MAANEET FF - INCOHERENT FLAMES Part18 pg61 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Congo for Ur 1st FF πŸ‘

Awesome Prologue 😳

Cont. Soon πŸ˜›

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO JR.MAANEET

Hiii all😊

Hope I'm doing well with updates...u all r free to give suggestions as I'm new n need ur help to keep u all happy❓

Bada wala THANK YOU for supporting me so much n dont forget to send me buddy request for further PMs😊❀️


PART 1

FLASHBACK(4 years ago)

He entered the office with style and straight away went to the reception.


Maan: Hi! I am Maan Khurana and I have an appointment letter to work under Mr. Ajay Chauhan as a junior designer. Can you please tell me where to report.

Receptionist: Ya sure. You need to go to the 2nd cabin on your left side sir.

Maan: Thanks

As he turned to leave for the cabin, all the girls just pounced on the receptionist to enquire about him. Everyone wanted to know who was this hottie, what was he doing here, will they ever be able to meet him again?

All were delighted to know that this handsome man named Maan Khurana will be working with them in their office only and so they can get to see him almost daily.

All were going gaga over him, it was like God gave face to their dream man and sent him on Earth, so every girl was up for grabs and wanted him just like breath for life!!!

Ever since then he had been chased constantly by one or the other girl working in that office whereas all the boys were jealous of him and why not? Since the day of his joining no other men got any attention from the females in the office. However hard they may try to gain some importance, failed miserably.

Afterall Maan was just unbeatable'be it at work, at manners and ofcourse at looks. No one could stand near him. HE WAS THE BEST AND DESERVED THE BEST TOO.

His life had been a smooth graph, always increasing, gaining experience and knowledge. He was beyond excellence at work and within months became an indispensable part of the company. He got his first promotion after 4 months of joining. It was the same day his life changed completely but for better.

Today an angel entered his life and changed it forever and he never came to realize about it till he lost her.

END OF FLASHBACK

Maan was sweating profusely by this time. He had been doing tai-chi for 2 hours but still he could not get out of his frustration. At last he went to his room so that he can calm his nerves by having a shower.





He was trying hard to control his emotions standing under the stream of water. It took him half an hour to collect the pieces, but he was back to himself now. THE ARROGANT, THE PERFECTIONIST AND THE ANGRY YOUNG MAN ' MAAN SINGH KHURANA.


He walked down from his room and straight away went to his car ignoring everyone in the house. No one tried to stop him knowing his temper lately.


They cared for him a lot and this stopped them to interfere in his way of life.

They knew what was in his heart and his sufferings, they knew he was already having hard time to control himself and hide his pain from them so that his family members are not hurt due to his condition.

They let him be as he wanted to because they knew trying to change anything would hurt Maan a lot and in turn increase their pain too. So it was best to let everything be as it pleased him.



Part 2- pg9


Edited by rashi_jain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
loved the update
can u put the pg no of the update in the title line along with date of update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
The past is interesting saying that he started fm scratch and reached d highest.

But today his life is missing fm his life.

Loved d update.Thanx for d PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Smooth flow...rite language u justified to put emotions into words... suspicious start as u told me about concept looking forward to it.

One thing to add ...put index on first page otherwise it also gonna be hard for u also to search the chapters in thread as u proceed...happy birthday to u also


Waiting for more

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Part πŸ˜›
Keep It Up πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
interesting start dear
as always maan nd his style ⭐️
loved it
waiting to know wht happened in past that maan is
soo hurt nd alll
waiting for next
buddy req. bej dia h 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
congrats on ur new ff...nice concept...interesting prologue...maan missing geet...why did she leave???where did she and her family disappear????plz continue soon...
Edited by ushankitvc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
interesting start
loved it
all girls gaga over maan
waiting for geet's entry
maan's family is very understanding
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40


Maan started his career as Junior designer...

waiting for more past to open up...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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