Superb update. Continue soo
Romance FF
Superb update. Continue soo
Prologue
thanks for tagging n sorry for late comment i was busy
maan is so rude n his behaviour towards geet is annoying ... poor geet feeling bad for her .... she is working as secretary n architect n doing her duty but maan ignore her like she never exist
geet was lost in thoughts.. her small mistake n she even apologized for that but maan that time to behave same arrogant n rude n broke her necklace n at present he saying about geets presence as poison really not acceptable at this point .... geet was so hurt n she left... lost in herself
maan rescue her from busy road but he was the main reason .... maan kissed geet .... now that was shocking... not romantic one
so maaneet hv past .... is it??? but geet mentiones they were not even friends or known to other ... than why maan hate geet so much waiting to unfold more
honestly i thought it will start from collage n campus kind of .... u give it that too but its in past... off course its prologue so.... looking forward whats store in next (1st part)
Nice one
Geet have tuff life still she manages her studies though she have to give up her dream but in college she have her friends and annie drag her to nearby new cafe and then pinky were drooling on dd and maan found geet looking at him well beechari toda taad hee toh ri tih ye maan babu itna famous h usae kya problem honi chaye geet k peeche pad gaya but I think he kind of thought geet is with annie spying on him but annie came and even blackmail him for that chudail sneha 🤣🤣🤣 maan was taking them in car but then he stopped geet oh now cliff hanging I cant wait what he is going to say well thats cool that they met like this grand pa s secretary to maan and their kiss was sizzling that time
chapter 1
after prologue this update is smoothing one
poor geet she was princess n now facing all this... financial problem n her mom wants her to get married n leave study ... so sad
aniee is lovely person ... i like her
she console geet in her friendly way ... i like that
geet pinky n aniee saw maan with girl n geet eyes locked with maan ... so maaneet is not that stranger as geet thought .... maan n aniee.. bro n sis ... so maan know geet n even talked to her
maaneet little convo was nice... geet was so nervous n stammer poor girl ... but got reveled as maan aniee started their own
love maan n aniee convo... it was Fab
like the was aniee dragged geet along to wards maans car for lift ..... u stopped on Cliff hanger .... maan ne geet ka haath pakda aut tumne part khatam kar diya ... not fair
awesomely written love it
eagerly waiting for next
thanks for updating .... update MP too
Where's part 2? Not fair...just when it got interesting, the part was over. So there is a past and he is intentionally ignoring her...zeher lagti hai was a nice one 😂
Thanks for tag. Super update in the begining. Geet belonged to a rich family but because her dad faced issues they become poor. She didn't see difficulty before. But now life is very painful for her. She wants to become an architect. Her family has debt and they want her to get married. 😩
Loved Anee. She is so positive. Everyone deserves a good friend like her. Anee and Pinky took Geet on a new cafe. Maan is also in same cafe with other girl. Geet and Maan shadeseyelock. Geet is very nervous. Maan stopped her. Geet starts stammering. Maan is actually looking for his sister Anee. Maan and geet talk is interesting. So they are all classmates? Geet is awkward with Maan. They don't seem like friends. More like he knew her as Anee's saheli.
Maan's entire banter with Anee is wholesome and cute. Maan is classic Maan. Anee is very mischievous loving her. She literally made the Msk to give lift to Geet. He touched Geet's wrist. Now what will happen?
Earger to read more. Loving it. Please continue. Update soon.
Hi Ipti
hope you are well
Chapter 1
Amazing update… greatly written
feeling for Geet
hate that he mom is forcing her to get married
liked that Geet is determined to complete her studies
sad that her dad's decision has financially ruined them
Annie is a wonderful friend
great that she assures Geet
admire her efforts to cheer up Geet
good that Annie and Pinky took Geet to the newly opened cafe
once living a lavish lifestyle, Geet now has to count every penny
so they see DD there with a girl
of cos Geet had to look at Maan
oh no she was not discreet!
to her bad luck Maan sensed her gaze and looked at her
Geet's reaction was reasonable
hmm she was drawn to Maan's eyes
Geet was indeed surprised that Maan was talking to her
well Maan assumed Annie was up to something
Thank God Annie came there
as e expected Maan confronted Annie
liked how Annie handled the situation
ha ha she blackmailed Maan
enjoyed Maan and Annie's banter
loved Annie teasing Maan
at least Geet smiled seeing their bickering
Thanks to Annie, Maan bid farewell to Annie
now Annie wants Maan to drop Geet
however Maan stopped Geet and held her hand
Geet was clearly affected by Maan's touch
update soon
Some introductions in this chapter.. Geet belonged to a well off family who have lost everything now & at a verge of stopping her education getting her married.. very sad life she has.. while Maan is not totally unaware of Geet like initial perception. Annie seems like a close sister to him.. and good friends with Geet. Wonder if she knows the girls’ collective feelings for Maan, and may be she could act like a catalyst in their supposed love story, if there is one. Eager for next
Lovely story , very intense . Thanks 🙏
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