A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Heyyy Ani...and ur friendπŸ˜†...

Sorry just kidding...
Hellooo im keechu ...ani's di...
Ani intro is not for u...its for my new sis...Nabanita...πŸ˜ƒ
Nice name haa...
Hehehe...
Now about Update...
Its awesome girls...
And i know ani, im late...sorry for that...
Was damn busy...
So story is moving forward...Good...
And im loving it..
Interesting...
So he found out she is weird...
Thats good...
Am excited to know wht is the past of sharon...
Do unfold soon..
Me waiting...
Continue soon..
Sorry ani for the small cmt...
Di is damn busy...
Extremely sorry...
Will give long cmts after jan sorryyπŸ˜ƒ


With lots of love...
Keechu di...πŸ€—πŸ€—
Ps::One hug for u and other one for my new sis... love u both...πŸ˜ƒ



wow...m obliged to have a sweet di like u...thank u so much...we r glad u liked the update...will update soon di...till then take care...😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
omgg
this was amazing!!!!
heyyy, combined huh
okkk meee
intro first :p
am diyaaa, a crazy girl who is sooo lucky to be ani dis small sis!!!
hehee

this update was lovely!
each word penned down with freshness n perfection
pure beauty!
taareys wedding
the bond is ssweetly expressed
what's up with shar??
sooo quiet!! why did aunty call her??
the mystery is on n im excited!!!

am completely in love with this ff
loved loved it

updatessoon

plus would love to chat with u

diyu

... diyaswaronholic




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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: nautanki_PM

omgg

this was amazing!!!!
heyyy, combined huh
okkk meee
intro first :p
am diyaaa, a crazy girl who is sooo lucky to be ani dis small sis!!!
hehee

this update was lovely!
each word penned down with freshness n perfection
pure beauty!
taareys wedding
the bond is ssweetly expressed
what's up with shar??
sooo quiet!! why did aunty call her??
the mystery is on n im excited!!!

am completely in love with this ff
loved loved it

updatessoon

plus would love to chat with u

diyu

... diyaswaronholic




seriously we r so glad to get such awsome comments from.all of u...being a newbie and a person with absolutely no knowledge abt D3 tge way u guys hv welcomed me is really so overwhelming...we r v lucky to hv frnds lyk u...would love to chat with u ... muahhhπŸ˜›πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Mansi98

yee
me 1st
2 like n comment both
coming 2 d update
nice update
bt a very little 1
swaron r getting closer day by day
both were connected through taani bt both didnt know
he didnt knew dat sharon had 2 go 2 engagement
otherwise he would have nt let her work
swayam thinks sharon is weird
me also think like dat
m glad dat he is noticing her
hope he soon removes all her pain
n both come 2gthr
loved d whole update
update soon
n thanx fr d PM
Love
Mansi


so sweet of u mansi...thanks a lot...from both of us...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

nice update... keep it up... & plz update soon... 😊


thanks

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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Nice update...πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸΌ

update soon..


thanks

Word Count: 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

aswom updateeeww...

loved d metting of sw in weeding..

plzz show some taayam also... to make stry realistic.. not only swaron plzzz...

do update soon...


thanks... we will try our best!!!!!...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Heyyy Ani...and ur friendπŸ˜†...

Sorry just kidding...
Hellooo im keechu ...ani's di...
Ani intro is not for u...its for my new sis...Nabanita...πŸ˜ƒ
Nice name haa...
Hehehe...
Now about Update...
Its awesome girls...
And i know ani, im late...sorry for that...
Was damn busy...
So story is moving forward...Good...
And im loving it..
Interesting...
So he found out she is weird...
Thats good...
Am excited to know wht is the past of sharon...
Do unfold soon..
Me waiting...
Continue soon..
Sorry ani for the small cmt...
Di is damn busy...
Extremely sorry...
Will give long cmts after jan sorryyπŸ˜ƒ


With lots of love...
Keechu di...πŸ€—πŸ€—
Ps::One hug for u and other one for my new sis... love u both...πŸ˜ƒ




thanks keechu di!!!!!...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: nautanki_PM

omgg

this was amazing!!!!
heyyy, combined huh
okkk meee
intro first :p
am diyaaa, a crazy girl who is sooo lucky to be ani dis small sis!!!
hehee

this update was lovely!
each word penned down with freshness n perfection
pure beauty!
taareys wedding
the bond is ssweetly expressed
what's up with shar??
sooo quiet!! why did aunty call her??
the mystery is on n im excited!!!

am completely in love with this ff
loved loved it

updatessoon

plus would love to chat with u

diyu

... diyaswaronholic





haa ab mere liye to hai nahi cmnt...:(...
ne ways thanks my cutie pie..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 4


Swayam was working in the cabin when he saw Sharon working in her cubicle from his window...
For a change she had worn a blue churidar with minimum jewellery...

He promptly remembered that today was taani's mehendi ceremony.and Sharon had to go there with the mehendi since she was doing all the rituals of rey's sister...


He called her inside his cabin..sharon knocked the door and entered...


"kya aur kaam baki hai?" swayam asked her


"abhi tak who blue and red file baki hai...m working on the grey one...thailand wale company par..." she replied...


" tumhe mehemdi mei nehi jana?itni sajdhajke toh ayi ho..." swayam frowned...



"kaam khatam ho jaye toh chali jaungi.." she gritted her teeth in anger at his comment...



"tum chali jao..mera waise hi koi kaam nehi hai uss stupid se function mei...Mujhe files bhej do.." he said in return...


Sharon nodded and tuned to leave... Before leaving she smiled involuntarily ad swayam saw her smile through the glass of the door...


Swayam was confused for the first time...he was unaware of the reason that why helped sharon... he quickly removed his trail of thoughts...


Sharon was at swayam's house with taani for the mehendi ceremony...she applied mehendi on taani's hand and also on her hand since taani insisted...

They chatted merily ...it was almost night taani left to remove her mehendi... taani didn't let Sharon go because she wanted Sharon to dry and remover it in front of her...

Sharon didn't like mehendi at all...she twitched her nose at the smell and went to the lounge to drink water...


Sharon saw the glass on the table but couldn't pick it up because of the mehendi ...she kept on trying with the back of her palm but was frustrated within sometime as she couldn't do it...

Meanwhile swayam had reached home...he came inside and saw Sharon struggling with the glass... the glass was about to fall when swayam suddenly shouted...


"ek second...ruko..." he said as he walked towards Sharon and prompty Sharon moved back...


"peeche kyun jaa rahi ho???? Main tumhe kha nahi jauga...mai bulata hoon kisiko... Waise bhi mujhe ye gobar ki badboo pasan nahi hai..." then he shouted to call his mom...


"gobar nahi hai..mehendi hai...dono mein difference hai.." Sharon retorted


Swayam looked at her and said " lekin dikhne min to k jaisa hi hai..." sharon was about to continue wth the argument as swayam's mom came...

"kya hua???" she asked...

"rey ki behen ko paani do varna glass to degi..." Sharon frowned but didn't say anything as swayam's mom was standing...


"badmaash.." his mom smiled...

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The day after was sangeet and for a change Sharon had taken a day off... Sharon was confident that the larke walas will win because she knew no one from taani's family could dance...


Sharon gave a wonderful performance on the song jogi mahi... Watching her dance swayam was left open mouthed...


"tujhe pata nahi tha???sharon dance karti hai???" rey asked him seeing him gawking at her...


"haa matlab...nahi...matlab haa..." he stammered and then said.. " array haa..pata tha...biodata mein tha...par itna acha dance karti hai...I didn't expect..." he confessed...


"kamal hai yaar...lekin mooh to bandh kar macchar ghus jaenge..." rey smirked... Swayam glared at him and looked away...


Next was the performance of the dulhaan's team... Sharon gave a satisfied smile knowing that there was no chance for the dulhaan's team to win...


Suddenly the lights dimme and there was guy standing in the middle of the stage looking absolutely stunning...to her surprise he resembled his boss...


He danced like poetry in motion to the beats of mahi ve from kal ho na ho... Sharon was shocked beyond her wits...


"ye khadoos dance bhi karta hai..??" sharon was shocked...


"abbey tere boss hone se pehele se...wo ek awesum dancer hai aur use bhi acha dance teacher.." rey pocked his nose again...


Sharon still couldn't believe her eyes...


"wow kya dance karta hai yaar.." he said in her mind... The quickly told herself...
"are you crazy..dekha nahi kitna bad sense of humor hai unka...aur kitna laraku hai.."


The dulhaan s team won the competition because of swayam...


During the dinner Sharon went to swayam...


"congrats sir... I din't know ki aap itna accha dance karti ho..." She smiled...


"kaash mai ye tumhare lie kehe pata..." Sharon frowned and thought to herself...


"samajhta kya hai aapne aap ko??? Khadoos..."


Then swayam completed his sentence understanding what she might b thinking...


"kyunki I knew tum dance karti ho...tumhare bio mein tha aur rey ne bhi bataya.."


Both of them smiled at each other for the first time...


After dinner Sharon went to drink water and swayam was standing just behind her talking to a guest... Suddenly Sharon remembered something...after drinking she asked the waiter...


"dekho bhaiya glass to nahi toota na???"


Swayam immediately turned to look at her understanding that she meant the mehendi incident...


She continued to speak to the waiter making swayam hear her...


"dekho paani bhi piya...glass bhi toda... And for a change haaton mein mehendi bhi hai..."


The waiter was clueless about what she was saying and swayam smiled...


"chalo badla le liya..." Sharon thought to herself and left...



CREDIT FOR THE FAST UPDATE GOES TO NABANITA OF COURSE...SHE IS NOT LAZY UNLIKE ME...LEAVE UR LIKES N COMMENTS...

LOVE ANI N NABANITA
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