Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016) - Page 11

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Payal now that u have started writing again can i expect a chapter of journy from u in near future ??? Its a request plz do try n update journey ... i really miss reading it

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

So I got it right! 😎 😆 You should make it the official punch line of the OS...🤣

>>> Yes.. it suits more than those lines, which i wrote on banner of this OS😆


I know yaar...even I think so...sab kahaan se kahaan pohunch gye...aur main wahin ki wahin...😛😆
>>>> was just kidding re..😛

Accha I wanted to tell you ki m using IF from phone and images aren't visible to...Hence no comments on youe edit thread and banner. That'll come later...😃

>>>> Ohk dear.. 🤗will be waiting for your comments, specially on the banner of this os😉😆

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Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

nice one payal...bt I would say... 😃 I actually don't like the concept of one night stand when at the end the lovers depart 😭 or yaha tumne wohi kar dia yaar...rula dia yaar...bechara...socha tha woh wapas ayi h...n tumne isle dilke 1130 pieces Kar die... 😆 bt your writing as usual too good thi...very got n sensous 😳

Originally posted by: shyana3

sorry for late reply
amazing and sexy update
want to read more stories
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Hot hot os..sensous..1st happy to read ur os aftr long time..u can be able to continue ur stories also..pls update ur FF's..many of us are waiting..in ts OS i had lot of questions while reading..but at the end i came to conclusion tat they were lovers,jo left ja,on her birthday she's frustratd and needs some relif,oly he can give so she came to his house..but our hero is a gud boy he thought tat she came back and when she said i have to go..he was lyk oh my god we just did tat..why..?ha ha..jo s very cool and casual..when she was going she s happy but she dnt want to hurt him or herself by being with him.?ts s what i got..am i right payal..?sry if i interpretd wrong..but ts s super hot..thanks for pm..

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Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Awesome OS Payal🤗

One single night ☺️ title,banner and ur narration☺️☺️☺️

Oh my poor Jalal he was confused...nerrvous... and hurt at the end😕

Jo used him as an outlet of her frustration

She said good bye to him..he was embarrassed .. feeling bad for Jallu 😒

I thought she was a selfish girl . but she was a strong girl😉...its not easy to leave after tasting😉a delicious handsome manlike jallu😳😆 perhaps her decision was right she was too frank with him

Keep writing payal👏

Thanks for pm 😊😊

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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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oooh payal diii its sooo hot omg iam sooo happy that finally my payal diii is back on writing iam loving it diii its superb fabulous amazing I have no words diii really no one can beat you on writing its my bet love you sooo much and sooo sorry for late diii ...and that pics was aweasome sooo hot pic.thanks for pm diii..

Enjoyed reading it, Payal...

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