Without You, I am Nothing : Abhimaan SS Part 4 on pg 5 - Page 5

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Posted: 2 days ago
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Originally posted by: Pinecone

Beautiful update. Look forward to reading more 

Thank you so much smiley31smiley27

Next part coming soonsmiley9

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Thank you so much smiley31smiley27

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Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Enjoyed reading armaan attempts with abhira, I liked your version better than the show

Excited to read more 

Thank you so much smiley31

Updating soonsmiley27

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Thank you smiley31smiley27

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Heyysmiley31


And the next part is finally here..smiley9




                                 Part - 4


Days seemed so good as Armaan and Abhira were enjoying their days in Mussoorie, away from all, them in their own solitude gradually building their relationship, the little efforts of Armaan everyday and the slow melting of Abhira. Armaan was doing everything he could to gain back Abhira's love and trust.

Not telling her, Armaan would do some works in the resort with the help of Keepling Uncle, he even went on with different ideas for the advertisement of the resort to increase the booking. Abhira knew it but couldn't come up to say something or stop him.

Time to time he would bring Abhira her favourite foods like Kachori, then chocolates and make noodles for her more often. No matter how much Abhira denied or showed anger infront of him but she liked all these efforts of him and day by day was falling more in love with him alongside the anger of her fading away little by little.









It wasn't all well for the Poddars though, they visited Madhav in the hospital and with the family by his side he healed with doctor giving him the discharge. The 1st thing Madhav waited coming back home was bringing the true colours of Sanjay out and that happened. No matter how much the later tried to conceal and avoid the matter but it didn't work for more days and finally on a rainy morning, when all the family was seated around, Madhav announced, "mujhe aap sabse kuch zaroori baat karni hai.. khas kar aapse Maasa.." and ground slipped beneath Sanjay's feet, he tried to get up to say something when Madhav smirked, "aap kahan ja rahe hain Jamaisa..maine kaha naa baat zaroori hai.."


He then went on to explain how Armaan and Abhira are still not divorced, him finding the file, how he got to know Sanjay being behind all this. 

All the family members were beyond shocked by the revelation, speechless they just stared at Madhav and Sanjay. Dadisa was the most affected and Kajal sat with her head hung. This was a heavy blow for the Poddars. Even the kids couldn't digest all the information as they sat rooted. 


Finnally gathering up the courage Kaveri Poddar stood up and moved towards Sanjay and glaring him spoke, "aapne phir ek baar humara bharosa toda Jamaisa..itna bada dhoka humare sath kyun? Humne apko itni izzat di, Firm ka legal head banaya, yahan tak ki aap ko apne beton se jyada pyar diya toh phir aapne aisa kyon Kiya hamare sath? Firm ke liye kabil toh Armaan tha lekin uski jagah bhi aapko de di aur aapane yeh sab ka humein ye sila diya?"

Still not able to realise his mistake he shouted back, "han kiya maine yeh sab kyunki nafrat hai mujhe Abhira se.. mere bachon ko bigad ke rakh diya woh toh kya karta main? Khade khade tamasha dekhta aap logon ki tarah? Are aap sab hote honge uske hath ke kathputliyan per mein nehin hun" and he was about to speak more when he received a tight slap from Madhav, who angrily rebuked, "are itna gurur apko sobha nehin deta.. Kamse kam apne galti ka pachtawa gota toh shayed maafi mil bhi jati lekin ab mein dekhta hun aap kaise apne lisence ko cancel hone se rokhte ho.." and with this he dashed out of the house.










But this same rainy day was a happy day for Abhira and Armaan as it was going to add some new sweetness into their relationship. It was the day of Abhira's result declaration. 

She sat holding her laptop, bitting her nails, tensed with Armaan beside her equally in tension when the sheet came on the screen, "passed" it was written there and the grades scored were good too. Abhira just stood up happy making the laptop to fall which Armaan catched in the mean time looking at her bewildered and she just jumped in happiness shouting, "mein pass hogayi Armaan.. finally.. finally I graduated" and she clapped. 

Armaan was just adoring her from behind with happy tears in his eyes, their dream was finally fulfilled and this moment was so surreal for them. Abhira then ran towards Akshara's photo and shouted, "mein pass hogayi Mumma..mein pass hogayi.. itni mehnat ke baad apki beti finally graduate ban gayi.." and she cried the happy tears with Armaan beside her wiping his own tears and they hugged eachother happily. This was their moment and they were going to live it joyously.





It would be some hours now, Abhira was roaming in her room getting bored, it was raining cats and dogs and she was wondering where did Armaan go suddenly rather than sharing this happy moment more with her. She sat pissed with him, when with a umbrella in his one hand and a plate covered on the other he came inside the house running. 

Abhira shocked seeing him coming like that and ran to him wondering what was he upto and putting the umbrella down he removed the cover from the plate shouting, "surprise". It was revealed to be a beautiful handmade cake with "Congratulations Abhira" written on it. 


Abhira got emotional as she held it and asked him, "Armaan tum ise kahan se laye?" and smiling he flexed,"ye maine khud bake kiya hai tumhare liye do cake jalane ke baad" and laughed but on seeing her face he realised she is crying. Wiping her tears to cheer her up he uttered, "yehi khade khade rone kliye ye cake nehi banaya maine chalo katte hain isse" and Abhira smiled nodding her head and they both headed inside. 



Abhira cut the cake with happy tears trickling down her eyes and Armaan cheering for her. They both fed eachother gazing one another lovingly, no words were shared but the emotions were flowing through the eyes only. Then cutting a piece of the cake she took it near the photo of Akshara and said smiling, "ye lo apne beti ki graduation ki khusi mein..apka sapna pura jo hogaya Mumma... Ab Abhira Sharma bhi Akshara Sharma ki tarah lawyer banegi.." and then she cried as she remembered her Mumma and Armaan consoled her wiping her tears and gently kissed her forehead to sooth her down. 


Abhira smiled slightly looking at him but feeling a bit shy ran outside to the rain with Armaan running behind her worried. But he stood glued seeing her drenching herself in the rain, her hands opened wide, face towards the sky and eyes closed, each drop of the rain touching her face. The moment felt blissful for her, for him.

 After few minutes of enjoying the now drizzles Abhira spoke still eyeing the sky, "pata hai Armaan mein humesha ese baarish mein bhigti thi aur Mumma mujhe dant lagati thi lekin mein humesha unko bhi mere sath khinch leti thi aur phir hum sath mein bhigte the ese.." and happily she just twirled around.



Armaan couldn't take his eyes from her, her wet dress now clinging to her skin highlighting every details, her face glowing from the rain water and few strands of her hair sticking to it, all these took Armaan to a different territory which was still unventured, but the havoc going inside him made him to stroll towards it, to her. 

Abhira's back was facing Armaan and he still in a daze just snaked his hands around her waist, back hugging her.

 This sudden move from him shocked her to the core, this hug of him felt altogether different from each and every hug they have shared. His hands resting just on her belly, the thin kurta wasn't helping at all, her heart doing somersaults, butterflies erupting in her stomach, some different emotions were coming out of her which were so unknown to her and not able to think anything, she just turned towards him, his hand still on her waist and their face inches apart, her hands now resting on his chest. 

 Plethora of emotions surrounded them as their eyes met, numerous words were stuck in the mouth unable to make their way out, the touch igniting some unusual currents and the the droplets from the heaven was just fueling the fire, seeing Armaan's eyes reflecting passion in them, Abhira tightened her hold on his shirt and then swiftly they don't know who closed the distance but their lips met. 







Done with this onesmiley9.. Can't promise but would try to update soon.smiley20

Added the rain thing from the show with my own twist.smiley2

Edited by Apsana14 - 2 days ago
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Posted: 2 days ago
#46

Amazing update,loved it

Waiting 4 the nxt part

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Posted: 2 days ago
#47

LOVE LOVE LOVE

THAT RAIN BIT IS SO HOT!!!!

I'm glad they were able to celebrate her result privately and happily

In the show they kinda missed out on a poignant moment of Abhimaan for her result.

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Posted: 2 days ago
#48

Enjoyed reading this chapter 

Loved the rain romance 

Excited to read more on romance 

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