FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~ - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Awesome Update!!

This Priya female has me on the edge of my seat!

So she's somehow related to roshni's death and sikandar! And well, something else also cropped up in my head.. Will discuss it with u privately!! 😉😉😛

Aww.. Arjun!! So Arjun-Priya have a past, don't they?? (well u knw, the best part of your FF; the lead pair would still be called ARIYA!! 😳) Crazy, right!! I know.. 😆😆

Do continue soon.. And thanks for the PM!
Edited by mohabbatgirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
loved the story
continue soon-
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Let see how Arjun ll react by seeing someone from his past.
Really hooked up with UR story, waiting eagerly to know what happened that day.
Is that have anything to do with Arjun's wife???
awesome update ...Perfect one.
do cont. soon
Edited by -dia- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Superb...ur writing style is nothing less than that of a professional writer...
I guess, Riya isnt leaving ur head yet too...So in certain places of the story, "Riya" appears instead of "Priya"
well i am not complaining...sort of gives a feel that both are the same!!! lol

cont soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Another FF from you Lady S - Bring it on , I say !! 😃😃

@ CS - Very intriguing, I am looking forward to the FF.. Rathore' past will be interesting as well.. and will add a another dimension to the story..

@ Part 1 - Loved it, I am hooked already.. wondering about how you plan to take this ahead..

@ Part duex - Cliffhanger.. all I want to say is please update soon, I am looking forward to Arjun - Priya interaction..

Looking forward to the next installment.. gimme more ...😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
wow ur story line is completely different
eagerly waiting to know y arjun hates priya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Awesome update! I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
You have got the story moving Shilpa...loving it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Hey ...
That was great ...
Loved it ...
Very interesting ...
Waiting to read more ...
Cont. soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
"Why does it have to come at all Sameer? Let him have his illusions and take revenge for his wife so he could move on with his life." Riya shouted. @bold:: dear is Rhea, seemingly in Priya's place, a mere mistake or you are hinting something??? Please rectify.
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