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Index
Part 2 : Pg 3
Part 3 : Pg 5
Part 4 : Pg 8
Post Credits : Pg 12
Yeh log cops kaise bane? Ek se badhkar ek namune
Loved it dear Sharvi π€©
Awesome start π
A new development π Arjun reciprocating a wishes of Riya was amazing .. khadoos je sudhar rahe hai π
Well both got trapped in a lift but juniors are thinking Arjun or Riya Shanti varta kar rahe honge π€£ ya record room main honge
Ariya some how manage to get oxygen by removing a fan but goli chalane par bhi kisi ne nahi suna subko laga patake hai π
Well hopefully they will safely come out of the lift
Thanks for the PM βΊοΈ
Keep writing βοΈ
Ohhh π this seems interesting
Plz bring my poor ariya out of that lift
Intersting......π€π€π€ππ Waiting for more... Update next part soon please. ...
Loved it superb thnx for pm cont soon
Interesting
Goli ki awaaz inhe patake lag rhe hain Sakshi Liza told them lift kharab hai tab bhi batti nhi jali Ariya lift me honge
Loved changes in Arjun Riya having hard time around him
Cont sooon.. Wednesday tak de do
I would love for it to change to FF too. This new trope is so light and cute.
Arjun has softened after Zora and now there's more than a spark. I felt literal butterflies.
I loved how Arjun was all calm, collected and logical one minute and lost all sense of brain cells the minute Riya admitted to being suffocated.
The subtle romance was wholesome. I would kill for Arjun's POV too. It's not everyday he picks her up. Shreeza are like Old flames that keep up sparking.
It was funny how Chotu Liza and Sakshi were more scared of Arjun than Rathore. Also these fools couldn't piece up together the fact that someone could've been stuck in the life. That's 101 for disaster management. It was also cute when choree assumed Ariya might be stealing some tender moments together. Which they definitely are. π€
Let's see if Arjun gets to shoot more. At this point he's just signing himself up for a lengthy report on how he used his bullets to find extra oxygen for his lady love.
THANKS A BUNCH FOR PM. I'm always ready for more from you. If you decide to make this ss I'll be your best fan β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ»π» keep writing .
Ps. Apologies for long Comments.β€οΈ
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