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Posted: 4 years ago

Family emergency...in these times...please take care...


The next morning is such a casual setup. A little bit of teasing and a little bit of meaningful conversations. I love how he never gave much thought about marriage symbols, as she is Mrs. bajaj with or without them unlike her, but still, he knows her thoughts and made sure she had her wedding chain when they got married. Chalo, we will get to know more of his past now.

Rishabh-Veena conversation👍🏼. A typical mother-in-law and son-in-law talk. He assured her of looking after Prerna and also clarified that it is not a good time for Prerna to come to India.

Pancakes for breakfast. I am so looking forward to Love bites conversation now.

Lovely update. Waiting for the next part.

Edited by MR21 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks all will write the next one soon and reply back to your comments too ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Thanks all will write the next one soon and reply back to your comments too ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Any requests for future chapters let me know

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hmmm...maybe a possible holiday trip....some family times....silent and comfortable moments....in short make some sweet memories that they can recall once the revenge drama is underway.... moments that can bring strength and comfort in times of need.... somehow the build up of this story till now doesn't allow for outright romance....only subtlety will do I think....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Hmmm...maybe a possible holiday trip....some family times....silent and comfortable moments....in short make some sweet memories that they can recall once the revenge drama is underway.... moments that can bring strength and comfort in times of need.... somehow the build up of this story till now doesn't allow for outright romance....only subtlety will do I think....

I agree for some reason outright romance doesn’t fit for Rishab and Prerna..I don’t know if that’s because of the legacy of the characters or because my writing is subtle too


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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks all next one on it’s way

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Hey all sorry for the delay !!! Got lost with all the everyday things. Hope you are all well and thank you for all the encouraging and wonderful responses. Here we go hope you like this one too.

Will make some time to respond to any comments I haven’t got around to. ❤️

7. Love bites


Prerna was washing her hands and her forearm under cold water.

Where Mr bajaj had left a mark was now causing a burning sensation. The cool water under the tap helped.

By the time Veena entered the kitchen Prerna had dried up.

“Priyu ..”

Said Veena as she walked towards her.

“Tu theek hai na beta”, khush hai ? “You’re alright aren’t you love” you’re happy?

Prerna smiled with her eyes not just her lips and Veena in response couldn’t help but do the same.

The smiles were wrapped in a hug now,

“Prerna!” Called out Rishab a few minutes in making her jump a little.

Veena smiled at how newly wed the couple seemed especially when Prerna rushed to respond like a wife would.

“Ji ayi!”(Yes, in my way)

She shouted back before rushing off to leave the kitchen.

When perna walked back into living space see saw Kuki sat eating her breakfast and Mr Bajaj stood fixing the cuffs of his sleeves

“I’ve got to get to this meeting be back in a couple of hours”, he said looking up from his sleeves now and then at her, “Eat something” in particular looking at her when asking this of her.

“She nodded a yes”. As he went about reaching for his blazer hung on the back of a dining table chair in front of him Prerna stopped him.

“Mr Bajaj...may I ”...she said, he looked up at her asking him whether she could help him into his blazer. Everytime he looked at her today he saw a different Prerna one who had stepped into the role of his wife, he didn’t mind as he saw her basking in this feeling.

She stepped closer as he handed her his blazer and then walked behind him holding out the arms of his blazer to allow him slip it on.

Kuki gave a wide smile and cheeky clap it seemed to be her way of her showing she approved.

Both looked towards kuki with surprise and later a smile.

“Shush eat your breakfast” said prerna whilst Bajaj smiled on.

“See you both later” he said wishing them goodbye.

...

How are Mrs Bajaj and Kuki asked Mehra, sat beside Rishab in the back seat of one of Mr Bajajs company cars. “They’re very well thank you” said Rishab as Mehra was about to give him a quick update as they drove to the meeting.


It was warm even in the air conditioned car at this time of the year, as soon as they they arrived he made his way to the washroom.

Walking to a sink, washing his hands with cold water and then splashing a little on his face.

The truth was he was a little uncomfortable at the collar.

Unfastening the top button of his shirt he loosens his collar and puts a finger around the fold of the collar around his neck to give himself some room.

His wife had left a little memorabilia from their night together.

Mrs Bajaj he sighed to himself as he saw the love bite on his neck line.


..

Later that afternoon as Rishab returns home he sees Kuki rested in prernas lap at the couch. He keeps quite as not to disturb.

Taking off his blazer puts it to aside

“Abhi abhi soyi hai (she’s just fallen asleep) she whispers to him.

Rishab walks around and sits beside them both. He lovingly runs his hand over Kukis cheek.

There was a comfortable silence amongst the three of them.

Rishab looked up at prerna and remembered he owed her a conversation.

She watched him sit and admire his daughter the way father’s did.

“Kukis mom Arohi lived next door” .. prerna paid more attention when she realised he was sharing something close to his heart.

“I worked at the local garage her father owned, that’s how we met. She continued her education I continued to work to support my mother.” Prerna noticed the way Mr Bajaj went from looking into oblivion to looking back at Kuki.

“When we married her father passed away and I grew the business little by little. Fixing two cars a day then fixing four.

When we were pregnant with Kuki I knew I had to do more to earn more.

The day I got my first deal was the day we had Kuki but also the day I lost her mother.” Prerna could feel the sadness in his words.

“From then on I focused on making money, making money so I could help Kuki gain her speech, making money so I’d be the most powerful person in any room I’d step foot in.”


“And ma?” She asked him.. and he looked towards her “I lost her too not long after.”

“I’m sorry” said prerna softly, her eyes concerned at how bleak Mr Bajajs past seemed.

“Love bites Mrs Bajaj”, That’s the unfortunate thing about it.

Prerna nodded but Rishabhs words also reminded her of love bites in a different sense. The sort he’d left her and her uncomfortable posture worrying if he’d noticed had been observed. It was as if she was hiding something from him.

“George take kuki up to her room and bring me some ice.” Instructed Mr Bajaj to the butler.

George did exactly as was asked of him he took kuki carefully to her room meanwhile Mr Bajaj poured himself a drink and walked over to his armchair to light his cigar.

Prerna watched him.

Soon George had returned with a bucket of ice. Instead of putting ice into his drink she watched him take a handkerchief out of his trouser pocket and place ice cubes into a wrap.

He walked over to her and asking to see her forearm. Prerna held out her arm to be nursed by him.

..

Next: Though love

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Posted: 4 years ago

really nice. in your story does P love RB or is she distant like in the show? it would be a shame if she was, after having all these loving moments.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome! You excel in the subtle romance part.

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