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Posted: 2 months ago
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Hi 👋 I'm going to be writing about the current track of the show as it is too toxic I hope you guys like iit.i wrote this a few days ago and this is just a draft my new ss will be released soon.


"GET OUT"! Angad thundered,leaving a heartbroken Sahiba shocked 


Sahiba: "What are you saying Angad "


Angad: You heard what I said!, because of you ,my father and my child are no more. He said, trying to control his rage 


Sahiba: "Fine, I will leave" she said,trying to hold back tears 


As Sahiba walked out of Brar mansion she recalled all the joyous moments she and Angad spent together. 


7 YEARS LATER... 


Sahiba is shown to be a renowned artist living in a large penthouse with her son Akeer in Delhi.


Akeer: "Mumma"


Sahiba: "Yes Puttar?"


Akeer: "Why don't you tell me about my Papa" 


Sahiba was looking for a way to avoid the question when she gets a phone call 


Sahiba:" I will be right back puttar " 


SAHIBA ON THE PHONE CALL 


Sahiba: "Hello" 


Man : "Good afternoon Miss Sahiba I am Karan Sharma, owner of the largest art gallery in ludhiana. I was wondering if you would like to come exhibit your art in my gallery".


Sahiba was hesitant to answer recalling the incident that had happened years ago and squirmed at the thought of accidentally running into Angad but agreed anyways . 


Man: "Thank you for agreeing. See you tommorow"


MEANWHILE AT BRAR MANSION... 


Manveer : "Beta" 


Angad: "Yes mumma"


Manveer: "Hurry we need to get simrans birthday cake.


Angad: OK 


SIMRAN COMES RUNNING DOWN THE STAIRS AND HUGS ANGAD 


Simran: "Goodmorning Angad Bhaiya !" You haven't wished me happy birthday yet ,or have you forgotten. 


Angad: " Of course not, HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRINCESS!" 


They both go quiet and remember the times sahiba used to call simran princess


Angad: "OK, goodbye I need to go pick up your cake" 

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Posted: 2 months ago
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I'm not a Sahan fan so I usually don't take much interest in Sahan stories.

My present favorite fanfiction is @themasked's fanfic on Jaspal-Gurleen.

I just gave your story a try and I liked the backstory. 

It was good to see Sahiba as a succesful artist living independently with her son, Akeer rather than running a food cart business like in the original series.

Since this is a Sahan story I may/may not continue reading as I don't get enough time to read all fanfictions.

Anyhow I wish you all the good luck!

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Hi hi I've also read the fanfic abt jaspal and gurleen and also your fanfic about veerat. I also think other couples in the serial are by far better than sahan but since its my first one I decided to go simple

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: Terimeridoriyan

Hi hi I've also read the fanfic abt jaspal and gurleen and also your fanfic about veerat. I also think other couples in the serial are by far better than sahan but since its my first one I decided to go simple

That's a great idea. I will tag few people who might be interested in reading your story.

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

That's a great idea. I will tag few people who might be interested in reading your story.

Thank you so much 💖 

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Waiting for next SahAn love story update.🫶

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Posted: 1 months ago
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CHAPTER 2 

Sahiba and Akeer just landed in Ludhiana and are in the airport. "Mumma I'm so tired" Akeer said exhausted. "It was only a One hour flight Puttar " 


Sahiba and Akeer walk out of the airport and get picked by a driver 


In the car,Akeer is looking out the window when he notices a bakery. 


"STOP!" "Mumma, can we pls pls pls go to the bakery" 


Although they were late,Sahiba was also hungry and her stomach had been rumbling ever since they came off the plane 


"Fine,let's go puttar" 


As they entered the bakery,Akeer's gaze fell on a mouthwatering chocolate cake 


"Mumma,can I have that cake pls" 


"NO,we just came to get a little snack" 


"Fine" 


A few minutes After Akeer and Sahiba left,Angad walked in hastily. 


"Show me the best cake you have" Angad said in demanding tone 


The cashier pointed to the cake akeer was ogling over earlier 


Angad: OK,give it to me 


Sahiba and Akeer had reached their hotel and they were busy checking in. When Manveer and simran came in 


Manveer: hello,I am Manveer Brar I booked a hall for my daughters birthday. 


Hotel satff: oh yes ma'am come right this way pls 

Manveer : It's perfect. The party will hold by 2:00 but I will be here by 1:00 with the birthday girlImage

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: Poojajain36

Waiting for next SahAn love story update.🫶

I posted the next chapter

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

That's a great idea. I will tag few people who might be interested in reading your story.

I posted next chapter

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Posted: 1 months ago
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The second part was short and sweet.smiley42 

I guess Sahan-Akeer are going to have a hit and miss during Simran's birthday.