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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: etfr


Sorry dear, my mother fell sick so I couldn't complete the chapter that day and when I tried to update the next day my device had some issue so couldn't upload it. Finally here is an update.

Sorry again.

Don't be sorry dear. Taking care of their own mothers must be every children’s first & foremost duty as well as priority. I hope your mother is quite well now & I'll pray to the Almighty for her speedy recovery. And, technical glitch, wo toh hotey rehta hai kabhi na kabhi hum sabhi ke saath hi, that's not any big issue, so, it's okay.


By the way, the chapter was very emotional. I loved it.....❤️❤️❤️. Finally, Arjun could fight this critical situation successfully & survived for Riya & their unborn child. Everyone felt some relief to know that. Now, they have become all the more alert to protect Arjun & his family from the further attacks of the unknown assassin as well as to catch the real culprit as soon as possible. ETF Chief & The team did a great job by spreading the false news of Arjun's death so that they can trap that culprit. I think, the old couple who came to the morgue to see Arjun would be his parents. It would be really interesting to read how they are going to react on knowing about Arjun's miraculous survival in this attack as well as the news of Arjun's married life with Riya & the arrival of Ariya's child, their grand-child.


Will be waiting eagerly to read more. Thanks for the tag. Please do continue as early as possible from next time, since it’s one of my favourite stories on Ariya .

Edited by naaheean - 9 months ago
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Posted: 9 months ago

Interesting loved it thnx for pm cont soon

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Posted: 9 months ago

Riya ke father ke samjhane per riya calm Hui doctor ne bataya arjun safe hai woh bhi riya ke presence ki wajah se woh respond kiya attack karne walo ko bahar nikalne ke liye sameer fake news spread Kara deta hai ki arjun ki death ho gai jo arjun ko dead samjhkar milne aaye hai kahi arjun ke parents to nahi fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 months ago

Awesome update

So Arjun is safe and so is Riya

Lol finally daant padi madam ko

Sameer came up with a good plan to deceive the villains

Going ahead for a showdown I guess?

And aha his parents have arrived, this will be fun

Cont soon

Edited by bloomie - 9 months ago
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Posted: 9 months ago

Update please 🥺

We all will be waiting 🙏

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: Gold.Abrol

Wonderful update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Well thankfully Riya came back to her senses & finally she was awake & safe but she could feel uneasiness as Arjun wasn't there

Arjun is really in a crucial condition & Doctor doesn't have any hopes saying that they should pray to get Arjun back to senses

Riya being adamant wasn't told the truth of Arjun condition so she came to check on him hopefully now Arjun gets back to life soon

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️


Glad you like it Di.

Thanks alot for your constant support, love and meaningful feedback. Thankyou for waiting for me.

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: naaheean

Huh......it was very much breath-taking and heart-wrenching portrayal of Riya's pain & Arjun's pathetic condition and of how each of the ETF members was trying to control their own emotion for Arjun-Riya-Ariya's baby as well as their own emotional break-down for this unexpected situation just by thinking about how they are going to handle Riya in this crucial situation if they themselves are not enough strong. Even I didn't realize, when tears filled up in my eyes automatically while reading this chapter & were ready to spill. But, thankfully, Arjun got his sense back just for Riya & his baby. And, that momemt, I felt like, maybe Arjun's senses were still over-working like they always do in solving any tough case; it was just that, he was eagerly waiting to hear Riya's voice just to be assured from her voice only about both Riya & his baby's well-being, if otherwise, he would have chosen to die then & there only, losing all his hope for living life. A Special Mention to the portrayal of Ayesha here in this chapter...too good....👏👏👏. Just loved the chapter very much...❤️❤️❤️👌👌👌👍👍👍

Tnx for pm. Keep writing like this.

Glad you like it dear.

Ha! I love it when reader get to feel the same way I felt while writing. I am glad that I could portray Ayesha character more meaningfully than I ever did. Thanks for always waiting for my updates and for your lovely feedbacks.

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Shreya ke saath interrogation mein pata chalta hai koi to hai arjun ke peeche finally riya aur baby safe hai hope arjun bhi jald thik ho jaye fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm


Glad you like it.

Thanks for being a constant reader and always giving feedbacks.

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

Lovely update and quite the long one too, I enjoyed it

Riya regains consciousness and at the same tie everyone is worried about Arjun and not revealing anything to Riya

But finally, she is able to go meet him.

And looks like Arjun is going regain his consciousness too

cont sooon

Glad you like it and happy to write a long enjoyable update. Thanks for guiding me through your stories and personally too. Also thanks for your constant lovely feedbacks.

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: Nupurjaishwal

Good to see you back dear nice chapter

Thanks for waiting for me. Will surely not disappoint you all. Glad you like the update.

Keep reading and commenting.

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