Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hello Iptida
Thank you for posting the prologue
Fascinating prologue... well written
of cos Maan is arrogant and rude.....
hate how he ignored and treats Geet
well Geet works for KC
Geet's annoyance with Maan's behavior was justified
alas she has no choice
but she tried to engage with him before their meeting
so Maan is still angry as she led his personal letter
at least she apologised to him
however Maan was so mean and broke her pearl necklace
upset that he insulted Geet
her anger and behavior was justified
glad that she confronted Maan
oh he threatened her
liked that she was not scared of him
great that she threw his words in his face
Maan was unperturbed
Gosh he threatened to kiss her
Geet's response was reasonable
wow he kissed her
she was indeed shocked
hmm she was clearly affected by the kiss
and so was he.....
Geet's question was anticipated
not surprised that Maan's reply perplexed Geet
Geet's thoughts were understandable
Past well incorporated
oh no Geet was pranked
as expected Geet was really mortified
ahh Maan was also there
Geet was really embarrassed
feeling for Geet
waiting for Chapter 1
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