A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 69

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ndcdance

that was such a cute update..

lol swaron and mom talks..they r so cute.. 🤣
and swaron talks.. 😳
loved it..amazing...
tks for the pm..


thank u so much!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: trisha19

Beautiful Update!! Loved it...❤️


thanks!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

It was adorably cute...😳

Loved it ... each line was cute.
the fight between both are good to see than their love... beautifully written...
and mom was sweet..loved it
yaa even i think why sharon hesitates so much like she is very much introvert type...
and i loved the last part. heheheh waiting for the next part curiously...want to know wht will happen...
and i really missed tanni and rey here...
updtae fast waiting

Keechu


thank you so much di!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

So cute update.. Awesomely writtern..

The last lines were so beautiful..
Loved Sharon and Swayam's mom's bond..
Please do update soon..
And thank you so much for the pm.. :)


thanks a lot!!..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--

Sharon is so cute and naughty..

She was putting all blame on swayam.. 😆
Swayam's mom asked him when he is thinking of bringing her officially..
So maybe a swaron marriage is coming up soon.. 😃
Update soon.. 😃




thanks a lot!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 25


Swayam and sharon's parents have fixed their marriage ... It was another evening when they came out of their office... swayam was about to drop Sharon home and then go to his but he got a call from his mom...

"sharon ko leke abhi ghar aja..." His mom told him in an affirmative tone...

"okay..." he said in confusion and cut the call...

"mom ne tumhe bhi bulaya..." Swayam turned to look at sharon who was leaning on the door of the car... she nodded and they sat in the car and left for swayam's home...

As they came inside the lounge , they saw his mom , chachi and taani sitting there... swayam immediately flashed a huge smile seeing taani at their place after a long time...

"kaisi hai!!!..." before swayam could react sharon and taani hugged each other and sat down on the couch totally ignoring his presence... He came and sat beside his chachi who gave him a sympathizing look and started riffling his hair... after some time taani finally realized that she had met swayam after weeks so she grinned excitingly turning towards swayam...

"kya chal raha hai bhai???" she asked him.. swayam kept his head on his chachi's lap and laid down on the couch...

"wahi chal raha hai jo tere paas nahi hai..." he replied casually...

"kya???" taani scratched her head in confusion...

"dimaag..." He said and burst into laughing at his own stupid joke...

"maa..." Taani whined so that she can get swayam scolded by his or her mom...

"uff.. chup rahoge tum dono..." swayam's mom glared at him... " Sharon maine tujhe isiliye yaha an eke liye bola kyunki kal karwa chauth hai... and hum yaha celebrate karenge to tub hi rehena yaha.. and if you want tu bhi rakh lena..." as soon as his mom finished swayam made a face...he tried to come to his point of interest...

"rey kaha hai???? bhaga diya tune use???" he asked taani who made a face at him...

"uff.. swayam.. ayega.. office se directly... thodi der ho jayega..." Swayam nodded and closed his eyes again...

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Swayam and rey were sleeping in swayam's room when he heard some noise coming from downstairs...

He got up and sat on his bed rubbing his sleepy eyes... He got down , wore his sleeper and walked outside to see the light was switched on downstairs... he looked down the landing to find all the girls sitting there and eating a lot of things... he frowned and checked the wall clock..

"why the hell are they eating at 4 o clock in the morning????" he quickly went inside his room and woke rey up...

"abbey kya hua..." Rey snapped at him in his sleepy voice...

"arrey uth na.. neeche sab log tush ke khana kha rahe hai yaar..." Swayam eventually forced rey to get up...

"array wo karwa chauth ke liye koi rasam hai shayad.. subah hone se pehele khana parta hai..." rey said and was about to go back to sleep ...

"chal hum bhi khate hai..." swayam said and forced him to sit up again...

"abbey pagal hai kya??? Tu bhi fast rakhega???" rey asked him.. swayam made a face ...

"array bhook to lagi hai.. wo log akele kyun khayenge.. hum bhi chalte hai..." rey also thought swayam was right... he was also hungry and he knew there would be tasty food downstairs...

"tum dono neeche kya kar rahe ho????" as soon as they came downstairs they were hurled with a bundle of questions...

"wow.. humein bhi bhook lagi hai..." before anyone could say anything rey and swayam sat there and served themselves a plate full of food...

Swayam was sitting beside sharon and as soon as he saw no one was looking at them , he quickly held sharon's hand under the table.. Sharon looked at him and glared...

"theek se kha lo..kal pura din kuch nahi milne wala..." He smirked at Sharon...

"same to you..." she winked at him and swayam's smirk vanished like a thief got caught!!!...

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The next day was a bustle in the house... there was the puja going on.. all the friends and family were assembled there and the girls were bust applying mehendi...

Sharon was done with her mehendi.. she had wore a saree of taani and she was about to go upstairs to her room to sit for a while.. as she was about to go u the stairs she stepped on the saree end and the pleats from her waist turned loose.. she immediately pressed her elbow on the pleat.. she was half bending down and immediately looked around from the middle of the stairs.. all the ladies in the house had mehendi in their hands... suddenly she got so scared that she could only think about swayam.. she looked around to locate him in the lounge... She found him talking to rey... she waited their impatiently for him to look at her.. after some seconds she found him turning around and she hoped that he would see her... as expected swayam saw sharons tanding on the staircase looking at him like she would burst into tears now... Without thinking for a second he rushed towards her...

"kya hua????" he asked her with concern...

"saree utae gayi hai..." she pointed at her waist... he looked down to see her holding it in place with her elbow...

"what???" he gave a confused look... then he understood what she meant.. " to yaha kyun khari ho??? Upar jao..."

"upar jake kya karungi.. zindegi bhar waha rahungi???" she snapped at him... " mehendi sookhne mein bohut time lagega...and upar se sab ke haath mein hai.. upar jake I wouldn't have been able to call anyone..." She explained...

"ab???" he asked with a frown...

"mujhe kya pata???" she again snapped at him...

"accha okay.. lets go upstairs.." he almost ran up and Sharon followed him quietly.. he took her to his room and closed the door...

"mai kar du???" he asked with an awkward look... Sharon nodded... he moved forward as Sharon removed her elbows...

"ise nikalke firse thik se ..." Sharon fumbled with her words.. swayam nodded and put the pleats out from her waist.. he looked at her to see her looking down.. he was about to tease her but she was already more than embarrassed so refrained from doing saw... he somehow managed to make the pleats.. although it was not as clean as before but it was manageable ...

Sharon felt he was done and looked up at him to see him... she gulped as she found him staring at her intently and withdrew his hands from her waist but not before brushing at part above the waistline of the saree and stood at a distance...

"done..." he said proudly... Sharon wanted to divert the air...

"waise tumhe kaha se pata chala saree kaha se pehenate hai????" she asked with a glare and swayam face palmed.. he just helped her out and she immediately went to her siren mode... But this time he decided to play along...

"you are forgetting Sharon I am the CEO of a fashion house..." he folded his hands near his chest , tilted his head and smirked... Sharon frowned at first and then glared at him...

"matlab kya hai tumhara???" she asked...

"are you sure you will be able to handle the truth???" he raised his eyes...

"ohh.. to tumne pehele practice kiya.. wo good for nothing models pe????" Sharon snapped at him... swayam bit his cheeks to stop himself from laughing out and spoil the fun...

"off course..." he shrugged casually...

"pata honi chahiye thi mujhe.. sare boys ek jaise hi hote hai..." and she was about to go out when swayam held her upper arm quickly...

"arrey babah... mai mazak kar raha tha... tumhe nahi pata kya humare company mein there are girls who drape sarees on models... ye basic hai .. isiliye mujhe pata hai.. and see its clumsy too..." Swayam laughed and explained to his would be pagal wife as she flashed a grin...

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Swayam was standing on the terrace alone , talking over phone when Sharon came upstairs to check whether the moon has come out or not...

"abhi tak nahi aya..." Sharon sulked... swayam turned around to find Sharon there and cut the call...

"kya hua???" he raised his eyes... Sharon pointed at the moonless sky and swayam smiled...

"bhook lagi hai???" he asked her and she nodded sheepishly...

"to khalo na neeche jake.. ye moon kab ayenge pata nahi.. mai kisiko nahi bataunga..." Swayam tried to push her out of the terrace..

"aise kaise kha loo???" she muttered some curses at him for saying stupid things...

"to na khane wali kaunsi baat hai???" he frowned...

"accha?? To tum bhi kha lo..." Sharon smirked at him and his face turned pale...

"mai?? Huh??? Kuch bhi..." He quickly looked away...

"accha?? To tumne fast nahi rakha????" the ball was in her court now...

"haa rakha to...koj problem hai tumhe?? Waise maine paani piya.. tumhari tarah nahi hoon bina paani ke rahunga..." He sulked like a kid as she caught him red handed...

"awe... kitna pyaar karte ho mujhse..." Sharon clapped her hands like a kid flashing a huge grin...

"isn't that obvious???" he asked him irritated by her stupidity...

"I love you too..." he beamed like a small kid...

"that's more obvious..." he said as a matter of fact and Sharon sighed in irritation...

"you know what.. tum bilkul bhi romantic nahi ho..." She stated and was about to move out of the terrace but swayam held her elbow and flung her towards himself startling her...

"kya bola????" he whispered in her ears ... Sharon got scared and looked at him pushing him by his chest...

"kya bola???" he smirked at her pulling her closer as she started inhaling from her mouth...

"kuch nahi..." She somehow fumbled her answer...

"mai romantic nahi hoon????" he caged her perfectly in his arms so that she can't run away... Sharon being too dazed to react shook her head quickly and as she saw swayam narrowing his eyes , she nodded...

When she saw swayam smiling mischievously , she understood that he was just playing along and thus retorted back...

"ohh please.. tum bilkul bhi romantic nahi ho..."

"challenge mat karo mujhe..." swayam warned her...

"I would love to..." Sharon said confidently...

"deal sealed... challenge accepted..." He smirked at her.. "waise... pehele hi bol raha hoon.. baad mein mat kehena chachi hai , ma hai , taani hai..." he cleared his intentions in front of her... sharon gulped ...

"kyun bolti bandh??" swayam smiled at her helpless state...

"what do you mean.." she frowned at him...

"I mean that I will now embarrass you in front of everyone..." he stressed on the last word... Sharon tried to leave but swayam pulled her again...

"waise 7-8 children to mujhe chahiye so abhi se practice start karein..." swayam thought to tease her...

"dekho pehele se hi mai bhooki hoon.. ab faint ho jaungi..." Sharon struggled in his arms...

"is it less???" he bit his cheeks to stop laughing...

"nahi.. cricket team banao..." Sharon snapped at him...

"if you insist..." swayam shrugged...

"fine ab choro mujhe..." Sharon made an irritating face...

"kyun nahi karni hai???" he smirked at her...

"kya???" she looked away turning red...

"practice..." he said as a matter of fact...

"shut up.. battameez insaan... hato.. choro mujhe..." she glared at him..

"abhi itna blush kar rahe ho to tab kya karoge... fir bologe mai unromantic hoon..." they hadn't realized that rey was standing there at the entrance of the terrace .. he coughed to make them realize his presence and swayam immediately left sharon...

Sharon closed her eyes tightly in embarrassment and stood apart...

"kya???" swayam asked as if nothing happened...

"chand dekhne aya tha... par kuch aur dekha..." swayam and rey both started laughing and Sharon turned more red.. she looked up to see the moon has come...

"chand aa gaya..." She screamed startling rey and swayam and then rushed downstairs to let everyone know...

Everyone came upstairs and the rituals started.. Sharon saw swayam through the sieve and he fed her sweets and made her drink water breaking her fast...

Throughout the ritual swayam either kept on winking at her , or held her hands in front of everyone making sure no one noticed to make Sharon blush... he made sure he won the challenge...

After everyone went down Sharon fed swayam a sweet and they also started going downstairs...

"waise..jita kaun???" swayam asked sharon while moving down the stairs...

Sharon smiled in defeat...

"so har gayi na?? mrs would be Sharon shekhawat???" he raised his eyes flashing his cute grin...

"pata hai.. maine humesha se sochti thi.. that after marriage I'll not change my sir name.. but abhi.. this sounds good..." she indicated to what swayam called her...

Swayam smiled at her and took her into his embrace promising her a future full of happiness...

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ANI N NABANITA

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres.
Yay! Yay! Yay!
As promised, you updated today. Yay!!
And I'm the first one to comment..
Double yay!!
Now to the update,
Beautiful one.
And cute as well.
Sharon and Swayam's continuous bantering is so fun to read.
Loved it.
Do update soon..
Loads of love,
Adity.. :)
Edited by VrushanianAdity - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sry for late unres 😛

It was such a sweety sweety update ..!!
written with so much love and care ...

i donno what to say ..i was smiling throughout the update..

happy days are going on for swaron ...
its always a treat to read a chappy in which they are happy ...

so , like every other loyal to be hubby...
swayam kept fast for sharon ...aww...

i loved the way he helped her wearing sari and all..

swayam always loves to make her blush hard ..and we love that too...😳
cricket team banalo 🤣

as a whole a very happy wala update it was..!!.

swaron getting married will be awesome ..😳

waiting for the next update eagerly..!
update soon..!!

Lavanya

Edited by --lavanya-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I so loved the update ^_^
SwaRon getting married *-* wow
Her first karwa chauth :p that too before marriage and his too ^_^ how cleverly he convinced Rey to come to eat :v not letting them know he want to fast too but love of his life is smart to caught her life :3
I liked saree scene :p different from the usual extra blushing romance -_- Different is always better and I love your writing for that
How they play along,always teasing each other :v
But Sharon hit the wrong cord :3 Swayam was all set to embarrass her :3 which he did
Their love is cute and make you laugh on their romantic fights :')

Update soon *-*
Thanksss

Edited by sanchiswaron - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww... such a beautiful gift on Swaron anniversary😛. They are getting married... wow. Am so happy after reading this update😃. It was such a lovely update. Swaron moments were to sweet😳. Swayam kept the fast too. Oh man, he is too sweet. I loved how he told Sharon to go and eat something and he wouldn't tell anyone about it. It was super hilarious. So was their having children talk. 7-8/cricket team😆😆. Very well written.
Thanks for the pm. Once again love you guys a lot for this amazingly beautifully written update cum gift🤗
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