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Posted: 8 months ago
#41

Part 5

Wonderful update... awesomely written

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Sumeet introducing Namita to Archana was good. Loved the bonding of Archana and Namita. Loved the reunion of both families. Loved the efforts that Angad and his family stuffing desserts in Pihu's mouth so would not drink. The songs are nice. It was shocking that Meera told Namita that Sumeet was her boyfriend who dumped her. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 5


Awesome Update 


I truly enjoy Sumeet and Namita's scenes a lot 

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Posted: 8 months ago
#44

Thanks a lot.what do you think of raghav prachi scenes?



Originally posted by: kavitha_r

Sumeet introducing Namita to Archana was good. Loved the bonding of Archana and Namita. Loved the reunion of both families. Loved the efforts that Angad and his family stuffing desserts in Pihu's mouth so would not drink. The songs are nice. It was shocking that Meera told Namita that Sumeet was her boyfriend who dumped her. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 7 months ago
#45

Thanku Kavitha,Coderlady,taahir,khwaishfan,Goldie Abrol.




Manmarziyaan(The Heart's Wish) Part 6

 Pihu told Angad:Angad,my London classmates have come here.They have arranged a get together party.Can I go?

Angad:What is the need to ask my permission Pihu?Go and enjoy.

Pihu:Are you sure?

Angad:Yes.

Pihu:Thank you so much Angad.You are the best husband.

Angad became very happy.

Yoon to solah saavan aaye gaye
Gaur nahi kiya humne
Bheega man ka aangan is martaba
Kya jaane kya kiya tumne

They smiled sweetly at each other.


Dil mein jaage, ishq waali manmarziyan, manmarziyan..
Zid ki maari (yoon to solah) bhooli bhaali (saavan)
Mannmarziyan (aaye gaye), mannmarziyan(Lootera).

Angad:You call and tell them that you will be attending the party.

Pihu smiled.

Pihu rang them up:Hi!Pihu here.I am also coming for the party.

What time will the party get over?

At night?

Angad:Don't worry. I will come to pick you up after the party.

Pihu became very happy.





Prachi was irritable.

Raghav asked her:What happened Prachi?

Prachi:In today's dance class some students were not dancing well.So I got angry and blasted at them.

Raghav:Prachi...you should control your anger to be a good teacher.Through practice,they will improve.You have to be patient.

Prachi:I know Raghav.But now my head is burning.

Raghav:To cool down,I have a solution.

Prachi:What is that?

Raghav:We will go to the lawn and sing songs?

Prachi:What?

Raghav:Ya.Trust me..the result will be awesome.

Prachi:Then I will try it.



They both went to the lawn and sat on the grass.

Raghav:Shall we start?

Prachi:Ya.

They started singing songs together funnily showing actions.

Ishq waali arziyaan
Manzoor kar diyaan
Kar lae gustaakhiyaan
Kar lae manmarziyaan
Haaye manmarziyaan

They laughed and enjoyed it.

Manmarziyaan haaye manmarziyaan haaye
Manmarziyaan, manmarziyaan…
Haaye manmarziyaan…
Manmarziyaan… (Manmarziyaan).




Pihu went for the party.Later Angad went to pick her up from the party.There he was shocked to see Pihu drinking and singing holding a mike in her hand.

Her friends were also drinking and singing.Angad went near her with irritation.

Angad:Pihu!

Pihu:Hi Angad...

Suddenly the over drunk Pihu fell unconscious on his chest.

(Thank you Salley for the edit)

Angad held her closer emotionally.

He placed her on the chair.

Then he lifted her up and walked to the car.




As Namita asked,Sumeet came to the park.

Sumeet:We both stay in the same compound.Still we can't meet there and we are meeting secretly.

Namita:There is one more person with me Sumeet.My best friend Meera.

Meera came from behind.

Sumeet was surprised:Meera!

Meera:After everything how are you able to smile at me?How did you get the courage to even look at my face?

Sumeet became upset.

Meera:You betrayed me.Now why are you doing this perfect lover drama with my best friend?

I warn you.Leave Namita.I will not let you break her heart.

Meera looked at Namita and said:Come Namita.

Meera walked away angrily.

Sumeet called Namita tearfully:Namita!

Namita looked at him tearfully.

Na maaregi deewangi meri, na maaregi awaargi meri
Ke maaregi zyada mujhe maut se naraazagi teri
Kyun itna huaa hai tu khafa?
Hai zidd kis baat ki teri?
Ke maaregi zyada mujhe maut se naraazagi teri

Sumeet asked her painfully:Don't you trust me?

His question pricked her heart.

Jaan ‘nisaar hai, jaan ‘nisaar
Tere pyaar pe mere yaar, jaan ‘nisaar hai

Namita:What is this Sumeet?What's happening?

Sumeet:Namita...I...

Duniya zamaane se rishte mitaaye hain


Suddenly Meera called Namita:Nami..come.Don't listen to that cheater.He will try to manipulate you and trap you again.

Namita looked at Sumeet weeping and walked towards Meera.

Tujhse hi yaari hai humari, ek baar to aa
Maine nibhaya hai, karke dikhaaya hai

Tears fell down from Sumeet's eyes.

Le teri baari, ik vaari tu bhi pyar nibha
Tu bhi pyaar nibha, o yaara




Namita lit the lamp in the puja room.

Namita wept:God...It seems that Sumeet is not what I thought him to be.But my heart is not allowing me to believe that Sumeet is bad and his love for me is not true?

God...please show me what is right and wrong.Please show me the right path.

In the morning...

Pihu woke up from the sleep.

Angad looked at her angrily.

Angad:Why did you drink at the party Pihu?

Pihu:Why are you talking so rudely Angad as if you don't know anything?I went there with your permission.Then why are you angry?

Angad:I asked you to go to meet your friends and enjoy with them,not to drink.I did'nt expect it Pihu.

Pihu became upset.

Pihu:Angad...from London only I got drinking habit.So did'nt you guess that all my friends are also alcoholic like me?

Angad was stunned.

Angad:Oh no...how did I forget it?That thought had'nt come in my head.If I was aware of it I would not let you go with your London friends.

Pihu became upset.

Pihu:But those were the most beautiful moments of my life.

Angad:What?Drinking with your friends?It's not beautiful,but toxic.You will understand it one day.

Pihu became sad.





Namita went to the guest house to meet Sumeet.

Sumeet was happy to see her.

Sumeet:Namita...you came to see me.I doubted whether you will cut all your ties with me.

Namita felt sad.

Namita:I thought you will leave our house after what happened.

Sumeet:You thought I got red handed,so there is no need of impressing your dad as there is no future for us.

Namita was silent.

Sumeet:But I have full faith in myself and our love.So why should I leave before reaching the aim?I am still confident.

Namita was stunned.

Teri berukhi se hai badi, umar intezaar ki meri
Ke maaregi zyada mujhe maut se naraazagi teri
Kyun itna huaa hai tu khafa?
Hai zidd kis baat ki teri?
Ke maaregi zyada mujhe maut se naraazagi teri

Sumeet:You maybe wondering why I am so confident after what happened.Right?You want to know it.

Namita nodded.

Sumeet:First tell me.Do you trust me?

Namita became emotional.

Jaan ‘nisaar hai, jaan ‘nisaar
Tere pyaar pe mere yaar

Namita:I trust both you and Meera.So my heart is saying that there was a misunderstanding.

Sumeet was relieved to know that Namita trusts him.

Jaan ‘nisaar hai, jaan ‘nisaar
Tere pyaar pe mere yaar, jaan ‘nisaar hai(Kedarnath).

Namita:You both loved each other a lot.Then why did you break up with her without even informing her?

Sumeet:The biggest misunderstanding is that Meera and I loved each other.We both have never loved each other.

Namita was shocked.

Namita:What are you saying Sumeet?I had seen a photograph in which you were with Meera.

Sumeet:You can't believe what I said.Right?Listen to the full truth Namita.

Sumeet told her something leaving Namita in shock.





Namita visited Meera.

Meera:Nami...did you break up with your lover?

Namita was silent.

Meera smiled.

Meera:I know that you broke up with him.Because you trust me more than that liar.He broke my heart.Now he will know the pain of heart break.

Namita became dull.

Namita:Meera,you get ready.We are going out.

Meera:Sure.Today I want to celebrate my ex -boyfriend's failure.

Namita felt sad.





Namita took Meera to a place.

Meera:Why have you brought me here?

Sumeet appeared there.Meera got angry.

Meera:Nami,why did you bring me here?You know that I hate him.Or does that mean that you still believe this cheater?I don't blame you.Because he is an expert in fooling his girl friends.

Sumeet:Meera...you think that I betrayed you.Your misunderstanding is ruining our lives.So I should not hide the truth from you.You deserve to know the truth atleast now.

Meera:What truth?

Sumeet:Are you mentally prepared to hear the truth?

Meera:Stop your drama.

Namita:Please listen to him Meera...atleast for my sake.

Meera looked at Sumeet:Ok...you say.... what do you want to tell me?


Edited by jasminerahul - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
#46

Angad Pihu sequence was romantic. Sad that Pihu drank a lot. Angad telling Pihu that she will realize the ill effects of drinking one day was right. Hope Pihu gives up her habit. Raghav-Prachi conversation and the song was romantic. Sad that Meera intervened between Sumeet and Namita. Namita's plan of bringing Sumeet and Meera to get the answer is a smart one. Waiting to know what happened between Sumeet and Meera.

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Posted: 7 months ago
#47

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome & interesting update 😃

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 7 months ago
#48

Part 6

Good update... superbly written

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
#49

Part 6


Painful and Awesome Update 


Meera is filled with hate for Sumeet 

and she also wants that Namita breaks her relation 

with Surmeet

it will be interesting to know what had actually happened between

Meera and Surmeet

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Posted: 7 months ago
#50

Singing songs to cure a tension headache. That sounds like the perfect remedy for the stressed Prachi.