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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 3

(both brothers are eating there dinner when Jalal in calm voice).

Jalal said : how is your studies going on

Mirza said : good Bro you know I will definitely going to score highest marks like always .

Jalal said : good to hear that but Mirza don't be over confident okay .

Mirza said : Bro don't worry I am not over confident it is my confidence and leave all tell me how much you like Jodha.

Jalal said : she is very caring beautiful and smart girl anyone can like her but I don't like I love her.

Mirza said : Bro you just met her and she didn't even talk much to you then how do you know about her smartness and how do you know that she is caring.

Jalal said : you know Mirza sometimes we people met someone just once and understand them like we know them for years and sometimes we share our whole life with someone and never understand them like we didn't got time to understand them and how can I say about Jodha because she is like open book her eyes tell her inner feeling and I met her two time Mirza.

Mirza said : what how could that possible Bro you only met her with me in college only then.

Jalal said : you remember Mirza when I was coming with you to college and I get emergency call from police station.

(Mirza nodded his head in yes then Jalal told him everything and listening that Mirza get shocked then in teasing voice).

Mirza said : my god Bro you are very clever and fast forward here I was trying my luck on her for one week and get slapped from her and you only on your first meeting get her cell no and address to not bad .

Jalal said : there is difference between our motives Mirza you wanted to make her your girlfriend and I wanted her for my investigation but no doubt that on our first meeting itself she stolen my heart.

Mirza said : there is no doubt that you are arrested by love Bro and very soon you are going to get your punishment.

Jalal said : you are right Mirza I am ready to Die for her .

Mirza said : that's okay Bro but what about her that MLA will not leave her you have to protect her.

Jalal said : don't worry he didn't see her face and about his son he to didn't see her so they don't have any clue about her so she is safe .

(after done with there dinner and talks both goes to there room for night sleep).

(on the other side Salima goes to Jodha to make her eat her dinner because she is busy in completing her project and whenever she get busy on her study she always forget to eat food and like always Salima make her eat she in loving voice).

Salima said : little one eat your dinner then complete your project you have holiday tomorrow then you can complete it tomorrow now leave it and have your dinner .

Jodha said : you know me Di I never want to work on my holidays they for enjoying and make ourselves relax not to do these assignments okay and about dinner wait half an hour then I will eat it .

(listening this Salima shook her head in disbelief then she make one morsel and bring near to her mouth and in loving voice).

Salima said : no little one I will not hear your any excuse now open your mouth I will make you eat by my hand .

(then without any argument Jodha open her mouth and started having her food by her Di hand after few minutes she completed her assignment then turn to her Di who is going to make another morsel when Jodha maker her eat by her hand and in loving voice).

Jodha said ' I know you didn't had your dinner so have it .

(and like this both make eacother eat there food and then goes to there room for night sleep).

and on next day Jalal get up and freshen up wear blue tee-shirt black lower and shoes then take his cellphone and earplugs then connect with cellphone and wear earplugs play some music and goes out for his regular jogging and on the way started looking to others then goes to one park for his exercise and after done with that he turn to go back to his house when he see Jodha with one girl going to temple and started following her remove his earplugs and see them stop in there track another girl said and give something to her and she nodded then that girl left for temple and she stay there suddenly some kids goes to her for some money she bend to there level and take some money to give them but again they said something to her then she looked around that time Jalal hide himself behind car and look at her she then get disappointed for something then she gives the box which her sister give her they happily took that and run away then again her sister comes then Both of them goes from there in car Jalal to goes from there).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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chapter 4

Salima said : what is this little one why you give sweets to those kids don't you know I made that by my hand to serve god in temple.

Jodha said : just chill Di those kids were hungry they come to me and started begging so first I was going to give them money but then they said they need food and there is no use for money in there life because there alcoholic father always snatch money from them for his alcohol and if they didn't give his father money then he beat them to so after thinking I look around for some food shop but they all were closed and having no other option I give them sweets what wrong in that.

Salima said : nothing wrong in that little one but why I am thinking that you are taking revenge on god because you always did that first you don't enter the temple and don't believe on them and you always eat all the sweets which I made with my hands.

Jodha said : oh god Di who Said I don't believe in God it's true that I never enter temple or do any prayer but I do believe on him and I do worship him but on different way .

Salima said : and what is your way little one .

Jodha said : my way is to helping his children who were made by him you know Di if people stopped going to temple stop serving oil food sweets or blanket on temple and started to give those to poor people then there will no one Sleep in empty stomach on night and die with hunger then no one will die with cold in winter and there will no house will left in darkness on Diwali festival . And then the god will really get happy and will bless with his mercy.

Salima said : in talk no one can win against you and you can make everyone dance on your finger little one but let's go to police station to complaint against that men.

Jodha said : no Di You go I have some work then I will come there okay bye .

(then Salima goes to those kid then to that men with them she goes to police station and Jodha goes home for some work then after some time she goes to mall to buy something).

(and other side Jalal enter his house and get shocked to see Mirza making breakfast he goes to him touch his head like he is checking he has fever then in shocking voice).

Jalal said : you don't have fever then what's wrong with you Mirza how you wake up this early and making breakfast .

Mirza said : you are right Bro I am perfectly fine and I wake up early and making breakfast because of you .

Jalal said : because of me but I didn't told you to make breakfast then .

Mirza said : you didn't told me but now I have to make it because now you are in love Bro and very soon you will get married then you have to give your time to my Bhabhi and you know my friend told me that after marriage people get changed so you are not different .

Jalal said : no Mirza this will not happen okay you are everything to me no one can take your place in my life and after marriage to I will not let change anything in our relation okay .

Mirza said : really Bro thank God after seeing your Romeo act yesterday I was hell scared but now listening to you i don't have to worry now leave all that go get ready I will arrange breakfast on table .

Jalal said : fine I am going to get ready .

(after few minutes Jalal comes there and started having breakfast but he has smile on his which is not went unnoticed by his devil brother so he in teasing voice).

Mirza said : oh my god I didn't knew that just because I made breakfast today You will get this happy tell me what happen .

Jalal said : I saw Jodha again

Mirza said : where in your dream .

Jalal said : when I goes for my regular exercise there I saw her near Temple with someone .

Mirza said : and who was that someone girl or boy .

Jalal said : girl .

Mirza said : then she will be Salima her elder sister and my mam you know bro they lost there parents in very young age and they don't have any relatives to that's why they are very possessive and protective towards eacother.

Jalal said : who said they don't have anyone I am with them I will protect them .

Mirza said : chill Bro you don't even know them much and you are talking like you are there family member .

Jalal said : today I am not there family member or something but in future I will be there family member right.

Mirza said : there nothing could done for you Bro okay leave all that give me your credit card I need to buy some shirts for me .

Jalal said : I knew it that you will ask something you devil and take it and buy some shirts for me to .

( giving his credit card to Mirza Jalal goes from there for police station and when he reach there he saw Salima there with one men and the same kids whom he saw in the morning near Temple talking with Jodha he gets surprised first then but after few minutes composing himself Jalal comes to his officer mode and goes to sit on his chair then in calm voice pretending that he don't know them ).

Jalal said : yes Jalal Mohammed is here what brings you here .

Salima said : my name is Salima am here for complaint against this men officer arrest this men he is the father of these kids but he force them to beg in front of other people for money then after they got some he snatch that from him for his alcohol and today when they didn't get money so he started physically torture them officer I want that you take an legal action against him .

( but before anybody could say something one lady comes there and in crying voice).

lady said : no sir leave him he didn't do anything please leave him we are poor people but we never raise our hand on children believe us please leave him sir .

(listening all this Jalal get shocked first because what first he hear from Salima then from this lady but he himself saw these kids begging for money but he can't take action without proof so he in Calm voice).

Jalal said : do yo have any proof to make us believe that your husband is innocent because I saw them begging for money to .

Lady said : no I don't have any proof to make all of you believe on his innocence but you can ask our kids they will tell you the truth.

Jalal said : kids come here and tell me that you all are force to beg money from other because of your father did he beat you all tell me no need to get afraid tell me the truth okay and if you will say truth then I will give you lots of chocolate now tell me .

kids said : no sir we are not force to do anything he loved us he doesn't beat us for anything .

(Jalal knew they are lying he can see fear in there eyes but he can't force them because they are not some criminal then Jalal turn to Salima and in defeated voice).

Jalal said : listen miss I respect you that you come here and complaint against child abuse act but without any proper proof we can't take action .

(before he could complete what he have to say Jodha comes there and in Calm voice).

Jodha said : forgive me to interrupt you on your word officer but I have some proof with me I am the one who told my Di about this incident actually when today we goes to temple there these kids come to me and I started giving them money when they stop me and said they need food not money and these money are no use for them because there father will snatch money for his alcohol addiction and if they didn't give them then he will beat them and coincidentally that time I was going to record Temple prayer in my mobile camera but by chance there all talks get recorded in my cell so you can see that and I don't think after that any other proof needed here .

(then Jalal take her cell and watch the video and then without wasting minutes he order one constable to arrest that men then he give her cell back).

Jalal said : thank you very much for this and we will take an tough action against him .

(after that both girls left from there leaving smiling Jalal there who thought what a smart girl you are Jodha I am falling head over heels in love with you then he get call he picked up without checking and in officer mode ).

Jalal said : hello officer Jalal Mohammed speaking here who is it .

Mirza said : Jalal Mohammed younger brother Mirza Mohammed speaking here and I have to give you important information officer do you have time to listen .

Jalal said : yes I have time tell me what information you have.

Mirza said : we got dinner invitation from someone today .

Jalal said : you know i never goes to any party or dinner still you are telling me this.

Mirza said : I know but this invitation is from someone special and I am sure you will agree to come with me .

Jalal said : there is no one special in my life but I Will like to hear the name .

Mirza said : that someone is my would be Bhabhi Bro after you left I gone to near mall for shopping and I met her there and we both started having conversations then she told me that today is her sister birthday so she is making an surprise party for her so she invited me to and I said that I will come with my bro so tell me you are coming or not.

Jalal said : no no no I am definitely going to come and buy some gift for them.

Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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NICE update...
Convo of ja and Mirza is good...MIRZA teasing Jalal...Jalal is ready to die for Jo..
Sisters affection is beautiful...Both duo gang are very affectionate...Lovely...
Wah Ja saw Jo in the temple... But what happened there?Ja hide himself...Waiting for next part Rashmi...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful update dear
Jalal is ready to die for Jo..!!
Surprising..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update rashmi 😊
Ohh I was thinking only tht Hw Jo didn't meet Ja when she talk abut case to salima... But she did..
Waah smart Ja he gt her no. Too n poor mirza 😆
Beautiful bond between Jo n salima... Just lik Mirza n Ja... Just the difference ther Ja tk care mirza here salima took care of Jo..
Ja again saw Jo but thy didn't met...
Waiting for nxt 😊
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Update soon 😉
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AWESOME update rashmi 😊
Superb... Loved it.
Love Jo pov... N wish all think lik her in Real..serving poor lik serving God... Beautyful
😆 mirza n his antics... Aww Ja loving bro...
Salima n Ja met... Salima to lik her sis beautyful human... Ja want to help her but he can't... But nt worry jo helped her she gt proof...
😆 JA gt all mad... He cnt stop smiling... 😉
😆 mirza... Wht a bro... Now Ja gt one more chance to meet Jo... N this Tim ther meeting nt fr work... Interesting let se...
Waiting for nxt
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Waiting for nxt... Update soon 😉
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Nice story rashmi.😊 like the clearing of air between two bro in simple way.
Pls. Try to write about update on main page in title so we got to know.
Thanks.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome Update Rashmi...
I like this Jo very much... Always take care of others...Her explanation regarding Believe in God is very nice...👍🏼
Ja is falling hard for her...He likes her smarty avatar...
Mirza is teasing his bro...Ja is talking like he is already a member of Jodha's family...
Waiting for the party meet of AkDha.. Hope will also notice jalal far from officer in the party...😊
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