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Prologue


Armaan and Abhira work together and Armaan has fallen for Abhira...Even Kaveri is impressed with her.What Armaan doesnt know is that Abhira is the daughter of her mentor which he comes to know through a public meeting in a restaurant......Akshara soon meets Vidya,Her best friend....from school days........Armaan wishes to marry Abhira and Kaveri approves of Abhira along with Vidya,what would be Abhira's reaction


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Yay! You are back. Please update your FFs. Looking forward. 

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Loved this concept

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Character Sketch


Abhira Akshara Sharma- Abhira the first born of Akshara and Abhinav.For Abhira her mother is everything.She lives with her Mamu Kairav and Mami Muskaan.Abhira dotes on Muskaan and is every ready to her stories of her father.Abhira has been working and practicing in Udaipur since past 5 years at Poddar Firms.Unknown to her her boss Armaan Poddar has fallen hard for her...But Abhira is ever focused on her career.....She knows about what the Goenkas did with her mother and she hates them eternally.....She knows that while Aarohi had no fault in all this yet Abhira doesnt wish to meet that family.....However soon Ruhi will turn up at her and Armaan's wedding.Abhira is strong,brave and a replica of her grandmother Naira as Kairav often says.....


Armaan Poddar- One of the topmost lawyers across the country,a family person,loves his siblings.....He is calm,understanding and is Kaveri's favorite grandson....Armaan has fallen hard for Abhira not realizing the when and how.......He doesnot know that Abhira is daughter of his mentor Akshara's daughter....Neither is he aware of his mother's connection with Akshara.....He knows that Abhira is a brilliant lawyer....He thinks he has hidden his feelings well but nothing escapes his grandmother's eyes....Kaveri knows that Armaan has fallen for Abhira and is very happy with his choice......(Armaan is Vidya and Madhav's son here).


Akshara Sharma-Akshara loves Abhira very much and her daughter is her pride,however she misses her son as well who prefers to stay away form Udaipur and rarely comes to meet Akshara.She is saddened by the fact that her children do not get along well.Abhira doesnot consider Abhir her brother......Kairav and Muskaan supported Akshara a lot in her tough times.....Akshara's name in Aarohi's accident was cleared but that was the day Akshara had actually realized that Goenkas would always blame her for everything and she didnt wish for Abhira to grow up in that atmosphere.....Abhira grew up in Mussorie and came to Udaipur for law college.She wishes for Abhira to get settle down soon when Vidya tells her about Armaan's feelings..... She will be happy to see Ruhi at Armaan and Abhira's wedding....


Shikhar Goenka-He is the eldest son of Kairav and Muskaan.....He is of same age as Abhira but she prefers to call him dada since she misses Abhir a lot.....Shikhar is the only person who knows how much Abhira misses Abhir however he also knows that his sister can hide her feelings very well.Shikhar and Abhira are partners in crime and he is very protective of Abhira......


Rohan Goenka-He is the younger son of Kairav and Muskaan.He is Abhira's favorite.Abhira always saves him from situations with his parents and aunt Akshara....He is 17 and tech savy....He loves Abhira the most....


Kairav Goenka-Kairav and Abhira share a very friendly relation.Kairav fulfills the role of father figure in Abhira's life even though he knows that Abhira is stronger than Akshara and would deal with anything that comes in her way.....He wishes to keep Ruhi away from Abhira since Abhira doesnot like her because of the accident and since he doesnot want Abhira to compromise on anything-something which he couldnt ensure for Akshu.....He has cut off the entire connection with Goeknas......He hates Suwarna and doesnot want her any where near her kids........


Muskaan Goenka-Muskaan loves Abhira as her own kid.....She dotes on Abhira since she is the last memory of her brother....Abhinav....She loves Abhir equally but she is angry with him because he has not been a good son to Akshara and a good brother to Abhira.....She often tries to calm Abhira down when she gets angry at Abhir........


Vidya Poddar-Is best friend of Akshara since school days...She and Kaveri had helped Akshara when she was pregnant with Abhira and alone in Mussorie.She had called Kairav and took care of Akshara....When she sees Abhira for the first time,she gets very emotional......When Kaveri informs her about Armaan's feelings,she decided to talk to Akshara about it......


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Rest Poddars are same.........Aarohi is alive here but Akshara left before Aarhi could come to consciousness....Aarohi has wished to meet Akshara multiple times but Kairav has always kept her and Goenkas away........Manish and Ruhi along with Abhir will be there for Abhira's wedding....



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Thank you so much....Updating other FF's will take time.....But thanks for commenting on this one

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Loved all the characters 

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Nice concept 

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Part 1


Abhira felt peaceful when Akshara caressed her hair.....She was lying in her mother's lap...This was the most peaceful spot in the world.She missed Akshara when she was in Mussorie....She understood her mother's reasons of not staying here....Udaipur haunted her but she often found missing her mother,her advice and sometimes a nudge in the right direction....Muskaan entered with cup of coffee for three of them...Muskaan felt like Abhir was missing all this but she knew better than to take Abhir's name in Abhira's presence.....Her only regret...her bhaiji's two children did not get along....Her bhaiji would never be happy with this.....But she also knew why bhabhi had visited.....She wanted to talk to Abhira about marriage....But the problem was that whenever Akshara or she talked about marriage with Abhira,she bolted out.....So Akshara had decided to take Abhira out for dinner and than talk to her since whenever Abhira bolted Kairav would take Abhira's side .......


Abhira (smiling)-Buami aap waha kyu khade ho.....Aandar aao na.....


Akshara (smiling)-Ha aaja Muskaan....


Muskaan (handing over cups)-Ye lijiye coffee aap dono ke liye.....


Akshara (talking to Abhira)-Kaam kaisa chal raha hai beta....


Abhira (enthusiastically)-Bhaut accha mumma.....I am happy the way things are going at work.....


Akshara (whispering to Muskaan)-Ye kabhi ek ladke ke liye aise enthusiatically baat kar payege ya sirf kaam ke baare mai .......


Muskaan (laughing)-Kya bhabhi aap bhi.....Aaj jaye aap dono dinner par,aur baat kijiye ussee......Agar Shikhar aur Kairav ghar par hoge na toh baat nai hogi uski gurantee mai aapko deti hu.....


(talking to Abhira & Akshara)-Arre bas bas badbad devi.......Ek kaam kijiye na bhabhi aap aur Abhira aaj dinner par bahar ho aaye....


Abhira (chuckling)-Arre Buami par sirf hum dono kyu.....Aap log bhi chaliye na......


Muskaan (smiling)-Nai beta....Aaj mujhe bhi office ka bahut kaam hai.....Kairav aur tere dada ko bhi aane mai waqt lagega.....And plus tu aapni mumma ke saath time spent kar.....Jab ye yaha nai hoti toh unhe miss karti hai....


Abhira (smiling widely)-To theek hai mumma aaj hum dono chalte hai.....We will leave at 7


Abhira reserved the table for two of them at a restaurant,coincidentally Armaan was going to that same place with Vidya and Kaveri.....Lately Armaan's thoughts had been occupied with just Abhira Sharma.....While it was not love at the first sight for him,it was gradual....It was easy.....Loving Abhira was like breathing....But he didnt know what Abhira felt......Kaveri knew what was going in her favorite grandson's heart,she had asked Manoj to inquire about Abhira's family.....she was impressed with Abhira there was no question of that,but she wanted to know about her parents.....Kaveri had told Vidya about what Armaan felt and she was pleasantly surprised.......


Akshara was sitting on their table waiting for Abhira who had gone to talk to the staff about something....Vidya who had just entered with Armaan and Kaveri spotted Akshara at the table.....She nudged Kaveri who was very happy seeing Akshara back in Udaipur.....Akshara was surprised when she felt a hand on her shoulder.....And was more surprised when she saw that it belonged to Vidya,her childhood best friend.....Akshara hugged Vidya and Kaveri....Kaveri blessed her.....Akshara had seen lots of ups and downs in her life.....And she was happy that Akshara was a successful lawyer now.....


Vidya (ecstatic)-Tu Udaipur me ??


Akshara (smiling)-Abhira yehi rehti hai Kairav bhai aur Muskaan ke saath.....Ussi se milne aai thi....


Kaveri (smiling)-Ye galat baat hai beta....Abhira yehi rehti hai....aur kabhi milne bhi nai aayi....Aur na aap aati hai.....


Akshara (smiling)-Aap toh jaanti hai na Auntyji mera man ubh gaya hai iss sheher se.....Woh toh Abhira yaha hoti hai isiliye kabhi kabhar aa jaati hu.....


Vidya (emotionally)-Kaha hai woh Akshu....Usse dekhe bhi saalo ho gaye hai.....


Akshara (smiling widely)-Aa rahi hai...Car park kar ke....


Suddenly Armaan came searching for Vidya and Kaveri and was pleasantly surprised seeing Mrs Sharma...She was one of their professors in Delhi law college.She inspired him to become the best lawyer there could be.But how did Akshara mam know Ma and Dadisa.....He slowly approached them....Akshara felt like she knew him from somewhere....But couldnt put a finger on it.....Vidya and Kaveri were confused as well.......Armaan smiled at decided to introduce himself finally.....


Armaan (smiling)-Mam aapne pechchana nai mujhe.....?Delhi Law college.....1st bench Armaan Poddar....


Akshara (smiling widely)-Mujhe laga I knew you from somewhere.....How are you Armaan ?


Armaan (smiling)-I am fine mam....Aapko kabhi nai bhool sakta mai....Aapki wajah se inspire hota hu mai law practice karne liye.....


Akshara (smiling)-Agar tumhare jaise students ho toh padhane ka maza humme bhi aat hai beta.....


Armaan (confused)-Mai toh mam ko college se jaanta hu par aap dono kaise jaante hai unhe.....


Kaveri (explaining)-Vidya ki bachpan ki dost hai woh.....


Abhira came inside the restaurant after parking the car and was heavily confused seeing the scenario.....Her mother was talking to her boss Armaan Poddar and Kaveri mam and some other lady she never knew.....What the hell was happening ? She approached her mother....Akshara spotted Abhira and smiled widely......And their table was booked on the other side....What was ma doing here even....?


Abhira (calling her out)-Mumma kya huva ? Any problem ?


Armaan and Kaveri were shocked...Abhira Sharma was daughter of Akshara Sharma......Vidya was emotional seeing her.....She was tiny little thing when she saw her and now she was a grown up woman.....She looked a lot like Akshara.....Abhira felt more confused seeing all eyes on her and all thoughts about her....Abhira turned to Akshara all confused ......Akshara smiled seeing her daughter confused.....


Abhira (confused)-Ye sab kya ho raha hai Ma.....Sab theek hai na ?


Akshara (smiling widely)-Ha sab theek hai...(Introducing her to Vidya)-Ye Vidya hai....Meri school friend.......


Abhira (recalling)-Ohh the one you talked about ?


Akshara (smiling)-Yes the very same.....


Vidya hugged Abhira.....Abhira felt like what she usually felt with Akshara.....She couldnt understand what was happening around her.....But she smiled seeing her mother happy.....It was after so long that her mother smiled like this.....Obviously since she had met her best friend......Akshara and Abhira had settled themselves at their table after Vidya and Akshara exchanged their current numbers....But Abhira was still confused as to how she knew Armaan sir.....


Abhira (confused)-Aap Armaan sir ko kaise jaanti hai ?


Akshara (explaining)-Armaan was my student at Delhi Law college....


Abhira (stunned)-Ohhh okay alright.....Bataye aapko kya baat karni thi mujhse ?


Akshara (explaining)-Abhira tu aapni professional life mai settled hai beta....Now I think its time that you start thinking about your personal one.....


Abhira (irritatingly)-Not that again Ma....Aapko bojh lagti hu mai....Isiliye baar baar shaadi ki baat karti hai aap.......


Akshara (angrily)-Kisne kaha tujhse aisa ? Abhira shaadi is the natural process of life beta...YOu get educated,build your career and than you get married.....Shaadi ke naamse itna chid ti kyu hai tu......?


Abhira (angrily)-Kyuki pyaar ka doosra naam hai mere career mai rookavat.....Jo mai kabhi bardasht nai karrogi.....


Akshara (explaining)-Beta aisa nai hota hai....I studied law after getting married to your father.....Your papa was never like that.....I want to see you get married into a family.....And you find a good partner....the one who supports you equally....the one who understands you.....Tujhe bharosa nai hai mujhpar.....You think i would find anyone for you.....


Abhira (smiling widely)-Mere papa jaisa koi nai ho sakta........No one can come close.....And why family.....? Ma.....(Abhira doesnt complete her sentence)


Akshara (looking at Abhira's face)-Tu kuch kehna chahti hai.....Bol beta.....


Abhira (sadly)-You were born into joint family....Aapko support tak nai kiya unhone zaroorat ke time....Agar family aisi hoti hai than I dont want a family....


Akshara (understanding her anguish)-Beta har family aisi nai hoti hai.....trust me.....


Abhira (taking a huge breath)-Fine you know what.....Doodhye laka....I am ready to get married.....But mai pehle se aapko bata rahi hu.....I will not compromise my career for any man or his family.....


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Precap


Vidya-Mai aur Ma sa tujhse baat karna chahte the ......


Akshara -kis baare mai....


Vidya-Mere bete ko aapki beti se pyaar ho gaya hai.....


Akshara is stunned


(2) Akshara -Actually somebody did send a marriage proposal for you.....


Abhira (stunned)-What ? who ??


Akshara-The Poddars....




 

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Awesome first chapter! Look forward to reading more. 

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Thanks a lot for reading..... 

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