Karta nahi kyun tu mujhpe yakeen? ShaLki PreeRan SS

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Karta nahi kyun tu mujhpe yakeen?...Why don't you have faith in me? Part 1

I dedicate this to my dearest friend Shesha who wants me to write a thriller similar to the webseries "Hello Mini".I have not seen "Hello Mini" and I don't know it's story.But like you wish I am writing the story of a girl who gets stalked by a mysterious guy.From the list of the actresses you suggested I have chosen Sana Sayyad as the female lead.

I dedicate this story to Mochaqueen also.Because when I wrote a cute love story of a girl and a stalker(PreerRan TS Sun lle O mahiya) she wished it could be a thriller.Like she wished this is a thriller about a man stalking a girl.

I thank ShiriHoonMain ExoticDisaster for surprising me by making an excellent cover page so fast.

A beautiful girl was sleeping on the bed.She was Palki.

Her phone rang.She picked up the phone slowly.

"Mom!'

It was her mother Preeta.

Preeta:Why did you become so late in picking up the phone?Do you know how scared I was?

Palki:I was sleeping mom.Don't get worried if I pick up the phone late.

Preeta:How can I not get scared?You are staying alone in a big city like Mumbai.

Palki:Trust me mom.I am safe.I am busy with my modelling work.And I have a friend called Samay here. So I am alright mom.

Preeta:Sure?

Palki:Yes mom.

Preeta:Okay.I am keeping the phone now.Take care.

Palki:You too mom.Bye.

Preeta:Bye!

Preeta disconnected the call.

Palki tried to sleep again.Again the phone rang.

She picked up the phone and said:Mom....are you still worried about me?

But there was no response.

Palki:Mom!

From the other side suddenly she heard a male voice:Hello Palki!

Palki got shocked.

Palki:Who is it?

That person cut the call.

Palki:Who is he?




Palki met her friend Samay at the coffee shop.

Palki:I wonder who called me and why he cut the call immediately.

Samay:Simple.It was a wrong number and realising that he cut the call.

Palki:But he uttered my name.

Samay:He must have said 'Pakhi'.But you mistook it for Palki.

Palki:Maybe.But I feel that I heard 'Palki'.

Samay:No Palki.Just leave it and focus on your work.

Palki:Ya...



Palki posed for her stylish photoshoot.

Somebody other than the photographer clicked her photographs hiding behind the curtain.




After the shoot she returned home.On the verandah she saw an envelope.She picked I and opened it.It was full of her photographs from the latest photoshoot.Palki smiled.

Palki rang up the photographer Vinay:Hi Vinay...I got the photographs you sent me.The photographs look nice.You are so fast in taking the print of the photographs.

Vinay:Which photographs you are talking about Palki?I didn't send you any photograph.

Palki became dull.

She thought:Then who sent me these photographs?




Palki took a bath and came to the drawing room.

Her phone rang.She picked up the phone.

Palki:Hello!

That person:Hello Palki....did you like the photographs?

Palki was stunned.

She thought:This voice...he is the same person who called me last day.

Palki:Hello!

She realised that the call is already disconnected. She tried calling him back.But he did not attend the call.



Palki told everything to Samay.

Samay:He must be your crazy fan.So he took your photographs and rang you up.What's the big deal in it?After all you are a small celebrity.

Palki:But I feel tensed.

Samay:For such a silly thing if you get tensed how much tensed maybe the film actors?Chill Palki...

Palki nodded.




Palki went to the park.A small kid gave her a bouquet of roses.She received it and patted the child's cheek.

Palki:Thank you.

The child smiled and ran away.

Suddenly her phone rang.She attended the call.

"Hello Palki...did you like the roses?"

Palki was stunned.

Palki:You only sent me the roses?Who are you?

Palki turned around in search of him.

He:I know that you maybe looking for me in the park.You cannot find me easily now Palki.

Palki:I have your number.I will trace you.

He giggled.

He:I am going to destroy my SIM now.

Palki:What?

He cut the call and threw away the SIM.

Palki got worried.



Palki met Samay.

Palki:I am really worried Samay.Why is he stalking me?

Samay:He is only a crazy fan of yours.When I am with you why are you scared?

Palki:You are my only relief Samay.

Samay caressed her shoulder and smiled.

Samay:Get prepared for the audition.I will pick you up to take you to the hotel.

Palki nodded.

Palki held his hand smiling and said:You are my most trustworthy friend Samay.

He smiled.

Palki went back home.She was shocked to see "Hello Palki" written on the door with blood.

Palki:This is blood.

Palki screamed.


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Posted: 3 months ago
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Thanks for the dedication.

What an interesting start! I am surprised to see Rrahul as Palki's boyfriend. Nice to see Preeta as her mom. Wonder who is the mysterious stalker. Shocking that he even takes photographs of Palki secretly and wrote 'Hello Palki' in blood. Samay is a very supportive and cool boyfriend. Poor Palki is very scared.

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Nice start dear 😀

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Thank you very much.

Samay is not Palki's boyfriend.He is her only friend in Mumbai.



Originally posted by: Sshesha

Thanks for the dedication.

What an interesting start! I am surprised to see Rrahul as Palki's boyfriend. Nice to see Preeta as her mom. Wonder who is the mysterious stalker. Shocking that he even takes photographs of Palki secretly and wrote 'Hello Palki' in blood. Samay is a very supportive and cool boyfriend. Poor Palki is very scared.

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Posted: 3 months ago
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I am not a fan of this show or characters....but characters dont matter to me when the story is interesting. I love thrillers and especially stalkerssmiley27

Samay def seems weird...he must be the stalker

This is really interesting...please dont end it so soon...make it a long story

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It will not end soon.Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: MochaQueen

I am not a fan of this show or characters....but characters dont matter to me when the story is interesting. I love thrillers and especially stalkerssmiley27

Samay def seems weird...he must be the stalker

This is really interesting...please dont end it so soon...make it a long story

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Posted: 3 months ago
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thanks for the pm

Part 1

Great update.... well written

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Surprised to see Shraddha as Palki’s mother. Wow Vansh Rai Singhaniaas Samay. After seeing photographs scene, m really nostalgic recalling your Preejunts sun le o mahiya. There was a similar novel like this, don’t remember the name,I think it was The Mall. The main character Trisha was getting stalked and calledthe same way like Palki. Where have Rrahul Sudhir and Sana Sayyad acted together?Umm who’s this caller? He sent roses too, giving me goosebumps. Now he gave moregoosebumps by writing Hello Palki with blood. Perfect pics waiting for next. Wonderwho’s opposite Palki and Samay.

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Posted: 3 months ago
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I am surprised that there was a novel about a girl getting stalked.

I am also reminded of my preeran/preejun ts Sun le.but it was a love story.

Rrahul and Palki acted together in 3 short films.

Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Surprised to see Shraddha as Palki’s mother. Wow Vansh Rai Singhaniaas Samay. After seeing photographs scene, m really nostalgic recalling your Preejunts sun le o mahiya. There was a similar novel like this, don’t remember the name,I think it was The Mall. The main character Trisha was getting stalked and calledthe same way like Palki. Where have Rrahul Sudhir and Sana Sayyad acted together?Umm who’s this caller? He sent roses too, giving me goosebumps. Now he gave moregoosebumps by writing Hello Palki with blood. Perfect pics waiting for next. Wonderwho’s opposite Palki and Samay.

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Wow I Love Thrillers

Who's stalking Palki?

Is It Shaurya?

Or Rajveer?

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