My Beautiful Mistake S#2/pt13/pg41/ 4 march - Page 4

Originally posted by: Annupreet

Superb story. Geet eems innocent and Maya is spoiled brat. 

Thanks annu dear

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thanks for reposting! 

Congrats on season 2.

Captivating prologue

Maan was shattered after she broke his heart

he owes his success to her

i liked it

when u mention reposting

mostly , almost many friends forget about this story

thanks 

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

great character sketch

thanks for posting

most welcome dear 

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 1

Nice update... well written 

Maan is happy go lucky boy

well Geet has a tough life

Maya is a spoilt rich girl

hate that Maya makes Geet do her homework

so Geet's dad works for Maya's dad as a driver

sad that Maan's mom has brain tumour

she is waiting to deliver before taking treatment

of cos Geet helps her parents

Maya cannot so anything for herself

Jaanavi had a point

updaet soon

thanks for comment dear 

Originally posted by: coderlady

Who broke his heart? Was it Geet or Maya?

this is going reveal in further parts 

Originally posted by: coderlady

Maya is the rich princess, Geet is the poor kid. Maya is already spoiled and using Geet to do her work.

Maan is a sweet child. For now.

thank u dear

Maan is a sweet child. For now.

now little bit yes 

Originally posted by: babelicious

Very nice update. Maan was talking abt his beautiful mistake who became his inspiration. Hope they meet again. Past is sad, for Geet. Her story seems difficult. Maan, maya and Geet, a triangle story.. so eager for more

thank u dear

geet story is difficult - ya 

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Wonderful story looking forward for it maan ka dil kisne toda waiting

maan ke dil tutne me waqt hai abhi 

thanks dear 

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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congrats for new story

very interesting

who break maan's heart 

geet n maya are friends even though geet's father working as driver at maya's father 

mr. malhotra treat geet like maya but differences are there 

geet do all maya's school work 

hope maan not going to loose his mother as she is having brain tumor n pushing operation for coming baby   

difference humesha rahenga

thanks dear