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Posted: 11 years ago
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My first attempt at OS!! Just wrote it directly..Sorry for mistakes!!πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
Btw - Do read my FF AkDha in Jungle..I'll be greatly blessed if you do and like it!!
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Sukanya's wedding had taken place. It was a grand one. Jalal had chosen the perfect Match for Sukanya.
Jodha and her family were so happy to see their Sukanya's happiness. Sukanya and her family shared emotional moments before her Bidaai Took place.
Jalal was happy too to see Jodha happy (although he thought why).
Maham Anga was not at all interested in the marriage. She smiled fakely whole time and did taunt wherever she could.
Sukanya;s bidaai was done. Jodha, her relatives , her mom were all emotional.
It was night time. Mainawati and Raja Bharmal thanked Jalal highly.
Jalal accepted their thankfulness.
Mainawati : Jamaai Sa! Humare yahan riwaaz hai ke Pati aur patni ek hi kamre mein rehte hain. Vo..She glitched.. Humari Darkhwaast hai ke aap aur Jodha ek hi kaksh mein Rahein.
Jodha was so surprised and shocked as well. She could not speak anything against her mom.
She looked at jalal puzzlingly. Jalal looked at her smirkingly,
Jalal : Hum aapka hukm kaise taal sakte hain Ammi? Hum zaroor Jodha begum ke kaksh mein hi rahenge.
Maham was hell shocked to hear this. But she could not protest.
** Jodha and Jalal in one room **
Jodha sat on the couch looking all nervous and little angry.
Jalal entered with a smile on his face.
He noticed Jodha sitting on couch and went near her.
Jodha got terrified to see him approaching.
Jodha (in angry tone) : Shahenshah! Hum yahan ki beti hain. Hum apni Maa sa ko mana nahi kar paye lekin aap to mana kar sakte the na..
Jalal (smirkingly) : To hum bhi to Jamaai hain! Kya hum aapki maa sa ke viruddh jaate Jodha Begum.
Jodha looked away.
ANyways, She continued : Khair jo bhi hai, hum yahan so jayenge,,aap vahan palang par so jaaiye..
Jalal : Nahi Jodha Begum.. Hum yahan par soyenge..Aap palang par so jaaiye..
Jodha ( in little higher tone ) : Aap kyun nahi samajhte SHahenshah? Aap kripya wahan aaram se so jaaiye..aapko thik se neend nahi ayegi yahan..Aur aap humari fikr mat kijiye..Humein yahan ki aadat hai..
Jalal (smirkingly ) : Aapse kisne kaha Jodha begum ki hum aapki fikr kar rahein hain...Hum to bas Mughal Sultanate ki Begum ki chinta kar rahein hain..He smiled trickly.
Jodha fumed now. She turned away from him.
Jodha : Aapko jahan sona hai..so jaaiye.. Hum to yahin par soyenge..
And she laid down on the couch.
Jalal went to the big bed and laid there, gazing at Jodha.. He thought : She is different from all...She does not have any fear of me.. That's what I like..!!
**Mid night **
Jalal saw Jodha turning herself again and again on the couch.
he went near her, Looked at her mesmerising beauty, her perfect curves.. He was lost for a second.
He lifted her up his arms and said to his sleeping Begum : Hum khud nahi jaante Jodha..Lekin han..humein aapki fikar hai.,,
he carries her to bed..makes her lay down,,coves her with blanket and goes himself on Couch.
He sleeps on the couch.
** Morning **
Jodha wakes up in the morning to see herself on the bed and looks at jalal, who is on the couch.
She is angry for sometime..Then she looks at his face..He looks so innocent while sleeping.. Her anger turns into smile.
She gets up, goes near Jalal whose blanket had fallen down from the couch. She picks it up and tries to cover Jalal with it.
When suddenly, Jalal turns in his sleep and blanket gets entangled on him and Jodha.
Jodha falls on his chest with a thud.
Jalal wakes up suddenly. Both of their bodies are almost stuck, their faces very close.
Jalal smiles trickily : Jodha Begum..Aap yahan kya kar rahin hain??
Jodha tries to get up but his hand is on her waist.
Jodha stammers : Vo..Hum bas aapko..Kambal udhane aaye the..aur kuch nahi... Aur aap yahan kyon soye...Humein kyon vaha sulaya??
Jalal smirked :: Kyon? Aap humare saath sona chahti thin Jodha Begum???
Jodha felt trapped in her own words. She could not control her blush. She got up and went out of the room.
Jalal laid on couch, smilingly ...thinking about Jodha..Her unseen attractness..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u gave us really gr8 sneak peek. I cannot wait when they go to amer. I really hope there is mroe akdha scenes than political ones. I am already worried bec there is going to be adham,sharifuddin,pratap etc.
thx for giving os in amer. please update ur jungle ff soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one , any plans to continue it further ... please continue with part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti.r

Good one , any plans to continue it further ... please continue with part 2

Thanks Preeti !! Not planned yet but if it gains some popularity..lol..Surely I'll continue!! Thanks again!!πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a Cute Os😳
liked itπŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Awesum I...πŸ‘
Loved it...
It has surely increased my hopes fr d
Next episode...πŸ˜‰
Hope u will cont wid d next part...

N do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was Just so Awesome yaar!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ⭐️ Really loved it alot.❀️
You write everything so perfectly,It felt like I was watching an episode on My TV all the time!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜› 😳
And I just loved the line where Jalal said,"Kyu aap humaare saath sona chahti thi Jodha Begum?! 😲 ☺️ πŸ˜† That was just too Naughty and I myself was Blushing very hard.☺️ 😳 πŸ˜†
And Sorry I was unable to read ur Akdha in Jungle FF after Part 3 coz of time problem but I'll try to read soon and comment there also.😊
And Pls Continue this OS yaar. 😊 Really loved it alot.❀️ 😳 ❀️
And Thankyou sho much for the PM!! πŸ˜ƒ 😳 πŸ€—

P.S.:-I so Wish and Pray that This OS of yours totally comes true in the show!!I want everything to happen exactly in the same way like this!! ❀️ 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
superb...update 2 part if possible 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
nice os...
pls...continue with part 2...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Loved it, its nice,write more
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