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Posted: 22 days ago

Part 79

Rajveer's comments have changed the dynamics between Maan and Geet

now Maan feels he is right for Geet

so he reflects on everything

great that his assistant saw him distracted and message Lady A

at least they had dinner together and talked

of cos Maan was shocked that Rajveer is her co-host

Geet's joke about Rajveer did not have the anticipated impact

dismayed that Maan doubts himself

sad Maan and Geet grow further apart

glad that Geet has feeling for Maan

wish these two would talk


update soon

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Posted: 22 days ago

Great part

Hope things come up and make maaneet talk and not go far from each other

Cont soon

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Posted: 20 days ago

Why maam has confidence on himself he himself has to try the relationship going spent sometime like a normal communication is very important in any relationship and geet and maan is lacking hope maan comes out of this hope he doesn't misunderstand geet and her feelings

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Posted: 18 days ago

Part 80

The next few days went by in this odd way both of them missed spending time with each other and only saw each other in passing. Only having enough time to greet good morning or good night.

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Geet has feelings for Maan.. but she suffers from a bit of low EQ and doesn't always show her feelings best... She grew up in a traditional highly patriarchal house... she never saw any woman wooing or cajoling their better half’s.

She thinks they are married, who says I love you daily, what’s the need of saying it daily. It’s all self-understood.

If we are together then clearly there are feelings. If there wouldn’t have been feelings then we wouldn’t have been together

She would have never moved into Maan's house or shared kisses with him if she didn't feel for him... she Just doesn't know that verbally she needs to acknowledge all this to Maan.

Wo kitni bhi feminist and careerist ban le.. kuch kuch views to ab bhi wai poorane zamane ke hai

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This situation had 'Maan' written all over it.

Geet tried her best to stop it and spend more time together. But Maan worked even harder to avoid her. Slowly sliding back to his old ways of secretly keeping tabs on Geet.

He convinced himself that it was all so that he could avoid her. He does not have any other motive behind it. But the ugly voices in his head knew the truth and mocked him all the time.

He missed Geet so he is coming up with convoluted ways to know about her. He is jealous so he is keeping an eye on her.

Geet knows something is wrong and she wants to face it head-on.

After 4-5 days of this routine, one day she deliberately lied to Maan in a message saying that she would come early today and let's have dinner together.

To which Maan replied - sure.

Geet had a gut feeling that now Maan would deliberately come home very late.

So, she stayed back at the set completeling script work for next episode till late.

Since Rajveer was her co-host, he obviously stayed back too.

R - it's already 6 pm if you are staying late. I'll accompany you. The work will go faster, and I would have more peace of mind knowing you are not alone here.

G - you don't have to. Really! I just want to free up some time tomorrow so I am doing some extra work today. Plus, I have ladyA to accompany me. She can take down anyone

R - it's fine. Let me accompany you too. Anyways the script work will be better if we work on it together.

Geet shrugged and accepted his offer. No longer trying to make him leave.

Geet continued to be busy till 9 pm and finished all the work that could be done.

She looked at the time and felt it wasn't late enough yet.

R- well all here finally!! Let's leave? It's pretty late now.

G - yeah.. it's late.. you go ahead, I'll pack up and leave too.

R - let me help.

G - no.. no.. it's fine.. it's not much.

R - I'll drop you to your car.

Geet gave a mournful smile. Not able to get rid of Rajveer at all. She doesn't want to tell him the real reason why she is delaying.

She looks at ladyA helplessly.

LadyA also knew Geet's plan and stepped up at the right moment.

L- ahemmmmmm... Madam! It seems there is something wrong! With the car!! It will take half an hour to repair!!

LadyA displayed her best acting/lying skills which were pathetic. But Geet appreciated her effort and covered up with her own superior acting skills.

G - oh no. Looks like I'll have to stay a bit longer. Rajveer you go ahead. It's already very late for you.

R - no way! How can I leave you two ladies here. Let the mechanic take a look at the car. I'll drop you guys home.

L- actually it might just take 15 mins.

G - Rajveer thanks. But really it's fine.

R - no, i insist!

The situation grew chaotic and Geet could come up with any good excuse to stay back

In the end she and ladyA got into Rajveer's car and left their own car with the mechanic.

Meanwhile after 15-20 mins Maan's assistant informed Maan that there seems to be something wrong with madam’s car, but the mechanic is not able to find any issues.

Maan frowned and became anxious instantly. He was very careful about Geet's car and its maintenance. There should not have been any issues unless someone deliberately damaged it.

He immediately called Geet and told the assistant to pack up and bring the car around.

Geet saw Maan's sudden incoming call while they were all in Rajveer's car and picked up cautiously.

G- Hello?

M - Geet?

G - Maan...

M - Are you ok? Where are you?

G - I am fine why are you asking? I am on my way home.

M - The mechanic called my assistant. Something is wrong with your car? What happened? So, you suspect someone behind this? I checked the stalker from last time is still locked up. Should I come pick you up halfway? Where have you reached? is ladyA with you?

G - I am fine Maan. It’s... probably nothing ... I don't know what's wrong with the car. Let's talk at home. Yes ladyA is here with me. We'll be home in another 20 mins. I'll see you at home ok.

M - Are you sure? I can-

G - I’ll see you in 20 mins at home. I promise.

M - okay. Just.... Take care, okay?

G - Yes. You too. Don't drive too fast.

M - hmm... see you at home.

Maan disconnected the call and ignored Geet's last few words and overspeed all the way home.

Maan managed to reach home before Geet somehow and waited at the house entrance for Geet.

Meanwhile in the car after Rajveer had asked for directions, he grew exceptionally quiet.

Only after some time he cryptically spoke to Geet

R - I didn't expect you would be living with him.

G -... Wha... Whatever do you mean. Married people live together.

R - Maan married.... Huh... I am not a fool Geet. I can guess there's probably some agreement behind this. I just... thought... he wouldn't want you around all the time.

Geet was shocked at Rajveer's words. She squirmed in her seat growing uncomfortable.

Half of what Rajveer said was true... as for the other half... was it true?

Did Maan really didn't want her around all the time. So that's why he initially didn't ask Geet to live with him.

Of course, Geet forgot the part that if initially Maan had asked her to live together. Geet would have done her best to refuse and not do it.

Before Geet could deny Rajveer's accusation of a contract marriage, ladyA spoke up.

LadyA - what would you a single virgin bachelor know about such adult people things. Don't talk randomly. Madam and boss are happily married and often indulge in high level plays to keep things Sparky and romantic.

LadyA- (sigh) ... I can only dream of finding a guy like that... you know keeps me only toes but treats me like a queen.

Geet went from shocked to blushing within seconds.

G - ahemm.. Rajveer.. you have a misunderstanding. And don't mind ladyA. I am sure you are not virg- single!!

Geet wanted to say single from the starting. Really!! All the stuff ladyA said messed with her head!

Geet couldn't wait to get home and get out of the car. She needed some mental preparation to face Rajveer after this disaster conversation.

Thankfully she could already see the house in sight.

Maan watched as a stranger's car crawled up the driveway and stopped in front of the entrance.

He watched as ladyA and Rajveer got out of the car.

He watched Rajveer beat ladyA and open the car door for Geet to get out.

He watched Geet come out of the car all while looking at Rajveer awkwardly and nod goodbye to him.

Maan watched Rajveer looking back at himself with a complex look on his face.

Maan turned around and walked inside without saying a word to anyone.

Maan walked inside slowly and steadily, ignoring Geet calling him from behind.

He didn't know what to think right now.

What was right or wrong or manipulated or true or lie?

Geet walked fast almost running towards Maan who didn't seem to be able to hear her calls.

G - Maan.. Maan!! MAAN!!!!

She caught up with him just as he started going upstairs to his room and pulled back on his arm.

G - Maan!! What's wrong with you? Can't you hear me shouting your name?

Maan slowly turned around and looked at Geet's hand pulling on his arm.

He forcefully grabbed her wrist and pulled it away from himself.

M - Can't you see I am ignoring you?

He tightened his hold on her wrist.

M - Can't you see... can't you...

His voice was dangerously low, sending a chill down Geet’s spine. She couldn’t remember the last time he’d spoken to her like that—so distant, so full of something... darker.

G -... Maan?... Ouch... Maan...

All of a sudden ladyA intervened and grabbed Maan's hand which was holding Geet and pitched a nerve which immediately made him release Geet's hand.

LadyA - Boss! Spar with me. Let's to go the gym!

Maan blinked and was able to focus again.

He looked at Geet's slightly red wrists showing his fingers imprint at the same time he felt ladyA applying constant pressure on his nerve and pulling him towards gym.

Maan couldn't believe that he almost hurt Geet, but evidence was right there.

It became increasingly hard for him to sort through the events and emotions churning around in his head and act rationally.

M- Sorry Geet... I...

He looked towards ladyA

M- Let's go.

All this happened within seconds and Geet couldn't figure out what happened to Maan. Why did ladyA intervene and asked to spar??!? Why is Maan acting so weird all of a sudden and even said hurtful things to her.

Although her wrist looked a bit red, it didn't hurt, and she could clearly see how it hurt Maan when he realized what he had done. But why...

Why is he ignoring her so desperately?

What taboo is there between them that cannot be talked about?

Geet wanted to follow after Maan and ladyA and keep trying to talk to Maan but ladyA silently signaled her to leave them alone for now.

Once Maan and ladyA put on the safety gear they started sparing no holds barred.

After some time when Maan had let out his pent up frustration and chaos inside him eased a little he realized how hard he had been going up against ladyA.

He immediately eased his actions and lightened the power behind his hits. Unfortunately for him ladyA didn't.

As soon as he eased a bit ladyA executed a complicated move and threw him hard over her shoulder.

Maan fell down flat on his back. Before he could recover. LadyA pounced on him and started raining down punches.

Finally, Maan tapped out to make her stop.

LadyA got up and offered a hand to Maan pulling him up too.

LadyA - 3 things boss. 1. No matter what you are feeling putting a hard hand on a woman is not allowed. Next time I'll break it. 2. I am a bodyguard not a girl. Don't underestimate me. No need to go easy.3. Deal with the sh*t inside your head ASAP. See a shrik if required. Don't hurt Geet.

When it's about others Maan processes everything objectively or know that he doesn't care about cons and be all in...

But when he doubts himself, he doesn't know what to do. He has never faced self-doubt before. He has been clear about his bad and good points. This situation of self-doubt is unchartered territory for him, and he is on verge of drowning.

Maan was fully surprised by LadyA today. He snorted and said.

M - Aren't you afraid I’ll fire you right now?

LadyA shrugged.

LadyA - I am here. Call me if you want to go another round. Also you can fire me... but madam will hire me back.

She replied cheekily to Maan.

Maan smiled back at her. Yeah, Geet probably would give him an earful first and then hire ladyA back

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Posted: 17 days ago

Thanks for lovely update. Loved how lady A tired to stop Maan !

If Geet know the reason behind Maan cold shoulder,she will be hurt. Lady A did reply Rajveer very well. He should stop involving in maan geet relationship. And about Maan, he should express his fear or his thought. Instead of drifting apart.

It feels bad, if Maan try to push Geet far. Geet may think he is not happy with her being in his home. As rajveer is trying to feed Geet mind with negative thoughts.

Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 17 days ago

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maan n geet passing though hard time with the way rajveer comment on maan

lady A answer perfectly to rajveer when he try to down maan n geet's relation n bad word maan

maan become angry seeing rajveer with geet

lady A fight back with maan for hurting geet

maan also believe that geet will hire her back

only thing needed is clear talk between maan n geet

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Posted: 17 days ago

Hi there

hope everything is fine


Part 80

sad seeing Maan and Geet drift further apart

upset that Maan is ignoring Geet

hate Rajveer's comments

glad that Lady A put him in his place

Maan's concern for Geet was reasonable

upset how Maan treated Geet

glad that Lady A intervened

Maan and Geet need to talk


update soon

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Posted: 16 days ago

Great part

Loved the way lady A stood for Geet

Hope Maan sees and clear his head too

Cont soon

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Posted: 15 days ago

Part 80

Fantastic Update

Maan and Geet seriously needs to talk

but Maan been so independent it maybe difficult for him

to speak about his fears concerning Geet

this Rajveer really has become like a sore thumb in Maan and Geet's life

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Posted: 14 days ago

Part 81

But when he doubts himself, he doesn't know what to do. He has never faced self-doubt before. He has been clear about his bad and good points. This situation of self-doubt is unchartered territory for him, and he is on verge of drowning.

Maan was fully surprised by LadyA today. He snorted and said.

M - Aren't you afraid I’ll fire you right now?

LadyA shrugged.

LadyA - I am here. Call me if you want to go another round. Also you can fire me... but madam will hire me back.

She replied cheekily to Maan.

Maan smiled back at her. Yeah, Geet probably would give him an earful first and then hire ladyA back.

LadyA - Also boss. About the car. Madam wanted to catch you red handed sneaking back home late at night. But that Yahoo guy just kept foiling our plans. We pretended car trouble to get rid of him, but that cunning fox is too full of strategies.

Maan broke down lady A’s weird explanation and the name giving. Finally understanding the cause and effect behind tonight's scene

M - I'll talk to Geet.

Maan thanked lady A for her help and decided to have a honest conversation with Geet tomorrow morning.

Maan walked out of the gym and saw lights in the hall were still brightly lit.

It was almost midnight.

He looked around and found Geet asleep on the couch. She was probably waiting for him to come out, but entire day's exhaustion caught up with her.

Maan walked over to her and gently picked her trying not to disturb her too much, still Geet woke up a little and muttered his name in her sleep.

G - Maan...?

M - hmm ... sleep

He quickly brought Geet to her room and tucked her into the bed. All the while Geet kept murmuring his name and her complaints and worries unintelligibly.

Maan kept replying to her in soothing tones, letting her know he was there.

He gently stroked Geet's head until she was deeply asleep again.

Later he took off her footwear and loosened some of her clothes so she could sleep comfortably and went back to his own room.

All night Maan kept thinking about how to talk to Geet . He kept coming up with drafts and discarding them one by one.

He had always been honest and open about his shortcomings with Geet. He had felt no shame in exposing them.

: But this... This ugly .. self-depreciating.. doubtful feeling... He couldn't come to terms with it himself.. much less explain it to Geet. Moreover, he was disgusted by his thoughts and didn't want Geet to know about them.

Next morning Geet woke up with a start and looked around her room.

Her first thought was Maan and that was her only thought.

She got out of the bed and rushed downstairs running all the while, shouting Maan's name.

Worried that Maan had successfully managed to ditch her again and leave for office. Well today she was determined to track him down to office is required.

Fortunately, it wasn't required. By the time she reached the downstairs living area, Maan heard her call and replied that he was in the kitchen.

Geet sighed with relief, without slowing her place rushed to kitchen and came to a surprise halt. Maan was once again making breakfast for her.

Maan turned around after hearing Geet's approach.

M - Woke up? Nice look...

Maan smiled at her with a hint of mocking and leering all mixed in.

Geet huffed, catching up her breath and it took her a moment to realize what he said. She looked down at her disheveled state. Barefoot, hair askew, her bra peeking out of her shirt front.

One hand clutched the shirt front close and the other went to her hair.

She fired a silent look Maan, calling him shameless.

Then Geet ran back upstairs feeling highly irritated by Maan's smile. Halfway to her room she felt even more relieved to have seen Maan's old irritating smile.

She quickly freshened up and changed her clothes before coming back down.

Maan was just placing all the dishes and drinks on the table.

G - should I make something else too? I haven't cooked for a long time.

M - it's fine. Let's eat this first. If we are still hungry, we will see.

Maan served his most famous and only known dish of eggs and fruit and toast to Geet and poured her glass of juice as per her preference.

Geet slowly took a sip of juice wondering how to broach the topic of what's going on, what's wrong.

As soon as the sweet freshly squeezed juice flavor covered her palate, Geet was again stunned silly for a while.

Feeling emotional, Geet realized that only Maan would make the effort of squeezing fresh juice for her. He who could easily buy the best most luxurious and costly preprocesses fruit juice box, would make time, and do these small things for her.

Geet took another few sips and enjoyed Maan's subtle pampering.

M - Geet, I am so sorry about last night. I.. I don't have .. i.. it's... It was just wrong and I should never have..

G - it's okay Maan. I wasn't really hurt or in pain. It just looked worse than it felt. Honestly!

M - No Geet. Don't excuse such behavior. It can't be overlooked. You didn't feel pain doesn't make it okay. What if next time you do? I don't know what would have happened if ladyA wasn't around!!

G - I know. I know nothing bad would have happened even if she wasn't around. You weren't trying to hurt or intimidate me Maan. You just lost track of the strength you were using to hold me. That's all. And I can bet my life over the fact that you will never raise your hand to hit me even unconsciously. I just know you won’t.

Maan was taken aback by her words. He didn't know what to do with her strong belief in him, when he doubted himself.

When every single one around him till now has seen him as the Devil. Geet's word are like a solid rock in his turbulent mind. She doesn't realize it herself how deep and impact her words have on his psyche

Geet didn't want Maan to keep feeling guilty about what could have been and other what ifs. And if they could solve the main issue. There is no need to worry about these things anyways. So, Geet decisively changed the topic.

G - Maan. Why are you trying to avoid me?

M - You noticed huh...

G - Maan.. tell me please.

M - I am not sure how to explain it Geet. I am... there are some things I need to think through and resolve. What happened last night... I guess I had been avoiding you because I was afraid of something similar happening. Or me stupidly saying hurtful things to you to make you back off.

G - What is it then? What's eating you up? What things? We can think about them together. Can't we?

M - It's not something I can explain or maybe i don't want to. I... I am still trying to sort out my thoughts myself. I just feel stupid and over sensitive and all sorts of negative emotions all the time.

Geet felt even more worried after hearing Maan's words and frustrated because he wouldn't tell her the main issue.

G - you really can't tell me? We can talk about everything Maan. There have been no secrets between us. We even know all the ugliest and most unsightly things.

M - What if it's even worse than that? I am not denying that I don't have an issue, Geet. I just don't think sharing it with you is the best possible option. And I promise I am going to make it okay.

G - But... if it's so bad, how can I just sit and wait and do nothing? If we can't talk about it, then is there anything I can do to make it easier for you?

Maan grew silent at Geet's words and looked at her skeptically. Maan knew this was a big unreasonable thing to ask but he still said.

M - Can you quit the show?

G - What? But... Why?... Is it because I have too busy? I can take few weeks leave Maan and stay here with you.

M - No.. forget it. I shouldn't have asked you. No need for that. I have work too even if you take leave, it's of no use.

Geet couldn't figure out Maan's request. And she really didn't want to quit the show, unless Maan can give her a good explanation.

It was selfish of her, but she had really worked very hard.

If only Maan would explain a little bit. She would quit. She would quit the entire show business if it would help.

But not without a reasonable explanation from Maan.

Maan and Geet finished their breakfast and left for work.

Geet kept thinking about the words Maan spoke and the clues he dropped. Trying to fit the pieces of the puzzle together.

LadyA saw Geet lost in deep thought and asked her what happened.

Geet treated ladyA more like a close friend than an employee.. after thinking about it she told ladyA only about last part of her conversation with Maan.

G - Why do you think he wants me to quit the show?

LadyA - you are seriously asking me this?

G - Yes..?

LadyA - are you pretending to be stupid, or you really don't understand?

G - Huh?!??

LadyA - Boss hates Rajveer.

G- What? No way! You weren't there at the ancestral house. They got along well. Rajveer is the only one in his family, for whom Maan specially made time to talk to. Plus Maan can't be jealous of Rajveer. There is no way. Not a chance. Firstly, there is nothing to be jealous about and secondly even if he was. He wouldn't hide that.

LadyA shrugged at Geet. She called it as she saw it or as her gut told her. Rest is up to Geet to believe.

Soon Geet reached the shooting location and got busy with her work.

Her wrist still looked a bit red and blue, so she made sure to wear a full sleeves outfit today to avoid any unnecessary misunderstanding or rumors.

Throughout the day her mind kept slipping back into the conversation with Maan and with lady A. Subconsciously she kept glancing at Rajveer during the breaks.

Geet really couldn't figure out what was so great about Rajveer that Maan needs to be wary of him.

Rajveer could also feel Geet's distraction throughout the day as well as the secret glances.

Plus, what he had said on the ride back yesterday, he felt he needs to clear the air with Geet.

During one of the breaks, he approached Geet and invited her to a more secluded spot for a chat.

Geet also felt she needs to find out more about this matter and followed behind him.

R - I am sorry, I said a bit too much in the car yesterday. I shouldn't have judged you without knowing the whole story. I hope you can forgive me. And forget the whole conversation.

Only now that Rajveer mentioned it, Geet remembered the talk about contract marriage with Rajveer.

She really didn't care what Rajveer thought right now, she was only worried about Maan.

G - Yeah sure. Consider it forgotten.

Geet replied with a shrug.

Rajveer was surprised by Geet's non-caring reaction.

R - Yesterday... Was Maan okay? He just left before i could say Hi to him. Is everything fine?

G - Why are you asking about Maan?

R - Just... You seem a bit pre-occupied today...

G - Everything is fine. And also, you don't have to be so concerned with my and Maan's private life.

R - I didn't mean to Geet. It's just that I know Maan very well, so I just feel more concerned about you.

G - What do you mean you know Maan. I know him too. I don't see what's the big deal.

R- I have grown up with him Geet. You don't know him as well as I do. He is a black hearted, ruthless businessman.

G - That's enough!!

Geet didn't want to talk to Rajveer anymore. How dare he say such things about Maan.

Geet immediately turned to leave, but Rajveer held her hand to stop her. Feeling pressure on the already tender wrist, Geet let out an involuntary hiss of pain.

Rajveer immediately pulled his hand away but also saw the bruised hand.

He pointed towards, it and exclaimed.

R - How can you still not understand he is monster!!

G - You don't know anything. And you saw nothing.

R - huh!! I know plenty. From my childhood I have grown up watching Maan run wild with no one controlling him or teaching him wrong and right. Do you know he pushed down his nanny from the top of the stairs when he was only 4 yrs old?

R - Forget punishment, he didn't even get scolded. The family just paid hush money to the nanny. And he only became more ruthless when growing up.

R - When he was 10 years old in an accident his older cousin broke leg. Of course, cunning as Maan is, there was no proof that he was behind it, but everyone knows he orchestrated the accident over some minor school matter. Don't even get me started on alcoholism and drugs and substance abuse. Ever since his college days he has been totally out of his right mind. And once he started working God knows how many people's career and life, he had destroyed claiming it's revenge for when they bullied him in their childhood. Who takes revenge for bullying to this level??!! And now he hasn't even spared you, a woman!! He is simply disgusting Geet.

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