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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Ye chali kyun gayi...😲

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
Ye chali kyun gayi...😲

Mujhe laga meko puch rahi ho ki main kyun offline chali gaye🤣

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Mujhe laga meko puch rahi ho ki main kyun offline chali gaye🤣

no mazak only mudde ki baat...😉

Jo gayi to gayi , now i want Jalal to do something & i would love to see DOMINATING , FURIOUS & POSSESSIVE but also CARING Jalal... , start writing next part...👍🏼

BRING HIM yrr. !

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Ekta maata kya kam thi jo baar baar jajo ko alag karti thi😆😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Ekta maata kya kam thi jo baar baar jajo ko alag karti thi😆😆

😆

Isse Jada aur kitna kareeb laun main jo ja ko😆

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

😆

Isse Jada aur kitna kareeb laun main jo ja ko😆

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SomeoneloveJA

@SomeoneloveJA

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Hot and sensual OS..Payal..
Awesome ...love it...
Thanks ...

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

😆😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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Isse Jada aur kitna kareeb laun main jo ja ko😆

😆😆 but last main jo ko jaane kyun diya. Write 2nd part where jo is more positive about life and realises her true love in ja. Its a request to you😆. I get restless when there is no happy ending.😭

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Super duper update...i didn't like jo leaving ja as like object...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
😆😆 😆😆 but last main jo ko jaane kyun diya. Write 2nd part where jo is more positive about life and realises her true love in ja. Its a request to you😆. I get restless when there is no happy ending.😭

She didn't love him. She wanted to let out her frustration so she landed on him😆

Seems I should had written more properly about jo's state of mind

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