NeiVika SS-Sun Jaa Dil ki daastaan.... - Page 2

Now .this is open for all to enjoy & comment..

It is an experiment & as Saumya said, I will continue it whenever I feel like.

Go to previous page & read from beginning..

This was amazing , writers should read this and take notes

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

This was amazing , writers should read this and take notes

You liiked Bhidur part?

Ok so born writers are back in business , I am happy to get this beautiful story but I am more happy for you that you are showing a hidden talent of yours ✨

Yeah you fulfilled Pete's Bhidur dream

Neil used to beat Dj in singing so they were must be friends + Dj is not full black character so you kind off fulfilled my wish too ❤️

You also gave kartik a good ending , which he deserves

Writers take some notes for realllll

Lots and lots of love for this amazing story 🤗❤️

It's beautifully written liked yuvika's confusion and her realisation of feelings

Loved all the characters

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

What about that Tamil song..are the lyrics & translation fine?

You liiked Bhidur part?

The lyrics and the translation were fine , reminded me of the scene from the old Dharmendra move where he sang "ya dil ki suno duniya walo"

Thank you for giving me the Bhidur apology

Originally posted by: Spandan24

Ok so born writers are back in business , I am happy to get this beautiful story but I am more happy for you that you are showing a hidden talent of yours ✨

Yeah you fulfilled Pete's Bhidur dream

Neil used to beat Dj in singing so they were must be friends + Dj is not full black character so you kind off fulfilled my wish too ❤️

You also gave kartik a good ending , which he deserves

Writers take some notes for realllll

Lots and lots of love for this amazing story 🤗❤️

I am glad that you liked it...it was an experiment & my tribute to Movies...

I know you feel nothing but happiness for me...& Thank you for that....

Originally posted by: Simple_self

It's beautifully written liked yuvika's confusion and her realisation of feelings

Loved all the characters

Glad that you took time to read this & commented. Thank you for that...

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

The lyrics and the translation were fine , reminded me of the scene from the old Dharmendra move where he sang "ya dil ki suno duniya walo"

Thank you for giving me the Bhidur apology

That's the idea, to give you Bhidur apology in whatever way possible...

Hope that it somewhere reached your expectation.

Asmi, take my love

Kitni acche se likha tumne NeiVika aur Bhidur ko

Mujhe sabse zyada accha laga woh jacket wali baat Bhumi se aaya

Pata nahi show mein kab dikhayenge

Maine Part 3 update kar diya hai SS pe padh lena