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Posted: 7 months ago
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A pretend family is ready to play the role. Other than Disha, they all want it to be real.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Is Nehmat with a child? Is that the surprise?

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Glad that Veer loves Disha. Shocking that Kokila is Disha's MIL. But glad that she stood for what is right and got Rohan arrested on the grounds of domestic violence. Glad that Veer agreed to pretend as Disha's husband. Loved the bonding of Kokila, Aliya, and Shikkar. Disha's fear is right at its place. Kokila is hiding that fact from her parents so Disha does not have to take taunts from her parents. But I wonder how long can they hide the truth.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Part 5

Superb update... marvelously written 

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Part 5


Fantastic Update 


Disha meeting her parents 

and now her mother in law tells her she must go with Veer

and also speaks to the two children

and both the kids are willing to call Disha as Mumma and Veer as papa

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Now this is turning interesting

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Thank you very much


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Dil Diyan Gallan(The thoughts of heart)Part 6

 Veer and Disha went to Disha's house.

Nikhil and Ananya were very happy.They were excited to see Shikar and Aliya.

Nikhil:Our grandchildren...

Ananya:Children!

They hugged the affectionately.

Disha looked around and asked:Where is Nehmat?

Nikhil:Your little sister Nehmat is here Disha.

Ananya:You came at the right time.There is a surprise for you.

Disha was curious to know it.

Disha:What surprise?

They took her inside.

Nehmat was standing there with a young man.

Nehmat:Disha di!

Disha:Nehmat!

They hugged each other.

Ananya:This is Sartaj.Nehmat's marriage is fixed with Sartaj.After 2 days is their engagement.

Disha was surprised.

Disha:What? I am really happy for you Nehmat.

Nehmat:I am glad that like I prayed, you will be there for my wedding functions.

Disha:Sure.

Nehmat:Di..introduce my jeeju and niece/nephew to me.

Disha pulled Veer,Aliya and Shikar to the front.

Disha:Meet your jeeju Veer.

Nehmat:Hi jeeju!

Veer:Hi!

Sartaj:Hi co-brother.

Veer:Hi!

Disha told Shikar and Aliya:Shikar...Aliya...this is your Nehmat Maasi.

Nehmat:I have 2 cute kids now.I am your maasi.What are your names?

Aliya:I am Aliya.

Shikar:I am Shikar.

Nehmat:Such cute names.You both look like the mix of di and jeeju.

Nikhil and Ananya said:Yes..right.

Veer and Disha felt embarrassed and felt awkward to face each other.

Sartaj:Our children will also be our mix.Right Nehmat?

Nehmat hit her forehead with her hand and said:Hey Rabba!How shameless is Sartaj to talk like this in front of my family.

Sartaj smirked.

Everyone laughed.Nehmat and Sartaj felt embarrassed. But Sartaj started laughing along with others.

Nehmat got irritated.

Nehmat:You are laughing and making fun of me?

To irritate him she tickled him which made him laugh more.

So the irritated Nehmat walked away.Everyone giggled.




All were having food together.Ananya was feeding Shikar and Aliya.

Disha:Maa,why are you feeding them?They will wait on their own.

Ananya:I could not feed my grandchildren for years.So when they are here I want to feed them.

Everyone smiled.

Nehmat:Disha di...why don't you feed Veer jeeju?

Disha and Veer were stunned.

Disha:What are you saying Nehmat?We are not a newly married couple.

Nehmat:So what?Maa and papa feed each other even now.

Nikhil and Ananya became shy.

Shikar:Yes Maa.Please feed him mumma.

Aliya:Papa,you also feed mumma.

Veer smiled and fed Disha with a spoon.Disha was stunned.

Veer whispered:Sorry Disha.If we don't do it,they will doubt us.

Disha nodded and fed him with a spoon.

Everyone smiled.

Veer whispered:Disha,do you remember that we met first in a similar situation when I was eating food.But that time we did not feed each other.

Disha snorted.






Veer and Disha were in the room.Both were feeling awkward to share the bedroom with each other.

Veer:Disha,I know why you are tense.Don't worry.I will not behave in a wrong way.

Disha:I know that Veer.I don't doubt your character.You are a gentle man and that's why I was willing to do this drama with you.

Veer was relieved.

Disha:But still I feel awkward as we are not a real couple.

Veer:You don't worry about that.Our kids will be coming now.So you won't feel awkward.

Suddenly Shikar and Aliya came:Mumma..papa!

Veer and Disha hugged them.

(Thank you Salley for the edit).

Shikar and Aliya slept between Veer and Disha.Veer and Disha forgot their awkwardness while being with the children.The kids slept.

Veer:Disha...to be frank I felt very nice when Shikar called me 'papa'.I want him to call me 'papa' always even after the drama gets over.

Disha became emotional.

Disha:Shikar never got love from his real father.So he considered his life abnormal.So when he got love from you,he considered you as his father.Maybe because of that he called you 'papa'.

Veer:Maybe Aliya also feels the same about you.So she called you 'mumma'.

Disha smiled emotionally and said:When she called me 'mumma',it touched my heart.I felt that she is born in my womb.

Veer smiled.

While talking both felt sleepy and slept off.





The next day...

Disha woke up suddenly from the bed panting.

She was disturbed.Veer also woke up.

Veer:What happened Disha?

Disha:Nothing.

Disha went to bath.

Disha came back after bath.Veer also had freshened up in the other bathroom.

Veer:Disha,are you alright?Ever since you woke up I have been noticing your face.

Disha's eyes got filled up with tears.She was weeping terribly.

Disha:I saw a bad dream.Rohan came to trouble me.I got worried.

Veer:Why are you worried a about that?Rohan exited your life long ago.After many years why are you scared?

Disha:People say that early morning dreams come true.So I am scared.

He felt sad for her.

Tears fell of her eyes.Veer saw Disha's tears rolling down her cheeks.

Veer wiped her tears with his fingers..

Veer kept his hand on her shoulder and said:You don't need to worry Disha.It's only a dream.Even if Rohan returns,nothing is going to happen to you as I am there.

They both looked at each other emotionally.




Sartaj was walking after the angry Nehmat.

Nehmat:Don't come after me.You embarrassed me in front of everyone.

Sartaj:For such a silly thing you are angry?

Suddenly Sartaj opened the box in his hand and took out a sweet.

Then he put it in her mouth.

Sartaj:Sweets can melt my girl's anger.

She smiled.Sartaj became happy.




Veer took his shirt to wear.But the button got broken.

Veer:Oh no!

Disha:I have needle and thread.You can stitch it.

Disha gave him the thread and the needle.

Veer tried to sew the botton,but he was not able to do it.

Disha started laughing.

Disha:You don't know to sew a small shirt button?

Veer felt embarrassed and he also started along with her.

Disha:Give it to me.I will do it.

He gave her the shirt and she attached the button to the shirt.

Veer:Thank you Disha.

Disha:But learn to sew the button.It's easy.

Veer:Sure..if you teach me.

She smiled.

He wore the shirt.





Sartaj and Nehmat exchanged rings in the engagement function.

Sartaj-Nehmat started dancing.

Tere naa' diyan dhooman pe gaiyan
Tu chandigarh tohn ayi ni
Tenu dekh ke hoke bharde ne
Khade chowkan vich sipahi ni

Thoddi te kala til kudiye
Thoddi te kala til kudiye
Jyon daag ae chand de tukde te
Tenu kala chashma
Tenu kala chashma
Tenu kala chashma jachda ae
Jachda ae gore mukhde te
Tenu kala chasma jachda ae
Jachda ae gore mukhde te



Sadkon pe chale jab
Ladkon ke dilon mein tu
Aag laga de baby, Fire!
Nakli se nakhre tu kare
Jab dekhe humein
Jhooti liar!

Kala kala chasma jachta tere mukhde pe


Jaise kala til jachta hai tere chin pe
Apni adaaon se zyada nahi to
10-12 ladke to maar hi deti hogi tu din me
Tujh jaise 36 phirte hain
Meri wargi aur na honi ve
Wargi aur na honi ve
Wargi… aur na honi ve

Tu munda bilkul desi hai
Main Katrina ton sohni ve

Haay... main fed up ho gaiyaan mundeya
Haay... main fed up ho gaiyaan mundeya
Sun sun ke dukhde ve
Menu kala chashma…
Ho menu kala kala kala…
Ho menu kala chasma jachda ae
Jachda ai gore mukhde pe
Menu kala chasma jachda ae
Jachda hai gore mukhde te
Jachda hai gore mukhde te

Shikar-Aliya and Nikhil-Ananya too started dancing.

Sadkon pe chale jab
Ladkon ke dilon mein tu
Aag laga de baby, Fire!
Oh menu... Oh menu...

Nakli se nakhre tu kare
Jab dekhe humein
Jhooti liar!



Ho menu kala chashma…
Ho menu kala kala chashma
Aye kala chasma...
Oh kala kala kala kala kala oy…


Shikar and Aliya pulled Veer and Disha to the dance floor and they also started dancing.

Hey…

Kala chashma jachda ae










Jachda ae gore mukhde te
Tenu kala chasma jachda ae


Jachda ae gore mukhde te [x2](
 Baar Baar Dekho).




Veer saw Disha weeping.Veer was shocked.

Veer:What happened Disha?

Disha:Veer...I feel guilty to fool my parents.Years back I hurt them a lot.Again I am repeating it.I am the worst daughter in this world.

Veer felt sad for her.

Veer:Disha...I understand your feelings.But this time you are fooling them to make them happy.So there is difference.

Disha:But still...I am betraying my family who love me a lot.

Veer:Be happy and enjoy with the family you lost long ago.

Disha nodded with a smile.

Veer smiled.





Nikhil and Ananya called Veer and Disha.

Nikhil:We called both of you to express our wish.

Ananya:We could not attend your wedding.Disha is not even wearing her nuptial chain maybe because she finds it old fashioned to wear it.But we wish to see your wedding.

Nikhil:Please get married again for us.

Veer and Disha got shocked.


Edited by jasminerahul - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
#58

Part 6

excellent update... well written

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Posted: 7 months ago
#59

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update 😃

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Continue soon 🔜

&Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 7 months ago
#60

Haha I knew aisa kuch hoga end pesmiley36

What a surprise to see Nehmat in this storysmiley42