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Posted: 2 years ago

CHAPTER 3

PreCap -

This happens after 3 hrs after the last scene which is CID knowing about Arjun being the SUPERCOP.

A knock on the door disturbed Arjun. He permits the person to come it. Rajat who comes in says "Umm..ACP sir is calling for case discussion."


He nods and both of them go towards the common space where the screen and boards are set up to discuss the case (For every case)


Pradyuman who nods at them as they come says "Kya lagta hai case kay bhare mai?"


CID - Headquarters, Mumbai:

There was silence for a few seconds before they could hear Arjun's voice saying- "yeh khoon paas ke godaam mein ho illegal business and smuggling ki bhajah se huee hai."

To which Abhijeet says "Yeh aap ithne sure hoker kaise keh sakte hai?"

To which Sachin added "ha, humne abhi tho victim ki family ko bhi interrogate nahi kiya. Sir aap ithne jaldi aise conclusions pe nahi a sakte." It may have sounded more rude and disrespectful than he wanted it too. But his jealous self couldn't help himself.

Freddy thought- Ise apne jaan pyaari nahi hai kya.Jaker sher kay mu mein haat lag raha hai"

Pradyuman glared at Sachin for the disrespect he is showing towards his senior. Arjun observed it too but left it away.

Instead, he turned towards Abhijeet and said "bataoonga.." and then turned towards Riya and nodded at her to continue. Everyone also turned towards Riya questioningly.

They have never seen Riya as a complete field agent she was just a research specialist to them.That also, they asked her when and where they needed the information.

(This was partly cuz of her health too so they introduced her to the team as a research specialist only)

Riya then said that "Sir maine local police kai sath un gowdowns per raid pai gayi. Waha bahot sara drugs aur illegal weapons mile. Jaise humne Kamal (The dead guys brother who doesnt live with them) ki bare mai batha ki thi hume batha chala ki wo us godown ki aspass locate ki gayi thi. Aur jaise he hame batha chala humne godown par raid ki."

Everyone was shocked form this revelation and were wondering that did all this happen in this much time where they were still thinking the possible motives of the murder.

Then Arjun notices a small bruise on Riya's arm which was not that noticible generally but couldnt escape from Arjuns eyes.

I must have gone with her. Now she got hurt?! What if there are more injuries that she is hiding. This girl never takes care of herself!!

Then Arjun turned towards the team and says "As the case is solved I guess we are done for today." He nods towards Pradyuman,Abhijeet and Daya.

Takes Riyas hand and leaves the office through the main door.

Just as Riya saw Arjun coming towards her she thought

God!! He saw it??? Bapa Ji mujhe bacha lena mere iss akadu se!!!!!!!!!

The rest of them were staring at the door thorogh which Arjun and Riya left.All of them shocked and making there own assumptions.

After a minute of terrifying silence Pardyuman says "Kya dekh rahe ho? Sab apne kaam pe lag jao."

In the parking lot-

Arjun opens the passenger door of the car and make Riys sit. He then examines riya brusie. He then glares at her for being careless and asks"Kahi aur lagi?"

To which she answers with the most innocent and honest expression saying "Nahi. Sacchi! Aur yeh bhi chota sa hai..Dard bhi nahi hai."

Yeh har bhar aise shakal banaye tho mai datunga bhi kaise?!

He then hugs her close and says "Shayad tumhai nahi par mujhe hogi thumhai chot lagne say.Kitne bhar kehta hu ki dhyan rakna" while taking her hand and pecking it.

Riya blushes at his gesture and and hides her face in his chest to which Arjun chuckles.Piya then raises her head and says "Ab pehle hi acche the ab tho besharam ho gaye hai." pouting.

To which arjun kisses her forehead in the most delicate way and says"Agar tum se nahi to besharmi kis se karu?? "

In reply Riya just swats him playfully.

After holding her close for a minute more. Arjun adjusts her seat and moves towarrds the drivers seat and they leave the parking lot.


ETF PARKING LOT-

We can see the ETF coming out of the lift. Ready to come home after a long day of work. well work for others except Sakshi who was only complaining on how could Arjun not say her about his transfer.This was really getting to Sameer,Shree and Chotu.They are very thankful that the day is over and they cam escape her rantings. While the girls are more inclined to sympathize with her. Understanding her grief of being ignored by the man she loved.(As if LOL!)


Just as they were about to leave a car enters the premises. At a glance they can tell its Arjuns. Sakshi was soo happy that she was in the clouds. She thinks that her prayers are answered and Arjuns transfer is cancelled. Just as she was about to go to the car. Arjun and Riya get down the car...




WELL I TRIED TO WRITE!.

I WAS HAVING A MAJOR WRITERS BLOCK AND I WISH THIS UPDATE BREAKS IT.

I AM NOT SETTELED WITH COLLEGE AND ALL SO I GARUNTEE FREQUENT UPDATES.

I AM SO SORRY FOR TAKING SO MUCH TIME.




PLZ TELL ME WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!

ANY IMPROVEMENTS I CAN MAKE??







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Posted: 2 years ago

Hey I just updated the story! Hope you enjoy the update

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Posted: 2 years ago

Arjun ne case solve kar diya riya ki bhi efforts thi saath mein sachin ki jealousy uff arjun ne ignore kar diya warna sachin ki to khair nahi thi arjun ka riya ke liye pyar wow 😍 sakshi so irritating hope jald woh arjun ka sochna chod de awesome update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Arjun ne case solve kar diya riya ki bhi efforts thi saath mein sachin ki jealousy uff arjun ne ignore kar diya warna sachin ki to khair nahi thi arjun ka riya ke liye pyar wow 😍 sakshi so irritating hope jald woh arjun ka sochna chod de awesome update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

I am glad you like the update!

I will update as soon as possible

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Posted: 2 years ago

Awesome loved it update soon thnx for pm

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Posted: 2 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

So the big bang khulasa that ariya are together in a relationship will come out ?

Waiting for reactions from etf team

No matter what his personal feelings he let it colour his work . I guess Sachin warrants a warning for disrespect of senior. Forces are usually strict about such things

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Posted: 2 years ago

Wow nice update.... Love it. Ye sachin jobs Chahta h na .... Nahi because harkate dekhakar lagata h Arjun jaldi hi ... You know...🤣 Update very fast waiting

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