Maaneet NEW SS - Contractually Yours - UPDATE: Teaser - Pg 13 - 22/11 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 months ago
#61

Originally posted by: manjeet6

Very interesting concept

Geet's aunt is so disgusting

Poor Geet what will she do now

Thank you!!! That she is - every story needs an antagonist na - while they might not be pucca villains, they will have a role to play, I hope! smiley4smiley2

Let's see what Geet does now.

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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Posted: 8 months ago
#62

Originally posted by: coderlady

Geet has been cornered in her quest to get the house that belonged to her parents. Her aunt has made sure she will dance to their tunes.


Maan knows her? He knew right away about the name.

Yep, Geet unfortunately has, and looks like her aunt is succeeding, but our hero is there na. And Geet isn't one to give in so easily.

Maan recognizes her company and hence her name.

I'll try to post the next part soon where more will be revealed.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

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Posted: 8 months ago
#63

Another great part, thank you! How evil of her aunt. Her uncle is just a puppet with no backbone. It seems like Maan is all set to meet Geet with his own contract in hand. Poor Geet, seems like everyone wants something from her but I guess if she gets her ancestral home, then i’m sure marrying Maan is worth it. If he wants to use her, then she should use him too. Thanks again.

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Posted: 8 months ago
#64

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi there!

Hope you are well.

Thanks for updating

apologies for late comments

was away on a work trip


Part 1

Great update… well written

feeling for Geet

hate her aunt and uncle

her aunt is so mean

sad that Geet is unable to do anything

angry that her aunt threatened her

Geet should not have given them shares in her company

Geet's anger was justified

her aunt is an opportunist

upset that she takes advantage of Geet's situation

so Geet refused to sell her company

how will she help her aunt?

at least her friend who is a lawyer is helping her

Gosh Geet has to now pay 45 crores to get her house

of cos Maan's operations head wants him to colloboarte with GH

seems like Maan knows Geet

how???

well Maan wants all info on Geet

as expected Maan ensured that the contract has everything that he wants

what other contract did Maan get drafted?

waiting for Maan and Geet to meet

they are the answers to each other's problem


update soon


Hiya!!! Thank you for reading, and no worries - please do read whenever you can, and you leaving this long comment is everything! don't worry about the timing of it smiley31


Firstly, I am very happy to know you felt bad for Geet - if I could achieve that, I consider my job done with this part.

Geet has to find ways to help her aunt - we'll delve more into Geet's mind in the future parts.

Maan recognizes Geet's company, and hence Geet - next part will have some glimpses on how. And the other contract that Maan has drafted, that will come in the future parts too.

BANG ON - they are definitely the answers to each others problem! smiley42

Thanks for reading and commenting, once more smiley27

Again, unable to tag you, don't know why! :)

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Posted: 8 months ago
#65

lovely story! Apologies for late comments, thoroughly enjoyed reading it. So Maan and Geet are both in a problem, for which they would need the other to solve it! Savitri Devi is hell bent on getting him married, haha loved how she was on fire with the conversation. So confident, smart, she seems to have a full fledged plan up her sleeve. So Maan had to agree to getting married. But he too is getting prepared with a plan. He knows Geet Handa, but from where?! I could see where this is going! Very sad Geet’s situation at her home was. No parents, and an aunt and uncle who are greedy for her money. She seems to have her own motive with entertaining them all these years, but very painful looking at he condition. So eager for both to meet each other. Wondering if she too knows him already. Lovely concept, wonderful writing, and so looking forward to the next

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Posted: 8 months ago
#66

Interesting strat..

Looking forward to read next part..

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Originally posted by: simranDi

Another great part, thank you! How evil of her aunt. Her uncle is just a puppet with no backbone. It seems like Maan is all set to meet Geet with his own contract in hand. Poor Geet, seems like everyone wants something from her but I guess if she gets her ancestral home, then i’m sure marrying Maan is worth it. If he wants to use her, then she should use him too. Thanks again.

Aw thank you!! I like what you said in the last line - if Maan wants to use her, she should use him to.

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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Posted: 8 months ago
#68

Originally posted by: babelicious

lovely story! Apologies for late comments, thoroughly enjoyed reading it. So Maan and Geet are both in a problem, for which they would need the other to solve it! Savitri Devi is hell bent on getting him married, haha loved how she was on fire with the conversation. So confident, smart, she seems to have a full fledged plan up her sleeve. So Maan had to agree to getting married. But he too is getting prepared with a plan. He knows Geet Handa, but from where?! I could see where this is going! Very sad Geet’s situation at her home was. No parents, and an aunt and uncle who are greedy for her money. She seems to have her own motive with entertaining them all these years, but very painful looking at he condition. So eager for both to meet each other. Wondering if she too knows him already. Lovely concept, wonderful writing, and so looking forward to the next

Thank you! Aw, no worries about the timing, thanks for reading and commenting.

I really enjoyed writing that prologue and the dadi-grandson conversation - loved it!

Maan does recognize Geet's company, and hence her name. :) I'll reveal more in the next part

Thank you so much, I am so glad you enjoyed this story!

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Posted: 8 months ago
#69

Originally posted by: Athuathulya

Interesting strat..

Looking forward to read next part..

Thank you for reading and commenting

I'll try to post the next part soon.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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oh geets life sucks! with such horrible people around

but Im glad she made it on her own, an independent women

Maan knows geet and so chose her

he made changes in terms and all

with maan around geets life gonna change for good

waiting for the story to proceed

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