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Posted: 8 months ago
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All the parts are Chef's kiss!!! They just slap... Hope u r continuing... smiley27

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Shit!!! I missed these beautiful parts of this beautiful story smiley26

Every single part was soo beautiful

Plus the way you portrayed audiences voice infront of Yuvika in your story is really very beautiful smiley27

This story is very interesting and exciting, waiting for the update

Take lots of love born writer smiley31

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 6


Next Day


Yuvika & Neil are sitting beside to each other on couch but Neil maintained distance between them. "Ms. Multani, papers ready hai. Aap ek baar chahe toh crosscheck kar sakte hai", says Neil while rearranging papers in file. After last night conversation with Rose, Yuvika starts getting melt towards Neil. Like she just can't pretend anymore infront of him. Neil feels a gaze towards him & looks up to see Yukti Multani staring at him intensely. Neil feels giddy type feelings hence clears his throat & Yuvika's trance gets break.





"Ms. Multani.....papers", says Neil while handing out papers to her. Yuvika smiles at him & says "I trust you, Neil more than anyone. Isiliye main papers bhi check nahi karungi". Neil's eyes gets widen & says "Kya kaha apne?!". Neil felt this stranger woman tried to flirt with him. His question makes Yuvika conscious about her words. "I mean I trust Digvijay aur Digvijay ne hire kiya tumhe so....", says Yuvika confidently. Neil feels relieved & gives her a curt nod. "I understand", says Neil. Yuvika feels a pinch of sadness as Neil doesn't talk to her informally. She knows that she's just a stranger to him but still she wants to see informal, unfiltered & soft spoken Neil which missed in this one year. Yuvika was about to say something but Rose comes there hurriedly.





"Thank you Neil. Hum yeh meeting baad main continue kar sakte hai", says Yuvika. "Have a nice day, Ms.Multani", saying this Neil goes from there. Yuvika gestures Rose to continue. Rose locks the door of room & says "Ma'am....woh Sir phir se aapne bete ko dhundhna shuru kiya aur unka kehna hai ke unka beta isi Mahajan ke property ke aas paas rehta hai. Unhone flight ke ticket book kiya hai. 3 din baad India aa rahe hai". Yuvika gets tensed & says "Agar woh yaha aayenge toh mujhe yeh Mahajan Mansion chod ke Multani Villa main rehna hoga kyunki duniya ke liye main Yukti Multani hun. Toh phir mera family aur Neil ka kya hoga?!". "Ma'am, humare paas abhi bhi 3 din ka waqt hai. Tab taak agar koi clue mile toh humare plan aage badh sakta hai", reassures Rose.





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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 7



"Mujhse tum milna chahti thi?!", says Neil while sitting opposite of Isha in Cafe. Isha nods at him. "Neil main baas tumhe yeh kehna chahti hun ke mere feelings exactly kya hai yeh mujhe khud bhi samaj main nahi aa raha hai lekin itna samaj chuki hun ke main tumhare liye woh choti behen hun jo tumhe kabhi nahi mila", says Isha. Neil smiles at her. "Mujhe accha laaga ke at least tum mere feelings ko samaj sakte ho. Aur rahi baat tumhare khudke feelings ke toh main sirf itna kahunga ke khudko thoda time do. Bhumi aunty aur Arjun.....dono ko tumhari zarurat hai aur tumhe inn dono ke. Tum ek peaceful life chahte ho woh tabhi possible hoga jab tum log yaha se dur jaa paoge", says Neil.





"Tum toh aise bol rahe ho jaise ke bohot asaan hai iss Mahajan ke jail se chutna", says Isha sarcastically. "Lekin tumne toh try bhi nahi kiya", replies Neil making Isha dumbfounded. "Inn 1 saal main tumne khudko sambhala. Jab thoda samay mila uss samay pe Arjun se jaghda karti thi tum......main yeh nahi keh raha hun ke Arjun ne accha kam kiya shares transfer karke...... lekin woh jo bewakoofi kiya tum ussi bewakoofi ko daura rahe ho DJ ke khilaf saboot na dhundh kar. Zaruri nahi hai ke saboot milne ke baad tum directly DJ se panga logi......hum sab milkar dimaag lagake indirectly usko expose kar sakte the", says Neil.






"Meri Yuvika di ko aab taak insaaf mil jaata agar hum aisa karte toh...lekin main-",Isha gets cut off by Neil saying "Hum yeh sab abhi bhi kar sakte hai. Baas hume ek plan ke zarurat hai. Aaj sham ko free ho?", says Neil. Isha nods at him in assertive. "Thik hai.... phir sham ko Mahajan Mansion aake tum, main aur Arjun mil kar plan banaenge. Iss baar DJ ko chodunga nahi main", says Neil determined.




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Posted: 8 months ago
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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 8




"Toh humara plan ke hisab se chal rahe ho ya nahi, Neil babua?!",asks Srishti while applying face mask on her face. Neil is sitting beside in a couch with a straight face. "Main kuch samjha nahi ma'am", says Neil deliberately although he knows what's exactly she's talking about. "Humko pata tha ke tum burbaak ho....suno tumko uss Yukti Multani ko apne pyaar ke jaal main fhasana hoga uske sacchai janne ke liye", says Srishti. Neil knows Srishti very well that which kind of information she wants to require. He only loves his Yuvika.....he is loyal towards her......he can't even think of any other woman forget about pretending lovey - dovey infront of them. "Kaha ko kho gaye tum?", Srishti's voice breaks his trance. "Woh ma'am.....main soch raha tha ke apke plan kaise execute karunga", says Neil confidently lying to her. "Hmm.....toh kya plan mila ya nahi?!", says Srishti while laying down on sofa. Neil stands up to go from there while saying "Aapka kam ho jayega ma'am. Chalta hun"






When Neil goes from there, Srishti calls DJ. "DJ babua....ek badiya news sunana chahte the tumko", says Srishti over phone. DJ was holding his phone on speaker so that Gargi hears all the conversation. "Kahiye mummyji", says DJ in a taunting voice & Gargi glares at him. "Humne Neil ko ab acche se samjha bhi diya ke usko karna kya hai.....ab baas humko thoda intezar karna padega", says Srishti. Gargi smiles hearing her but DJ frowns. Srishti hungs up the phone. "Finally, sab kuch humare plan ke according chalega", says Gargi. "No Mom.....kuch gadbad hai.... I'm having a bad feeling about this whole situation", says DJ. "Matlab?",asks Gargi.






"Mom, I know Neil very well. Ashiqui sawar rehta hai uss par. Woh uss fatichaar Yuvika ke alawa kisi aur se pyaar karna toh chodo sidhe muh baat tak nahi karega. I'm telling you Mom.....jaisa dikh raha hai waisa hai nahi", says DJ. "DJ....calm down. Dekho agar Yukti merger deal 50-50 partnership ke liye maan jaati hai toh sab kuch apne aap humare according hoga", says Gargi. "Mom....aap samaj nahi rahe ho.....50-50 partnership toh zarur hoga mujhe iss pe koi doubt nahi hai......mujhe yeh pyaar ke natak pe doubt ho raha hai. Yeh Neil double cross karega I can bet that", says DJ. "Don't worry, DJ. Iss Neil ko toh main badmein handle karungi. Fhilhaal merger pe focus karo....uss unpadh aurat se pucho ke investors mile ya nahi. Baki ka baad main dekh lenge", says Gargi. The room's door gets knocked. A servant comes there & says "Sir, Ms Multani aapko study room main milna chahti hai". DJ says "Unhe kehdo main aa raha hoon"

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 9




"Ms. Multani, aap mujhse milna chahti thi?!....I hope humare hospitality main koi kaami nahi hai", says DJ giving her a fake smile. "Digvijay, don't worry about your hospitality towards me.... it's great. Fhilhaal merger deal ke bare mein baat karte hai", says Yukti aka Yuvika. DJ nods at her continue. "Well, Dad called me today. Humare deal ke bare mein puch rahe the aur maine unhe sab samjha diya. He told me to trust your guts & talent. So Mr Digvijay Mahajan.....ab hum 50-50 share ke partners baan sakte hai. Papers ready karwa dena please", says Yuvika with attitude.






DJ gets happy hearing that he finally cracked the deal. "Ms. Multani papers ready hai. Baas apke signature ke zarurat hai", says DJ while handing her a pen to sign up the papers. Yuvika signs the papers. "Congratulations, Digvijay. We're now partners", says Yuvika while DJ handshakes with her. Rose comes there hurriedly & Yuvika sees her. "Well, if you excuse me. I think Rose has something important work with me. Will see you later", says Yuvika. "Of course Ms. Multani. Maine aaj sham ko ek party rakha hai. Saare business related families hogi humare deal ko celebrate karne ke liye. I hope you'll not mind", says DJ. "Well I love parties. See you at evening Digvijay", saying this Yuvika goes from there.






Rose & Yuvika goes into their room for further discussion. "Ma'am, Maine DJ ka phone follow kar rahi thi. Neil ke jaan khatre main hai, ma'am", says Rose making Yuvika look at her panicked. "Kya keh rahe ho?....Neil ne kya bighada uska?", says Yuvika. "Ma'am, bohot badi conspiracy chal raha hai. Aap sunenge toh apke hosh udd jayenge", says Rose. Then Rose tells her about Srishti's plan with DJ-Gargi in which they involved Neil. If any slight mistake occurs then Neil will be spot dead which isn't known to him. "Neil ko koi chot pauchay yeh mujhse bardasht nahi hoga, Rose", says Yuvika. "Toh ma'am ab kya karenge?!",asks Rose perplexed. Yuvika gets up from the couch & says "Plan changed Rose. Aaj raat ke party se hogi iski shruwaat". "Par ma'am plan main changes kya hoga?!",asks Rose.






"Neil Bhardwaj ke shaadi hoga", says Yuvika. "Ma'am, main aapko pehlei bata chuki hun ke Neil move on nahi kar sakta kisi aur ke saath", says Rose. "Neil Bhardwaj ke shaadi hoga Yukti Multani se......Yuvika Mahajan se nahi", says Yuvika. Rose looks at her shocked. "Ma'am, aap agar khudko sabke samne expose karengi toh bhi Neil ko koi bhi harm sakta hai kyunki shaadi karne ke liye Neil ko toh bolna padega apke sacchai", says Rose. "Kisko kuch batane ke zaroorat nahi hai. Neil ko bhi nahi. Sab log Yukti Multani ko Neil ke pyaar main pagal hote hue dekhna chahte hai aur wahi hoga. Sabko lagega sab kuch unke plan ke according ho raha hai aur bich main Neil ko unn logo se dur karungi usse shaadi karke", says Yuvika. "Ma'am, Neil ko sacchai pata hona chahiye. Woh kyu Yuvika Mahajan ko chod kar Yukti Multani se shaadi karega?......kahi aap zabardasti ke shaadi ka plan toh nahi bana rahe?!", says Rose getting panicked. "Baas yehi ek option bacha hai ab", says Yuvika.


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Part 10



"Abhi kyu bulaya hum dono ko?. Hum log toh sham ko milne wale the na?",asks Isha confused looking Neil in Bhumi's room with Arjun. "Kyunki merger deal successful ho gaya. Matlab abhi main mansion ke andar nahi reh sakta", says Neil. Isha-Arjun gets shocked. "Yeh sab kab hua?",asks Arjun perplexed. "Kuch ghante pehle. Iss deal ke khushi main evening pe party hai iss ghar mein. Pata nahi Multanis last moment pe 50-50 partnership karne ke liye kaise maan gaaye!?", says Neil feeling frustrated as he badly wanted Multanis to take over Mahajans. That would've been tight slap to DJ. "Ab toh sirf ek hi option bacha hai.....hume DJ ke karib jo jo hai unn logo ke karib jaana hoga", says Isha. "Halwa hai kya unke karib jaana?!", says Neil sarcastically making Isha shut up."Woh Koyal Verma.....usko pata hai main kis type ka admi hun toh koi fayda nahi", says Neil.






"Hum logo ka kuch nahi ho sakta", says Arjun. Isha glares at him & says "Bhai, aap toh chup hi raho. Aapko toh adat hai yudh karne se pehle hatiyaar taal dena". "Yeh tu kya bakwas kar rahi hai?!", replies Arjun angrily. "Baas karo tum log......I think hume party taak wait karna padega DJ khilaf saboot dhundne ke liye", says Neil & Isha-Arjun agrees with him. Neil was about to leave Mahajan Mansion but gets stopped by Rose. "Mr Bhardwaj, yeh apke liye", says Rose handing him a packet. Neil frowns at her & asks "Yeh kya hai?". "Actually ma'am ne bheja apke liye. Woh iss deal se jude har insaan ko gift de rahi thi aur unhone apko yeh diya", says Rose. Neil reluctantly takes it. "See you at the party, Mr.Bhardwaj. After all merger deal ke saare legal documents apne hi crosscheck kiya hai toh uss hisab se aapka iss party pe aane ka expectations hai", says Rose. Neil gives her a tight smile & says "I'll try to come". Neil goes from there.





Evening 🌆



Neil wore grey armaani suit which is gifted by Yukti Multani. He knows that he needs to show that he's professional & cordial towards her hence wore the suit. "Itne taiyaari ke saath tum Mahajan ke party pe jaoge?!......Kahi main sapna toh nahi dekh raha", says Vidhur dramatically making Neil roll his eyes. "Ho gaya apka?....ab chaliye jaldi", says Neil while wearing his watch. "Betu, thoda deo sheo bhi laga lo....aisa kon jaata hai party main bhala!", says Vidhur. "Dekhiye papa, mujhe waise bhi waha pe jaane ka shoukh nahi hai....apke liye ja raha hun aur kuch kaam bhi hai", says Neil. Vidhur frowns & asks "Ab kya kaam hai?". "Thoda personal hai....wapas aake batata hun", says Neil.






Neil enters into the party with Vidhur. He sees many shareholders, business partners along with politicians are chattering around. Srishti sees him & comes near him. Srishti greets Vidhur & Vidhur greets her back. Vidhur then excuses himself from there leaving Neil & Srishti. "Toh plan ke hisab se chal rahe ho ya nahi?!",asks Srishti. Neil is feeling irritated towards her but still replies "Work in progress, ma'am". "Very good.....ab sun aaj tujhe Yukti ke saath dance karna padega", says Srishti making Neil look at her shocked. "Humko aise ankhe fhad fhad ke dekhne ke zarurat nahi hai. Yeh business logo ka party hai toh nach gaana toh hoga hi. Baas tujhe woh...angrezi main kya kehte hain....ha....tujhe flow flow main apne plan ke hisab se chalna hai. Samjhe ya nahi?!", says Srishti. Neil grits his teeth but still nods at her assertively.







Rose was watching everything from upstairs. Almost everyone came in the party. Surprisingly no one wore grey expect Neil. Looks like luck is in their court. "Rose, Neil ne konse colour pehna hai party pe?",asks Yuvika. "Grey colour, ma'am", replies Rose. Yuvika slightly smiles & says "Mujhe pata tha Neil wahi suit pehnega jo usse aaj gift main mila hai. Isiliye main bhi ready ho gayi grey colour ke saari ke saath". "Ma'am, itna drama ke kya zarurat hai?!. Kon itna dekhega?!.....Sabko lagega ke yeh sirf ek coincidence hai", says Rose. "Rose, jin logo ne unke so called plan main Neil ko shamil kiya unko hi nazar aayega yeh sabse pehle ke.....we're twinning tonight. Well rahi baat coincidence ki toh yeh log itne smart hai ke inko lagega yeh coincidence nahi hai......aur yehi toh plan hai. Waise bhi aaj kuch aisa karungi ke hawa main bhi yeh baat fhel jaaye ke Yukti Multani kisse pyaar kar baithi hai", says Yuvika.






Neil was talking to Mr. Arora when chattering gets cut off. He looks behind to see the reason of silence. He sees Yukti Multani coming down from upstairs wearing grey colour saari with off shoulder blouse. Everyone is awestruck looking at her. Only Gargi notices that both Yukti & Neil are twinning. She grins thinking plan is working. Srishti notices the same & says "Areh baap re....aisa konsa jadoo kiya ke ladki 1/2 din main lattu ho gayi uspe?!". Koyal gives a look towards her making Srishti shut up. DJ looks at Gargi shocked & Gargi gives him a knowing look. DJ still feels something fishy. Neil frowns understanding that Srishti Verma will now give him headache. How the hell they both got twinning unless it's a plan?!.






"Tum aur Yukti Multani twinning kar rahe ho kaise?",asks Isha. "Mujhe kuch gadbad lag raha hai. Yeh sab kuch ek plan lag raha hai", says Neil. "Kya bakwas kar rahe ho?......ismein plan kaise dikh gaya tumhe?!",asks Isha. Then Neil shortly tells her about Srishti's plan along with DJ-Gargi. Isha looks at him shocked. "Phir bhi sawal reh jaata hai ke yeh planned kaise ho sakta hai?",asks Isha. Neil was about to answer but gets cut off by a voice saying "Mr. Bhardwaj, I'm glad that you're here in the party". Neil looks behind & sees Yukti Multani giving him intense looks.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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YUkti calling Neil "mr.. BHARADWAJ"...

Hayee...

Waise show me they have decided to show everything except substantial NeiVika content....so you are our savior....smiley27

Thank you...all parts were amazing...

& I loved them...

Waiting for the next part...smiley31

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