Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Arjun ko Pata tha Riya ne shut bola..??
Ayesha is still guilty... that's 😔
I like how u showed the human side of cops.. How even they get emo affected when close ones are injured
Altaf is going say everything without even seeing inside an interrogation room....he will see Riyu's face and bolta jayega sab🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Awesome update
All the emotions were so well portrayed, ayesha's guilt, shree consoling her, riya's still being so angry at sikander and wanting to kill him, liza's still being afraid of arjun,etc.
Hope this Sikander gets caught soon before he harms anyone else.
Atlast arjun's kya hua meri riya ko? was so hilarious.
The last line had me ROTFLMAO.
It was so refreshing to see Riya turning all Alpha-Female where Arjun was concerned.
Her "Don't underestimate the ability of a woman" couldn't have a better proof than this.
I've read last few parts in a go and since I'm so short on time. I'll just say one thing. YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT !
It was hilarious to see two strong officers fear her the way they did. Ayesha, the lady dabang lost her voice for once and Choti the Muscle lost his balance once he saw the Goddess Avatar of Riya.
Also the line where Riya's few words "You maybe the one who does the encounters but I'm the one who cover it up" said so much.
She's smart and conniving when need be and she can absolutely turn ruthless when one of her's threatened. And this was Arjun, I wouldn't expect anything less from her.
I'm so excited to know how Arjun will bring back his meek yet innocent Riya back. But on another note, Sikandar isn't as easy to reach as it seems. It would be dramatic If a gang war really broke out. Reminds me of a story I read long ago. It was about a gang infested, politically muddled, corrupted place called Kasauli and how one man set out to clean that up by working in the shadows. Where once he lost his innocence forever.
Anyways. Waiting Eagerly for next Wednesday.
Keep Writing.
Update soon and thanks for the PM.
Ps. I found out you're writing another story. I'll read it the minute I get time because life decided to kick me around for a while and I'm just riding the waves at this point. Pray for me please.
This one actually has quite a few parts.
CID wala aadha ho gaya hai. i dont have climax yet toh aadhe se aage kaise badhu ye nahi pata
Originally posted by: naaheean
Great....Arjun ko pehle hi pata chal gaya tha ki Riya ne jhut bola commissioner ke samne aur issiliye kuch nahi bola uss wakt, par mujhe ye bhi lagta hai ki Riya ne actual me Altaf ke upar kaise bhadra kali banke torture kiya uss wakt password janne ke liye, isska andaza abhi tak nahi laga hai Arjun ko.
Ayesha still being in guilt, Riya ke badle huye avataar, Liza ki pareshani ki Riya ko suspend hone se bachane ke liye kaise worse than 3rd degree tortures ke nishanion ka coverup kiya jaye, Altaf ko discharge & interrogate karne ke liye court permit na milna....sabkuch milake overall situation filhal ETF team ke liye kafi unfavourable hai. But, asha ki baat ye hai ki, Sik bhi isswakt bohot hi bhadka hua hoga kyunki jaise usne plan kiya tha ek teer se do nishaniyan lagane ki, reality mein waisa na hone se situation usske favour mein bhi nahi gaya issliye gusse aur jaldbazi mein koi na koi galti zaroor kar sakta hai aur shayed issi baat ka faida ETF ko uthana padega koi na koi smart move plan karke.
Loved the update... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Tnx for the pm...keep writing... ✍️✍️✍️
yea Arjun knows but he doesn't really know, if you know what I mean
Originally posted by: Shrutu10
Arjun ko Pata tha Riya ne shut bola..??
Ayesha is still guilty... that's 😔
Ha use pata hai
trying for limit
Originally posted by: RiyaA123
The last line had me ROTFLMAO.
It was so refreshing to see Riya turning all Alpha-Female where Arjun was concerned.
Her "Don't underestimate the ability of a woman" couldn't have a better proof than this.
I've read last few parts in a go and since I'm so short on time. I'll just say one thing. YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT !
It was hilarious to see two strong officers fear her the way they did. Ayesha, the lady dabang lost her voice for once and Choti the Muscle lost his balance once he saw the Goddess Avatar of Riya.
Also the line where Riya's few words "You maybe the one who does the encounters but I'm the one who cover it up" said so much.
She's smart and conniving when need be and she can absolutely turn ruthless when one of her's threatened. And this was Arjun, I wouldn't expect anything less from her.
I'm so excited to know how Arjun will bring back his meek yet innocent Riya back. But on another note, Sikandar isn't as easy to reach as it seems. It would be dramatic If a gang war really broke out. Reminds me of a story I read long ago. It was about a gang infested, politically muddled, corrupted place called Kasauli and how one man set out to clean that up by working in the shadows. Where once he lost his innocence forever.
Anyways. Waiting Eagerly for next Wednesday.
Keep Writing.
Update soon and thanks for the PM.
Ps. I found out you're writing another story. I'll read it the minute I get time because life decided to kick me around for a while and I'm just riding the waves at this point. Pray for me please.
why does that vaguely remind me of a web series i might have binged during lockdown?
oh take care
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