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Posted: 1 years ago
#31

Part 4

Excellent update.... nicely written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#32

Namita does not have someone else in her life. She just wants to make her parents happy.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#33

Sumeet is all set to impress his future father in law. Lets wish him success.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#34

Pihu needs help and support from everyone to overcome her problem.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#35

Prachi hired a cook. While the food was good, how long will Raghav be happy?


He can teach Prachi and both can cook.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thanku Kavitha,Coderlady,taahir,khwaishfan,Goldie Abrol.



Manmarziyaan(The Heart's Wish) Part 5

Sumeet got ready to go out.

Namita went near him.

Namita:Where are you going?You have shoot today?

Sumeet:You thought documentary was just an excuse to stay here?I am really making a documentary on the different forms of dance.

Namita was surprised.

Sumeet:Today I got an appointment with the famous Odissi dancer Archana.

Namita:Wow.!I also love her.Can I join you?

Sumeet:Yes sure.

Namita:How did you get her appointment so easily?Is it because you are a hit Ad maker?

Sumeet:Not at all.She is my mom's friend.So I know her.

Namita was surprised.

Namita:How come they both are friends?They both belong to different fields.

Sumeet:They both studied together in college.They both used to dance together.

Namita was surprised:Your mom also dances?

Sumeet:Yes.But she did'nt take it seriously.

Sumeet showed her the photograph of Parvati dancing with Archana.

Namita:Nice photograph.

Sumeet:Archanaji She was staying abroad for years.Recently only she returned to India.

Namita:Yes.

Sumeet:So recently only I met her in person.




Sumeet and Namita went to Archana's house.

Sumeet:Good morning Ma'am.

Archana:Good morning!

Namita:Hi Ma'am..I am your big fan.

Archana:You are the model Namita.Right?

Namita:Yes Ma'am.You know me?

Archana:Who does'nt know you?You are always seen in the hits advertisements of TV.

She smiled.

Archana:You may be too busy.Right?

Namita:I am not that busy.Because I am not accepting each and every offer which comes my way.I am against endorsing alcohols,unhealthy drinks and fairness creams.

Archana:Wow!I am impressed.

Namita smiled.

Namita:Ma'am,you were abroad for many years.Right?Why did you stay abroad?

Archana's face became dull.

Archana said in her mind:To avoid certain questions from the society I had to stay abroad.

Namita:You are a classical dancer.So going abroad must have affected your career.Right?

Archana:It's a misunderstanding that foreigners do not like our art form.They enjoy it more than Indians.Indians enjoy western and cinematic dance more than our own art forms.Right?

Namita and Sumeet smiled.

Sumeet:Aunty,as a part of the documentary I need your small interview also.

Archana:Sure Sumeet.

Sumeet took her interview.

After that Archana performed Odissi dance in the Odissi costume.

Sumeet took it's video while Namita was lost in the dance.




Namita went for the Ad shoot.

Namita:Who is the director?

She saw a person facing backward.He turned back and said:I am your director Madam.

Namita was surprised as he was Sumeet.

Namita:Sumeet!

Sumeet:Yes...your Sumeet.

Kaisi raah pe naseeba khada
Chupchaap sa takke munh mera
Aadhe waade sa jeena huaa
Russ gayiaan saari khushiyaan



Namita:What a pleasant surprise!You did'nt even give a clue.

Sumeet:If I give you a clue, how can I surprise you?

She smiled.

Sumeet:Seeing me,when you got surprised there was a smile on your face.It was priceless.I can do anything to see your smile.

She smiled sweetly.

Saddi sacchi mohabbat
Ho sacchi mohabbat
Saddi sacchi mohabbat kacchi reh gayi
Saddi sachi mohabbat
Ho sachi mohabbat
Saddi sachi mohabbat kacchi reh gayi

Sumeet:Since I was busy with the documentary I was npt taking up any Ad.But when I was told that you are the model,I decided to take up this Ad.

Namita smiled happily.

Ho.. sajde mein hai jhuke sar mera
Duaaon mein bhi zikr tera
Yeh jo dikh rahe hain faasle
Ye past hausle, shiqve hain kuch gile
Aur dil di gal dil vich reh gayi haaye
(Manmarziyaan).

Sumeet:You get ready and come for the shoot.

Namita:Ya.


Namita got ready for the shoot and came.

She enjoyed the shoot with Sumeet.


As Ram and Priya invited,Raghav-Prachi and Angad-Pihu came to the Kapoor Mansion for dinner.Ram:I can't tell you how happy I am seeing my daughters and sons in law together.Without seeing my daughters life is dry.I really missed you my daughters.

Pihu and Prachi smiled.

Pihu-Prachi:We missed you too dad.

They hugged Ram.

Priya:Nobody missed me?

Angad and Raghav said:We both missed you Priya Maa.

Priya smiled:Atleast my sons in law care for me.

Pihu-Prachi:Mom!

They giggled and hugged Priya.

Namita:You all are ignoring me.It's not fair.

Pihu:How can we ignore you Nami di.

Prachi:You are the best.Right?

Namita smiled.The sisters hugged together.

Ram:Prachi...are you cooking good food for Raghav?

Everyone laughed.

Prachi:Dad,will you please stop it.

Pihu:Dad,don't ask such questions to P.

Everyone laughed.

Priya:Leave that.Have dinner.

Raghav:Sure.I am longing for delicious food.

Prachi murmured:As if he does'nt get good food at home.

Priya served food for them.Everyone enjoyed the dinner.

Raghav:Thank you so much Priya maa.I felt overwhelmed eating such a nice dinner.

Angad:Me too Priya Maa.As you know since childhood I have been coming here to eat your tasty food.

Pihu:Angad was excited to come here for eating your food.

Priya smiled:I am glad to get so many compliments from all of you.

Ram:You guys are giving compliments only for Priya,not even one compliment for me?

Everyone laughed.

Namita:That's because they are foodies and they notice only the cooking skill.But I am a model.So looks are also important for me.I am telling you that no one is as handsome in middle age like my dad.

Everyone smiled.

Ram:You are the only honest person in this family.I love you for that bacha.

Ram hugged Namita.

Priya:Mr.Kapoor!

Everyone laughed.

Prachi:Guys..dinner is over.Can we have some fun?Let's dance.

Pihu:Sure.

Angad:No no.Our stomach is full.We can't dance now.

Raghav:But let the sisters dance.

Ram:Not only the sisters,parents will also dance.Right Priya?

Priya:Yes Mr.Kapoor.

They all danced joyfully.

(Phor ke los se everybody come on let’s do baila
Tres tos uno everybody come on let’s do baila) – 2

Aami tami tambi yan seay en tre e kare wermsula
Nu way nu way kaha yereian su trampa trampa baes
Aami tami tambi yan seay en tre e kare wermsula
Nu way nu way kaha yereian su trampa trampa baes

Le le le lere lele mazaa le
Le le le lele mazaa le
Le le le lere lele mazaa le
Le le le lele mazaa le

Raat ka jamke mazaa le
Le le le le re mazaa le
Aaaj ka jamke mazaa le
Le le lere lele

Chaandni chaandni raat hai
Raat ke nashe mein koi baat hai
Mauka hai masti hai le le lele mazaa
Aaj ka waqt apne saath saath hai
Le le le lere lele mazaa le
Le le le lele mazaa le
Le le le lere lele mazaa le
Le le le lele mazaa le

Raat ka jamke mazaa le
Le le le le re mazaa le
Aaaj ka jamke mazaa le
Le le lere lele

Le le le lele mazaa mazza lele
Jamke mazaa le le
So-la-ti-do-re-mi-fa-so-la-ti
Le le le lele mazaa mazza lele
Jamke mazaa le le
Re-mi-fa-so-la-ti-re-mi-la-ti

Doobh doobh jaaye ek doosre mein
Hosh na rahein yahan zara zara sa bhi kisi ko

Chahe chahe jaise zindagi bitaoon
Apni marzi se yahan pe jee raha hoon main tu dekh

Le le le lere lele mazaa le
Le le le lele mazaa le
Le le le lere lele mazaa le
Le le le lele mazaa le

Raat ka jamke mazaa le
Le le le le re mazaa le
Aaaj ka jamke mazaa le
Le le lere lele

Chaandni chaandni raat hai
Raat ke nashe mein koi baat hai
Mauka hai masti hai le le lele mazaa
Aaj ka waqt apne saath saath hai
Le le le lere lele mazaa le
Le le le lele mazaa le
Le le le lere lele mazaa le
Le le le lele mazaa le

Raat ka jamke mazaa le
Le le le le re mazaa le
Aaaj ka jamke mazaa le
Le le lere lele(Wanted).


After the dance when all were chatting,Prachi went near Raghav and asked in a low voice:Why did you say that you were longing for good food?I am trying to give you the best food by appointing good maids.Still you are talking as if you are forced to eat tasteless food.Why Raghav?Why?You disappointed me.

Raghav became dull.

He thought:Prachi is going out of control.I have to calm her down.

Raghav:Prachi...tomorrow shall we go for a movie?I have already booked tickets.

Immediately Prachi's anger melted and her face blossomed.

Prachi:Really?

Raghav:Ya.

Prachi:I can't wait to watch the movie Raghav.

Raghav smiled.

Raghav thought:Thank God!Prachi is calm now.

Raghav was relieved.




After reaching home Pihu took the bottle of liquor.

Angad came near her seeing this.

Angad:You had a heavy dinner.Then why do you want to drink Pihu?

Pihu:I need dessert Angad.

Angad:This is not a dessert Pihu.I can buy dessert for you now.I will go to any bakery which you like.

Pihu:Drinks are the dessert for me.So you don't need to go anywhere for that Angad.

Angad became dull.

Brinda and Aditya came.Seeing them,Pihu hid the bottle behind.

Aditya:How was the dinner?

Brinda:Obviously it must have been good.It was prepared by Priya.

Aditya:I know.But for a formality I am asking them.

Angad:It was nice.

Pihu:It was nice.

Angad:Just one thing was missing.A delicious dessert.So Pihu is upset.

Pihu was stunned as she did not expect Angad to say this to Brinda.

Brinda:You want dessert Pihu?

Pihu:Not really.

Angad:Pihu is hiding her wish to have dessert. Give her dessert mom.

Pihu glared at Angad.

Brinda:I had already made dessert.You eat full Pihu.

Pihu was stunned:What?

Aditya:Feed her the dessert Brinda.

Brinda:Sure.

Brinda brought the dessert for Pihu and Angad started feeding her forcefully.Since Brinda was sitting there Pihu could not resist.

Without giving her a chance to resist Angad kept feeding her.

Angad said in his mind:I will feed you so much that there won't be space in your stomach to have drinks.

After Brinda left Pihu stared at Angad angrily.

Pihu:I know why you did this Angad.But you can't succeed always.

Pihu walked away angrily.Angad just smiled without taking her words seriously.




The next day Prachi and Raghav came back home after watching the movie.

Prachi was trying hard to remove her shoes.

Prachi:Oh no...I can't remove it.

Raghav:Why did you wear tight shoes if you are uncomfortable in them?

Prachi:It was not tight when I bought it.I gained weight.That's why it's tight now.

Raghav:But why did you wear it?

Prachi:Because these shoes match my dress perfectly.

Raghav:But comfort is more important than looks Prachi.See how painful it is for you.For hours you suffered silently.

Prachi:I can bear anything for perfection.

Raghav thought:Strange!

Raghav:Wait...I will help you.

Raghav bent down and slowly removed her shoes.

Prachi was relieved.

Tere rang vich rang jaawan main ab abhi
Tere sang sang beh jaawan main ab abhi
Sunu main tu jo farmaaye jaisi teri marzi
Jis paase le jaaye jaisi teri marzi
Sapne wohi dikhaye jaisi teri marzi
Mann se jo tu chaahe jaisi teri marzi



Prachi:Thank you Raghav.You gave me a lot of relief.

Raghav smiled

Ishq waali arziyaan
Manzoor kar diyaan
Kar lae gustaakhiyaan
Kar lae manmarziyaan
Haaye manmarziyaan

and caressed her feet softly.


Oho…
Haaye...
Mere dhyaan mein
Mere dhyaan mein
Har vele mere dhyaan mein
Ehsaan ve ehsaan ve
Kaise bhuloon ehsaan
Qurbaan ve qurbaan ve
Teri hasti pe qurbaan ve
Armaan ve armaan ve
Tujhse hi jude armaan
Tujhse hi jude armaan
Tujhse hi jude armaan…

Raghav:Are you feeling better now?

Prachi:Your hands have the power to give me relief.So I am super fine.

He smiled.

Naaz tere main uthaawan
Jaisi teri marzi
Jad keh de muskaavan
Jaisi teri marzi
Ishq 'ch main itraavan
Jaisi teri marzi
Sajda karda jaawan
Jaisi teri marzi(Manmarziyaan).




Namita went to meet her friend Meera in her apartment.Namita:I am so happy that you are back Meera.

They hugged each other.

Namita:How did you decide to come back to India?You are a famous model there.

Meera:I was depressed after I lost my lover.I lost interest in modelling also.To get out of depression I needed to come here.I hope the stay in India will help me to overcome my pain.

Namita:You will be able to Meera.I am there with you.

Meera;But it's not easy.

Namita:I can understand it Meera.But you have to move on.

Let us go out and chill.

Meera:I am not in a mood Nami.

Namita:No...you have to.We are meeting after a long time.Don't refuse..

Meera:Ok...only for you.

Namita smiled.

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Meera and Namita went for a morning walk.

Meera smiled feeling the cool breeze.

Namita thought:I hope you will feel better Meera.

Tu Jo Rootha Toh Kaun Hansega
Tu Jo Chhuta Toh Kaun Rahega
Tu Chup Hai Toh Yeh Darr Lagta Hai
Apna Mujhko Ko Ab Kaun Kahega

Meera and Namita went shopping and tried out different dresses.

Tu Hi Wajah
Tere Bina Bewajah Bekar Hoon Main
Tera Yaar Hoon Main
Tera Yaar Hoon Main


Aaja Ladein Phir Khilono Ke Liye
Tu Jeete Main Haar Jaun
Aaja Karein Phir Wohi Shararate
Tu Bhaage Main Maar Khaun

Namita and Meera watched a movie in the theatre and enjoyed.

Mitthi Si Woh Gaali Teri
Sunne Ko Taiyaar Hoon Main
Tera Yaar Hoon Main
Tera Yaar Hoon Main
Tera Yaar Hoon


They took a cute selfie.


Sajna De Rang Rangayiyan Ve
Sagna Diyan Sehnaiyan Ve
Dhol Wajange Yaar Nachange
Lakh Lakh Deo Badhaiyan Ve

Khusiyaan Ch Nachda Main Phiran
Hanjuaan Ton Bachda Main Phiran

When Namita forced Meera got ready for photoshoots.Namita and Meera posed together for photographs.


O Jaate Nahi Kahin Rishte Purane
Kisi Naye Ke Aa Jaane Se
Jaata Hoon Main Toh Mujhe Tu Jaane De
Kyun Pareshan Hai Merе Jaane Se


Toota Hai Toh Juda Hai Kyn
Meri Taraf Tu Muda Hai Kyu
Haq Nahi Tu Yеh Kahe Ki Yaar Ab Hum Na Rahe

They went to the beach and had a walk to relax.


Ek Teri Yaari Ka Hi
Saaton Janam Haqdaar Hoon Main
Tera Yaar Hoon Main

Tera Yaar Hoon Main
Tera Yaar Hoon Main

Tera Yaar Hoon Main(Female version-Sonu Ke Titu Ki Sweety).

Meera started improving.


Meera asked Namita:Nami...how is your love life going?On the phone you told me about a guy.

Namita blushed.

Namita:Yes.He is trying his level best to please my dad just for me.He can do anything for me.

Meera smiled.

Namita:I will show you his photograph.

Namita showed her the photograph of Sumeet.

Meera was shocked.

Meera:Is he your boyfriend?

Namita:Yes.

Meera:I can't believe it.

Namita:Why?

Meera:You are getting cheated like I got cheated.

Namita:What are you saying Meera?

Meera:He is my ex.

Namita was shocked:What?

Meera said painfully:Yes.He is my boyfriend.He promised to return before going to India.But he did not return.Infact he blocked my number too.It's been a year.Till now he has not contacted me.

Namita:You are misunderstanding him.I am sure.

Meera:There is no misunderstanding Nami.I can't be wrong in identifying the person who pushed me into depression.I have proof.

Meera took her phone and showed her the photograph with him.

Namita was shocked.

Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#37

Interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#38

Raghav is getting good food but he wants food cooked by his family.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#39

Until Pihu makes the decision to quit drinking too much, no one can help her.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#40

Is Meera right about Sumit? Does he have a lookalike?

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