Why?Can't I be romantic with my kadoos husband?

He smiled:Of course yes baby doll.

She smiled.

Preeta:Kavya's marriage did not get cancelled.To celebrate this joy chocolate has been bought.

Raghav:Good.

Preeta fed him a piece of chocolate with her hand.Raghav smiled.

Preeta:Yummy.Right?Shaurya bought this for us.

Raghav's face became dull.

He spat it in the washbasin. Preeta became dull.

Raghav:This chocolate is not fresh Preeta.Just throw it.

Preeta:Your problem is not with the chocolate,but with the person who bought the chocolate.Right?Don't insult your own son like this by spitting like this.

Raghav ignored it with irritation and walked away.



Rajveer waited in front of Pallavi's hospital for her to come.Slowly Pallavi came out.

Rajveer:Dr.Pallavi,finally you came.

Pallavi:Ya.An urgent case was there.That's why I became late.

By the way I am glad that you brought the bike instead of the car to pick me up.

Rajveer:You only told me to bring the bike.But why do you prefer bike to the car?

Pallavi:I will tell you that later.

Rajveer:Okay.Sit behind me.

Pallavi sat behind Rajveer and he started riding.

Pallavi:Ride the bike slowly Rajveer.The traffic is dangerous.

He took a sudden brake in between and Pallavi embraced him from behind for balance.He got goosebumps when she embraced him.

Slowly she removed her hands off him.

Pallavi:Now did you realize why I asked you to bring the bike?If it's a bike,I can hug you whenever I want.If it's a car,it's not that easy to hug you while driving.

Rajveer blushed.

Rajveer:Pallavi,these days you are very naughty.

Pallavi:Is it wrong to get naughty with my fiancee?

Rajveer smiled.

Rajveer:You can get naughty with me whenever you want and I love it.

They smiled at each other romantically.




Shaurya remembered his childhood days.

After the school hours get over, Raghav used to teach Maths to Rajveer,Kavya and Shaurya at home.

Raghav asked some formulas to Shaurya.Shaurya kept quiet while Rajveer said the formulas fast.

Raghav:Look how brilliant Rajveer is at Mathematics. But you can't even say a formula properly.Go and wash Rajveer's clothes.That's your punishment.

Raghav threw Rajveer's clothes including the undergarments at Shaurya's face.

Raghav:Wash them now.

Preeta:Raghav,what are you doing?

Raghav:Preeta,stay away from this.

Preeta:But I am his mother Raghav.

Raghav:This is between a Maths teacher and his student,not between a father and his son.So his mother should not interfere.

Preeta looked at Shaurya washing Rajveer's clothes helplessly.



The next day Raghav asked the same formulas to Shaurya.Shaurya said the wrong answer.Raghav took the cane and started beating him.Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya were crying.

Preeta:Please stop it Raghav.

But Raghav did not listen to Preeta.



Shaurya,Rajveer,Kavya and their neighbour Palki were sitting together.Shaurya was making a small musical instrument with some tools.Finally it became successful and music started playing in it.

Preeta:It is so nice Shaurya.You have immense talent.

Palki:Wah Shaurya!You are great.

Shaurya smiled.

Shaurya and Palki started singing with the instrument.Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya were dancing.

Raghav came there along with Palki's father Ravinder who was the English teacher of Shaurya.The angry Raghav took the musical instrument and threw it.It got destroyed.All became sad.Shaurya started crying.

Ravinder:What did you do Raghav?You should have encouraged Shaurya to make such things.He is do talented.

Raghav:First let him study.Do you know how how marks he scored for Maths?

Ravinder:Shaurya,how much did you score for Maths?

Shaurya:60.

Raghav:Just 60.But Rajveer scored 99.Even an ordinary worker's son in his class got 100/100 for maths.But Shaurya brought shame to a Maths Professor like me by scoring low marks.

Ravinder:So what?Nothing is going to happen if Shaurya doesn't score 100/100 for maths.

Raghav:The world is surviving because of maths.Those who cannot score well for maths is a big zero.

Everyone became dull.



Shaurya made a small machine.Raghav threw it outside making Shaurya upset.



Raghav met Ravinder.

Raghav:Ravinder,I want your help.

Ravinder:What help?

Raghav:Shaurya is getting low marks for all the subjects.

Ravinder:But he is getting pass marks.

Raghav:That's not enough.I want him to be a famous Mathematician like me.For that he should be failed in his 8th grade.You are his class teacher too.You exclude his name in the list of the students who passed the 8th grade.

Ravinder was shocked.

Ravinder:How can I do that when Shaurya is not such a bad student?He passes in all the subjects.

Raghav:Only if he fails he will be determined to work harder and score high marks.



Ravinder purposefully made Shaurya fail in 8th grade.

Shaurya was shocked to see his answer papers where even the correct answers were cut off by the teachers.He approached Ravinder in his house.

Shaurya:I wrote the answers which you taught me Sir.Then why did you cut it and make me fail?

Ravinder could not face him because of guilt.Palki looked at him painfully.

Palki:Shaurya!

Shaurya:Now onwards I won't study anything.

Ravinder and Palki were shocked.

Shaurya walked away.

Ravinder's wife Janki told Ravinder:I was proud to say that I am the wife of an ideal school teacher.But now I am ashamed of you Ravinder.You destroyed a student.How could you?

Ravinder became upset.

The angry Shaurya burnt his school books and tore Raghav's clothes.

Raghav could not control himself.

Raghav:This much arrogant you are?How dare you burn your school books which are Saraswati Devi's assets?You destroyed your father's clothes also?

Shaurya:You are not my father.You are a monster.

Raghav boiled with anger:You talked to your father with disrespect.This much guts you have?

Raghav took the cane and beat him.



The guilty Ravinder resigned his job.

Raghav was shocked.

Raghav:Why did you resign?

Ravinder:I did a big mistake to Shaurya listening to your words.I am ashamed of myself.I can't face myself now.I cannot look at Shaurya's innocent face.So I am leaving this place itself.Remember Raghav.It's all because of you.

Raghav was shocked.



Ravinder left the place with his family.

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