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POST 22:
soon everyone went silent again.
riya:' jab kannika ko pata chala hoga ki uske maa use maarna chaahatee the, use kitna dukh hota?kyu kar te hai ase?'
sameer:'hoga riya kyonki jab hume pata chalta hai ki hamare apno ne hame maarne vaale hain woh bohot dukh deta hai.'
arjun(looking lost):'yeh aur bhee behatar hai riya kyonki jab hamaare apno ne hamen us samay chood de jab hamen unki sabse sada jaroot ho , to who use maar daalate hain.'
although sameer and riya knew he spoke these words in alost state but the intensity with which these words came made them release how much he is hurt.
riya although never knew what happened but came to know he was much deeply hurt by his loved once, keep her hand in a smoothing way in his shoulders. right now, arjun who need an emotional support finds his solace in riya. he just keep his head in her shoulders and she was combing his hairs in a smoothing way.
sameer although was happy that his friend finds his solace in riya was also very deeply hurt to know that his action in past had a very deep impression in his life. he is now very guilty of it.
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guys please let me know about this hindi wording? are u guys comfortable in hindi or i should go back to english?
Mixing of Hindi and english is..gd..purely hindi is quite difficult sometimes to understand..
Overall too gd chapters..πβΊοΈπ..awsome conversation between dem.... overall tht emotions n innocent and sensitive questions and dere answers with intensity is too gd..
Riya so much emotional samjun with her Sam happy for arjun fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm
mujhe dono mein si kisi language mein koi problem nahi per tum apna comfort dekh lo kisme hai aur oosi language ko use karoOriginally posted by: Lekha_Acharya
guys please let me know about this hindi wording? are u guys comfortable in hindi or i should go back to english?
oh my god! I love that scene!!!!
Arjun with his head on her shoulder and Riya comforting him with Sameer as audience.... ugh! I would pay to watch this on the serial
Superb
This type of writing is okay with me
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
Originally posted by: Anchal91
Mixing of Hindi and english is..gd..purely hindi is quite difficult sometimes to understand..
Overall too gd chapters..πβΊοΈπ..awsome conversation between dem.... overall tht emotions n innocent and sensitive questions and dere answers with intensity is too gd..
Thank you for your valuable feedback. even i'm comfortable with mixing of hindi and english.
Superb
This type of writing is okay with me
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
surely I would try to. right now i'll be mixing with english and hindi . if possible will work on to give full on hindi updates.
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