Abhira OS - Like A Girl (Continued on Pg 2) - Page 3

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Purely amazing 👏 🤩 

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Originally posted by: Tanukirti

Purely amazing 👏 🤩 


Thank you for the appreciation. <3

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Great update

Waiting for more ☺️

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Loved the second chapter. Beautifully written. Thank you for adding.

I would like for you to write more. Love reading your story 

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Posted: 6 months ago
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This story is amazing.. My fav ff of Abhira. Please do continue because on screen it's just disappointing and sad. Please write the next part from Abhira's POV if possible. NGL your story made my last day of this year in a way. 

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Posted: 6 months ago
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I loved your writing dear . An independent Abhira comes first because I believe no woman should be completely dependent on a man financially, physically or emotionally & our Abhira is a strong female lead with her own cute silly antics. If u continue with the storyline then I would urge u to show her as the same silly but strong female lead we all adore and then if your thoughts or storyline permit u can introduce a new lead (if necessary). But please DON'T LET HER GET BACK WITH ARMAAN!! ARMAAN = CRIMSON RED FLAG!! 

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Originally posted by: Ariyashivya

Great update

Waiting for more ☺️


Thank you!! :) 

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Loved the second chapter. Beautifully written. Thank you for adding.

I would like for you to write more. Love reading your story 


Thank you sooo much for appreciating it. This made me so happy. You are so kind. I am really glad to know you loved it. Thank you!!! <3

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Originally posted by: MouMalikPatra

This story is amazing.. My fav ff of Abhira. Please do continue because on screen it's just disappointing and sad. Please write the next part from Abhira's POV if possible. NGL your story made my last day of this year in a way. 


I am so glad you like it. Thank you so much for remarking on it. NGL, your comment made my new day of the new year even better. So lots of love to you.

I get the disappointment, hence I might give it a try. Though I make no promises. Thank you for taking out the time to read and leave such amazing comments. <3

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Originally posted by: baisnabi

I loved your writing dear . An independent Abhira comes first because I believe no woman should be completely dependent on a man financially, physically or emotionally & our Abhira is a strong female lead with her own cute silly antics. If u continue with the storyline then I would urge u to show her as the same silly but strong female lead we all adore and then if your thoughts or storyline permit u can introduce a new lead (if necessary). But please DON'T LET HER GET BACK WITH ARMAAN!! ARMAAN = CRIMSON RED FLAG!! 


Girl, you took the words right out of my mouth. Abhira is the perfect combination of strong and sweetly feminine. Goes to show that both could co-exist and that they aren't mutually exclusive. 

You are really sweet with how you are invested in the story. I like the enthusiasm. It's quite infectious. 

The reason for why I left the one shot open-ended is so that readers can build their own happy endings. Whether or not Abhira ends up with Armaan or another lead is solely upto them. But, yes, If you ask me, I say she deserves better. So not Armaan definitely. I am totally with you on that. 

Thank you again for the precious feedback. I really appreciate it.

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