Originally posted by: RainOfDew
Seeing ur PM i first checked aaj Monday hi hai na
is week ek aur de dena updt.. next Wednesday tak i cant wait
Awesome updt
Acha sunaya uss Roshni ko nd good thing is Riya saw all of it
Loved the trio scene
Cont soon
isiliye likha na maine SURPRISE
ha ha aaj bhi milega warna whats the point?
Originally posted by: naaheean
Ha ha, tumhare liye toh zaroori ho ga hi na, akhir hume shock dene ke baad after effects mein hamari comments padh ne ke zariye tumhe achha entertainment mil jo jaata hai.
P.S. - Waise agar har baar uss tarah ki shocking update ke baad agar aaj ki tarah ki surprising second update mil jayega toh, yeh shock hum log shaukh se bardasht kar lenge.
har baar hoga toh surprise kaise hoga?
Haa, ye bhi sahi hai. Thik Hai, Chalo, har baar har shocking chapters ke liye na sahi, par future mein tumhari aane wali har ek new story mein, at least ek ya do toh aise bohot zyada nail biting wala shocking chapters honge hi, for sure, jo ki tumhari stories ki USP hoti hai. Toh unn ek ya do chapters mein se kisi ek chapters ke liye iss tarah ki suprise update deti rehna (off course, choice hamesha tumhari hi rahegi ki kis chapter ka nail biting cliffhanger ka surprise update tum dena chahogi ya phir kisi ek ki bhi dena nahi chahogi, main toh bas request kar sakti hoon. )
Aur ha, surprise toh pehle se batayi nahi jati na, toh jab tak tum hume upcoming kisi stories ke kisi shocking chapter ka bina bataye koi aise surprise update deti nahi, tab tak hume pata kaise hoga ki konse chapter ka surprise update hume milne wala hai? Toh surprise material intact hi rahegi na?
P.S. - Waise maine yaha sabke samne tumse declaration dilwane ke liye thodi na waise kaha ki har bar suprize update dogi toh woh shock easily bardasht kar lenge tumhare readers, yeh toh bas meri thought hai.
Very interesting update dear 😁 Sharvi
Just loved it 🤗
Well I am really happy to see that Arjun has started depending emotionally on Riya ... Thou he had a bad mood but he knew how to control things & be positive ... He made things lighter for Riya too assuring her to be with her
The bantering tickling & usual flirting of Arjun has brought a huge change but still he haven't confessed his feelings to her but isn't this evident to her that's why she trust him
Loo Rosh ke akal ab bhi thikane pe nahi aayi she is like a stubborn kid who wants anything she desires ... Sam is more intelligent & at least he knows where to draw a line on his desires ... I loved how Sam gave Rosh a reality check on her life & all the possibilities ... Good 👍
Well Riya is back to the field & now she is happy involving herself in work
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM ☺️
Keep writing ✍️
The chapter was Awesome ☺️☺️
Arjun ne kya muhtod jawab diya hai Roshini ko wahh 🤭🤭 Bichare ETF wale humesha yeh Roshini kuch karti hai aur gussa inn par nikal deta hai Arjun
Liked the way Arjun have become comfortable with Riya ❤️❤️🌹
______________________________________________
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/5311577/riyuu-creations
I can't just describe this chapter in words 😃😃
From Arjun comforting Riya to cheering her up their progress is just heart melting. 🫠🫠 Riya sharing her childhood memories is so emotional yet heartwarming. 😚😚
Though I hate Sameer in this story but the way he gave Rosh a reality check is just awesome. 😋😋
Wow Riya back in action just can't wait for Ariya's proposal 🎉🎉
_______________________________________________
My index:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/5311577/riyuu-creations
Superb part
Specially the climax line of Riya
Yahan lash hai aap smile kyun kar rahe ho 
Arreee wah wah wah!!! Kya baat hai, yaar, aaj itni jaldi update? Aur woh bhi this much long??? Lagta hai, kafi lambe wakt ke baad aaj tumhe thoda fursat mili hai ya phir aaj bohot khush ho tum.
Coming to the update.... It's stunning...awesome...mind-blowing...very very lovely & delightful...👌👌👌👌❤️❤️❤️❤️👏👏👏👏.
Haayeee!!!! Ariya....😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰
They are just love....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
11 saal baad bhi inn ke liye hamara pyar waise ka waisa hi hai...aur agey bhi hamesha aise hi bana rahe.
And, an extra thank you, woh Marathi dialogues ka translation dene ki suggestion yaad rakhne ke liye, Arjun imitating his parents' behaviour towards his choice of girl for marriage...that was sooo hilarious. Aur, uske baad uska Riya ko Maharani & Rani kehke tease karna...🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Wow...Riya got the green signal of rejoining along with a promotion & became ACP...yeh toh bohot badi khushi ki news hai. Ab toh Riya ke paas officially ETF ki second-in-command ban jane ki chances bhi hai.
Waise, Arjun month ka middle hone ka wait kyun karne wala hai, Riya ko propose karne ke liye? Koi aur special occasion bhi hai kya ussi wakt - like, birthday of any one between Ariya, their first meeting day, marriage anniversary ya phir koi aur occasion???
And, about Roshni - joh apni hi khodi hui gaddhe mein khud hi muh ke bal giri ho, uss ke liye ab aur kya hi kehna, sivaye isske ke - Bechari, dumbass & poor girl!!!! Na rahi ghar ki, na hi ghat ki. Phir bhi akad abhi tak gayi nahi.
Ufff...Sameer ke shrewd mind wakil wale dialogues!!! Kya sunaya hai Roshni ko!!! Ekdum kadak....mujhe uske woh saare dialogues jo usne Roshni ko sunaye, bohot pasand aaya. Although he himself is a filthy & hateable person, he has gotten a really shrewd mind, using which he can easily identify who is real & honest, who is dumb & easily usable, who is fake & manipulative and can manipulate each & every kind of people & situation according to his need & their nature.
But, what I loved the most in those dialogues is, how easily Sameer acknowledged that he already has forgotten Riya after getting beaten by Arjun in the past & if anything filthy still remained inside him for Riya that too has vanished completely after seeing Nitin getting beaten by Riya and The Arjun being the Harishchandra kind of person will never ever divorce Riya & he now despises Roshni from the core of his heart.....wala dialogue.
Inn sab mein ek baat toh 100% prove ho gayi hai ki, biological mother hotey huye bhi Roshni ke characteristical nature ke wajah se woh Ragini ke maa kehlane ke layek toh hargiz nahi hai par ab ek aur curiosity bhi jagi hai mere mann mein Sameer aur Ragini ke bich ki rishtey ko leke aur woh yeh hai ki kya sach mein Sameer bhi Ragini ke liye ek ideal father hai? Uss chhoti si jhalak of Sameer, the father of Ragini padhne ke baad ab toh mujhe Sameer & Ragini ke relationship dynamics in detail padhne ka bhi bohot mann ho raha hai.
Chalo apna comment aur lamba nahi karti main ab, warna bore ho jaogi tum bhi aur baki ke readers bhi. Tnx for the pm & this update. Next Wednesday tak ka intezaar ab khushi se rahegi. Keep writing... ✍️✍️✍️
comment:
p_commentcount