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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Have you updated the FB one ?


Last week I updated chapter 51 dear after that I didn't; hope u read that?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: J6705


Last week I updated chapter 51 dear after that I didn't; hope u read that?

Was busy! Will read today! Please try to update this one today ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Was busy! Will read today! Please try to update this one today ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Yeah do read and give me ur feedback.

Will try for not if not tomorrow sure I will post chapter 4๐Ÿ˜Ž.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter 4

Jalal walked away saying proposals from girls are not new to me... Jodha couldn't take this attitude anymore, his words got into her nerves, she was so angry she snapped her finger and screamed Mr.Jalal, he turned and looked at her, she walked towards him saying what do you think of yourself? Who cares, you think what ever you want about yourself but tell me what you thought about me? Do you think I will fall for someone like you? Jalal smirked, which irritated Jodha to the core, she said may be you are the hero of this college but this Jodha will never fall for you... Challenge? Asked Jalal with confidence, with lot of attitude Jodha said challenge... Rubbing his chin, with a smile Jalal walked away.

Girls who were passing by were commenting, look at her oh my goodness, she has challenged Jalal, may be because she is beautiful she has that attitude said another girl, who cares how beautiful she is? in front of Jalal no challenge will work... Jodha got even more irritated listening to those comments; she kept murmuring to herself, what great is he for me to fall for me.

The other side, Jalal was riding his bullet with a cute smile on his face, he couldn't stay calm anymore he stopped the bike in between and called his cousin (Mirza), who is more like a friend for him...where are you? asked Jalal; At home, said Mirza... Good I will come home in other 10 minutes just don't go anywhere he said. Jalal rode his bike fast and reached Mirza's house.

What's the matter you look very happy today? Asked Mirza, Jalal laughed and said guess what happened today? What? Asked Mirza... I saw her today he said, who? Questioned Mirza, from his wallet Jalal took out a passport size photo and said she. Mirza looked at the photo and said oh finally, so what's her name he asked. "JODHA" he replied with his lips blossomed with a sweet smile, is she really beautiful as she looks in this photo or? Questioned Mirza again. Oh she is absolutely beautiful said Jalal, her eyes and her long hair will make anyone fall for her said Jalal with pride... He started explaining to him about seeing her for the 1st time, what he felt and he told him about Jodha proposing him and their challenge. Mirza said oh so now the game is going to be interesting, let's see how it's gonna end.

On the other end Jodha was so angry so irritated, she was going home with her friends, after they continuously asked her about what is bothering her, she told then about the whole ragging scene and the conversation with Jalal, oh god what the hell have you done Jodha? Who asked you to challenge him? Hema shouted at Jodha he irritated me to that extend Hema, I couldn't control my anger replied Jodha... No Jodha, what you did is really wrong, before you challenge you should know about him, as per the details I gathered about him; he is the bright and brilliant student according to lecturers, among boys he is the best sports man and among girls he is the hero and till date he has dated 40-50 girls in the college, what so ever this Jodha will not fall for him replied Jodha confidentially, let's see said Moti.

Jodha reached home, but she wasn't that same Jodha who was always aggressive, naughty at home she was lost in her thoughts, she forgot about her dream her mind was filled only about the way he spoke to her and his attitude... Jodha was sitting in the living room doing nothing, her bro sat beside her and asked so are you enjoying going to college? Jodha just nodded her head to yes; then she remembered Jalal is now in final year and her bro is also from the same college who passed out 2 years back... Bhaiya do you know Jalal? Asked Jodha, oh yes I know him, why? Questioned her bro; everyone in the college speak only about him so I asked replied Jodha; that's because he is very talented and handsome too, when I was in final year he was in first year and can you imagine my class girls were crazy about him... Oh really? So like others even you like him is it? Questioned Jodha, not really because the girl whom I had a crush was behind him he replied pretending to be sad.


To be continued...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful.. but it was too short๐Ÿ˜’

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Padhte hi khatam ho gya๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Padhte hi khatam ho gya๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿคฃ

๐Ÿคฃ next chapter I will try to make it long๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So Jalal has a photo of Jodha... Secret crush? revenge for somewhat unknown ๐Ÿค”? Who knows...Jodha's angry about Jalals reaction. She's lost in thoughts about him. Now challenge has started. Awesome part.

Let's see what fate is up to.

Thx for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: J6705

๐Ÿคฃ next chapter I will try to make it long๐Ÿ˜‰

If you want u can update short chapters but then we want daily updates ๐Ÿ˜œ

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

If you want u can update short chapters but then we want daily updates ๐Ÿ˜œ


Very clever๐Ÿ‘

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