FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~ - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -dia-

First, Congrats for new story.

Fresh concept in AF, interesting CS..love it
Great start for the story.
waiting eagerly to know how Arjun ll react when he come face off with his past.



Thank you so much, I wanted to do something different and since we don't know much of what actually happened in the past I am giving my own twist to it, glad you liked it.

Initially it will be knee jerk reaction but his sharp mind won't take long to start questioning things.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

grt start continue soon😳



Thank you so much, will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks so much Radhika, glad you liked it. Will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: shah10

Awesome update
Love it



Thank you so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: funkylicious

Shilpa this is awesome that Cs and first chapter is great...

I absolutely love the title😳just can't wait to read more

pls add me to ur buddy list 😉



Thanks so much Shru, glad you like the concept.

Yeah the title says it all, let's see how he comes to terms with it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: prava55663

nice..waiting for next part..

do pm me



Thank you so much, glad you liked it. Will update soon. Added you to the PM list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: haruhi26

Wonderful start, the cs were perfect and our past never leaves us, one day or the other it comes back to haunt us, n loved that with Arjun you have also thought about rathore
N Priya has a scar on her face, n it's related to everyone's past
Plus Arjun hates her, I really wanna know more about the reasons
Loved it dear, please update as soon as you can



Thank you so much Tina.

Yes it is all connected to Roshni's death and at the time the they were all very close friends. Rathore needs someone to soften him up a bit more.

Arjun has misconceptions regarding Priya, who once was a very close friend, but there are things that he was told had made him misunderstand her.

Will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

Heyy... Its so mysterious n catchy..! Gr8 plot..! Priya n Rhea are the same, I feel...!
Hope Priya's first day goes well...!
Loved how u descripted the ETF people's plight after Rhea's demise...
Thanks for the PM... Update soon.
Keep writing n Take care...!



Thank you so much.

Priya and Riya are similar in some ways but they are not the same. There is reason why Arjun was taken with Riya and why she got so close to him. Things will fall into place as the story progresses.

Will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much. will update soon.
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Originally posted by: grad2011

very nice update soon



Thanks so much.
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